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Thy, Primordial Saint Lord has reached here but I need to continue my path of Dao! Meet you again junior!
Author here and as the author, I will shamelessly give myself a five-star. Hehe, that aside, I had promised myself I will only give this book a review once it reaches the 50th chapter which we have happily reached. Now, unto the story This is my first time writing a Chinese novel and it's challenging because I research all the time. I will review my book in different sections. Writing Quality: I don't have a good writing quality as I edit my book a lot. I speak English but it's not my first language and it's hard because I tend to mix up some words together, so forgive me if you find some mistakes. Story Development : I can't say a lot for this because I tend to go with the flow which is something I enjoy. I like the thrill of wanting to know what the next chapter has in store for me. Character Design: I will give myself a five-star here because I believe I have crafted beautiful characters and let me say something, my favourite character is Xin Yi, the FL's brother. Don't ask me why Updating Stability: Two chapters daily, I give myself a pat on the back because I have been doing a good job so far (But if I can get magic castles, three chapters in addition to my normal two chapters daily) World Background: I have really done a good job here or so I think. Basically, just keep reading and see what Xin Yan and Li Qiang has in store for us. I'm also eager to know. Thank you for supporting me thus far.
im liking the story, I understand the story. I just hate how the story is being written.
Thank you for sharing your talent for storytelling :-) I hope your novel is offered free again lol I have enjoyed it so far π«Άπ»βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈπ«Άπ»
I have always been a fan of books like this, cut soap for me mama. Give this book a read and you will never forget it, I promise you. It might get edgy at the start but it just keeps getting better and better π₯°
This story have really great likeable characters. And I love the author's writing style. it deserves 5 stars
Iβm Definitely giving this book a Five Star,I was reading the chapter one but had to quickly come to rate itβ¦.I love this book so much,wellβ¦lemme continue reading hehe ππ₯°
wonderful plotline, the author deserves all the praises for creating a wonderful book, every single chapter got me hooked to this bookπππ
Excellent writing skills including characterization and personality quotients on every person in the story. Very intense paragraphs in several chapters, especially the first and tenth chapters;
I had my fill, can't wait to read more chapter. Author thank you for this bookπ―β€
First of all it's a book with a really good plot. Worth the read and I have high expectations regarding it. One of the good revenge stories. 1) writing quality The writer progresses as they continue to write and it's very evident moreover, the chaps which need improvement are getting edited so Kudos to the author. 2) story development The author knows what they are doing. It has a good pacing and honestly, characters are well developed so the story has a good progress. 3) updating stability A keyboard breaking author (β Β β βΉβ β½β βΉβ Β β ) 4) world background Since it is contemporary with a bit of fantasy it doesn't really have much to offer but, since it is based on modern world, the author has put lots of characters interaction. Love that. Over all, an improvement in writing quality and some minor grammar would make the author a solid 5/5 but since there are still room for improvement a 4/5 for now! (β Β β κβ α΄β κβ ) Hope to see more improvement and more progress!! All the best!
It delivered, I read chapter after chapter my butt at the edge of my seat. I was there everything was happening before my eyes. The betrayal and the rage Xin Yan felt, everything was beautifully captured. It would be a sin if I did not give it a 5-star rating.
Good day by dearest readers Thank you for your support throughout To all my privilege readers, if it is possible to read and unlock, so your coins won't expire And, I am very shameless to ask for gifts, but please, do gift me
Reveal Spoiler
Well, I was truly taken aback. That is, the first chapter caught me off guard. That ex-boyfriend really said "Let's wrap things up". Yeah, let's kill your girlfriend on Valentine's day, you romantic bastard. I don't usually read novels with female protagonists but this is a good read. Although the Chinese names can really make things confusing while reading. That's just my personal opinion. Overall, it's a great story with a promising protagonist. Future readers, you should definitely give it a read.
Three chapters in and I detect whimsiness in the female lead, which I love. Great job so far author.
I love that it starts with a twist; a boyfriend dropping his girl off a building isn't something you see everyday. It's an uncommon edge, readers won't see it coming, which is why it's unique. There is a character depth coming from the Xins, and the emotional detachment of Xin Yan's brother. After her rebirth, I admire her journey to step up in her business empire, revive her family, and reclaim what was lostβor in Yan's case, stolen. Xin Yan is a formidable MC. I'm eager to experience a second chance to right wrongs, and a path towards redemption and love through this Chinese heiress's eyes.
Liking it so far! Keep it up πππππππππππππππ
I love rebirth tropes, Cause the fl always comes back smarter and stronger, its also fun since theyβre always one step ahead of their enemies
Such a wholesome read. I loved the start so much. Yanyan is quite the mischievous character so look out for that lol. Beautiful grammar, no spelling errors. The book is a bit fast paced but that doesn't make it a bore at all! Love love love.
LOVE this novel! I got so into it that I didn't even realized I'd moved on to the next chapter already. I thought, "Wow this chapter is soooo long!" then I got to the next and thought "Huh?! Did I get here already?!" It gives me 49 Days vibes which is one of my favorite K-dramas so I'm absolutely loving it so far! I can't wait to read more!
We all love a good revenge story with a strong lead and likable side characters. Give it a read and enjoy a journey of vengeance, redemption, and personal growth!
Thy, Primordial Saint Lord has reached here but I need to continue my path of Dao! Meet you again junior!
Author here and as the author, I will shamelessly give myself a five-star. Hehe, that aside, I had promised myself I will only give this book a review once it reaches the 50th chapter which we have happily reached. Now, unto the story This is my first time writing a Chinese novel and it's challenging because I research all the time. I will review my book in different sections. Writing Quality: I don't have a good writing quality as I edit my book a lot. I speak English but it's not my first language and it's hard because I tend to mix up some words together, so forgive me if you find some mistakes. Story Development : I can't say a lot for this because I tend to go with the flow which is something I enjoy. I like the thrill of wanting to know what the next chapter has in store for me. Character Design: I will give myself a five-star here because I believe I have crafted beautiful characters and let me say something, my favourite character is Xin Yi, the FL's brother. Don't ask me why Updating Stability: Two chapters daily, I give myself a pat on the back because I have been doing a good job so far (But if I can get magic castles, three chapters in addition to my normal two chapters daily) World Background: I have really done a good job here or so I think. Basically, just keep reading and see what Xin Yan and Li Qiang has in store for us. I'm also eager to know. Thank you for supporting me thus far.
im liking the story, I understand the story. I just hate how the story is being written.
Thank you for sharing your talent for storytelling :-) I hope your novel is offered free again lol I have enjoyed it so far π«Άπ»βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈπ«Άπ»
I have always been a fan of books like this, cut soap for me mama. Give this book a read and you will never forget it, I promise you. It might get edgy at the start but it just keeps getting better and better π₯°
This story have really great likeable characters. And I love the author's writing style. it deserves 5 stars
Iβm Definitely giving this book a Five Star,I was reading the chapter one but had to quickly come to rate itβ¦.I love this book so much,wellβ¦lemme continue reading hehe ππ₯°
wonderful plotline, the author deserves all the praises for creating a wonderful book, every single chapter got me hooked to this bookπππ
Excellent writing skills including characterization and personality quotients on every person in the story. Very intense paragraphs in several chapters, especially the first and tenth chapters;
I had my fill, can't wait to read more chapter. Author thank you for this bookπ―β€
First of all it's a book with a really good plot. Worth the read and I have high expectations regarding it. One of the good revenge stories. 1) writing quality The writer progresses as they continue to write and it's very evident moreover, the chaps which need improvement are getting edited so Kudos to the author. 2) story development The author knows what they are doing. It has a good pacing and honestly, characters are well developed so the story has a good progress. 3) updating stability A keyboard breaking author (β Β β βΉβ β½β βΉβ Β β ) 4) world background Since it is contemporary with a bit of fantasy it doesn't really have much to offer but, since it is based on modern world, the author has put lots of characters interaction. Love that. Over all, an improvement in writing quality and some minor grammar would make the author a solid 5/5 but since there are still room for improvement a 4/5 for now! (β Β β κβ α΄β κβ ) Hope to see more improvement and more progress!! All the best!
It delivered, I read chapter after chapter my butt at the edge of my seat. I was there everything was happening before my eyes. The betrayal and the rage Xin Yan felt, everything was beautifully captured. It would be a sin if I did not give it a 5-star rating.
Good day by dearest readers Thank you for your support throughout To all my privilege readers, if it is possible to read and unlock, so your coins won't expire And, I am very shameless to ask for gifts, but please, do gift me
Reveal Spoiler Well, I was truly taken aback. That is, the first chapter caught me off guard. That ex-boyfriend really said "Let's wrap things up". Yeah, let's kill your girlfriend on Valentine's day, you romantic bastard. I don't usually read novels with female protagonists but this is a good read. Although the Chinese names can really make things confusing while reading. That's just my personal opinion. Overall, it's a great story with a promising protagonist. Future readers, you should definitely give it a read.
Three chapters in and I detect whimsiness in the female lead, which I love. Great job so far author.
I love that it starts with a twist; a boyfriend dropping his girl off a building isn't something you see everyday. It's an uncommon edge, readers won't see it coming, which is why it's unique. There is a character depth coming from the Xins, and the emotional detachment of Xin Yan's brother. After her rebirth, I admire her journey to step up in her business empire, revive her family, and reclaim what was lostβor in Yan's case, stolen. Xin Yan is a formidable MC. I'm eager to experience a second chance to right wrongs, and a path towards redemption and love through this Chinese heiress's eyes.
Liking it so far! Keep it up πππππππππππππππ
I love rebirth tropes, Cause the fl always comes back smarter and stronger, its also fun since theyβre always one step ahead of their enemies
Such a wholesome read. I loved the start so much. Yanyan is quite the mischievous character so look out for that lol. Beautiful grammar, no spelling errors. The book is a bit fast paced but that doesn't make it a bore at all! Love love love.
LOVE this novel! I got so into it that I didn't even realized I'd moved on to the next chapter already. I thought, "Wow this chapter is soooo long!" then I got to the next and thought "Huh?! Did I get here already?!" It gives me 49 Days vibes which is one of my favorite K-dramas so I'm absolutely loving it so far! I can't wait to read more!
We all love a good revenge story with a strong lead and likable side characters. Give it a read and enjoy a journey of vengeance, redemption, and personal growth!