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Has some hiccups in regards to things like redundancies and run-on sentences, ESPECIALLY in the first few chapters, but otherwise, this is a great fanfiction with fast updates to keep you engaged. Characters are written in compelling ways, and I really love the family dynamics. The story hasn't gotten into the "meat and potatoes" yet, but what it has given is gripping enough to make me want to invest time into following this story. 4.4*
This is rough to read. Not to bad of a story overall. For a twelve year old with adhd. The author is unfortunately someone young and doesn’t know how to put a mature mindset into his writing. Which is understandable but still it makes the novel hard to read with the MC being very immature and super childish along with all of the other characters. If your young you’ll like this story and everyone is best of friends.
Wait, is this the re-write of that one fic where MC became some kind of Lycan and had a thing with both Leah and Edythe? If so, definitely looking forward to it. Left us off at a damn cliffhanger.
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I think this might be the best twilight story I’ve seen so far on web-novel I’ve seen a lot on WEBNOVEL but nth like this I have hope for this book just thinking about if it’s worth putting my power stones into just incase author quits
Love it. Please don't drop it..... 🙏 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Author, everything is great with you. Don't abandon your readers; I can't stand unfinished fanfics anymore. I'm almost giving up on reading because of this. Your story is incredible! Just one thing: if you're going to do a harem, please make it make sense, hahaha.
The ADHD on this mc is very intense... I really love twilight fics, but I'd hard to read when the Mc can't focus on anything for more than 100 words :/
Has some hiccups in regards to things like redundancies and run-on sentences, ESPECIALLY in the first few chapters, but otherwise, this is a great fanfiction with fast updates to keep you engaged. Characters are written in compelling ways, and I really love the family dynamics. The story hasn't gotten into the "meat and potatoes" yet, but what it has given is gripping enough to make me want to invest time into following this story. 4.4*
This is rough to read. Not to bad of a story overall. For a twelve year old with adhd. The author is unfortunately someone young and doesn’t know how to put a mature mindset into his writing. Which is understandable but still it makes the novel hard to read with the MC being very immature and super childish along with all of the other characters. If your young you’ll like this story and everyone is best of friends.
Wait, is this the re-write of that one fic where MC became some kind of Lycan and had a thing with both Leah and Edythe? If so, definitely looking forward to it. Left us off at a damn cliffhanger.
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I think this might be the best twilight story I’ve seen so far on web-novel I’ve seen a lot on WEBNOVEL but nth like this I have hope for this book just thinking about if it’s worth putting my power stones into just incase author quits
Love it. Please don't drop it..... 🙏 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Author, everything is great with you. Don't abandon your readers; I can't stand unfinished fanfics anymore. I'm almost giving up on reading because of this. Your story is incredible! Just one thing: if you're going to do a harem, please make it make sense, hahaha.
The ADHD on this mc is very intense... I really love twilight fics, but I'd hard to read when the Mc can't focus on anything for more than 100 words :/