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This has a lot of potential. If the author doesn't abandon it in the future, this could be one of the best Naruto fanfics out there. It's been a while since I found a fic that wasn't about some stupid wish fulfillment. I had even given up on reading fanfics since there haven't been any good ones lately. But this one has a lot of potential. The pace of the story is very good, the relationship is nice, and the character isn't overly OP, though he has potential. Now we just have to hope the author continues.
will give it 5 stars but it has a stupid approach and not my personal favourite as the mc did not think but started by contacting Naruto and asking to befriend him and he is clan less and an orphan note that this 2 point is not what causes me to stop but this is what is 2 reason that cause the plan of approaching and befriending Naruto stupid, case closed.
5 star author review. If you have any questions feel free to ask and I'll reply to the best of my abilities. Before reading this fic, I recommend taking time to read the synopsis to clear anything up
This has a lot of potential. If the author doesn't abandon it in the future, this could be one of the best Naruto fanfics out there. It's been a while since I found a fic that wasn't about some stupid wish fulfillment. I had even given up on reading fanfics since there haven't been any good ones lately. But this one has a lot of potential. The pace of the story is very good, the relationship is nice, and the character isn't overly OP, though he has potential. Now we just have to hope the author continues.
will give it 5 stars but it has a stupid approach and not my personal favourite as the mc did not think but started by contacting Naruto and asking to befriend him and he is clan less and an orphan note that this 2 point is not what causes me to stop but this is what is 2 reason that cause the plan of approaching and befriending Naruto stupid, case closed.
5 star author review. If you have any questions feel free to ask and I'll reply to the best of my abilities. Before reading this fic, I recommend taking time to read the synopsis to clear anything up