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Been reading this story since ch 20 till 200. I've got to say...It's Perfect. Promise is probably one of the few fate fic protag that make us relate the most. He start off weak yet he has done deeds greater than any hero. Want more. Need more. Thanks for gifting us this story no, this legend.
This is an amazing read. The story revolves around Promise, our mc, who tries his hardest to become the strongest Servent. He does this by creating legends about himself by interacting with other gods and heros. Then he “plans” to die a big dramatic death. There is a hint at harem? But personally don’t think that’s gonna happen. No segs, at least not yet. Characters are based of myths/legends and the Fate series but have an original twist to them so they feel unique. Story setting is Ancient Greek I think and the story pacing is quite good. In short you should definitely read this if you’re interested in Fate or mythology and support the author too.
It's not type moon its only age of gods change the title u baited a lot of people.
soy latino asi que usar traductor si no me entiende : excelente historia lo que puedo decir que me encontrado en web novel el noble phantasm no deberian ser los cuandros si no el libro de venganzas de promise Np anti mundo capacidad de llamar a todos heroes y dioses escritos en el en su prime se toma en cuenta muchas cosas
Good day dear viewer! I would like to say that this fiction is really, really good. Perhaps the only problem is that the Greek Gods are mellow and do not act like they would in the original Ancient Greek Myths
HELLO AUTHOR! YOUR WORK IS GOOD, NO EXCELLENT BUT PLEASE PRIORITIES THE QUALITY OVER THE QUANTITY OF YOUR UPLOADING. THANK YOU
Honestly one of the best novels I've read, seriously. Only negative is the MC name lol, everything else is great. I know you translated and didnt write it, but have to say you have done such an amazing job to the point that if I didnt even know it was a translated work until I tried to look into your bio.
Weird.Just weird. 178 chapters waiting for him to die and ascend to a new world or something.Not to mention the fact this feels like every character is bending over for him which I dislike.Thirdly the beginning of the story was so amazing but this is really like really really dragged the hell out.Im not going to lie I thought this would be a cooler story but it's just a very long death date which should've ended 79 chapters ago.I really am not understand what else u can possibly write about.How many more chapters until bro dies. The story development is so weird as well.The whole premise of the story was set around him dying but then he randomly in such a short time frame went from an F level spirit to a B and A level spirit.When I say short I'm saying like 30 chapters.His goal was to be an S class and die.If he can jump from F to B and A in less than 30 chapters why is it taking a whole 150 more chapters for an S class.He litteraly wants to die and I thought this was a world jumping or Era jumping type of fanfic by the way I was going.Then 40 chapters went by...50 went by...80...90..169..He still isn't deaf what the hell is this bro.?If ur going to drag the story just say that cause I want my time back.
I have not enjoyed a fanfiction as much as i am enjoying this one thanks for translating this
The plot is very slow, maybe there are no events from the Fate series, it's just the Fate world disguised as the Greek era.[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
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Me gusta mucho el libro y, a pesar de que ya me leí parte de la obra original, no me canso de releer la historia aquí. La traducción es muy buena y me ayuda a comprender mejor algunas cosas que antes no entendía
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Bellissimo............................................................................................................................................................................
By far the best and funniest fanfic of fate i have ever read, i curse you to continue writing this masterpiece even after it's end, in short please dont stop the story when he finally returns home.
Dude great fan fiction Just correct chapter 122 first heroic painting is a duplicate of chapter 121
Daily uploads plus really good story? Straight to favorites. Hope they keep up with the story there's too few fate fanfics as good as this one that haven't been put on hiatus.
Thank you so much for translating this~! I didn't expect for this stort to be so great since it's been stuck in my library without even reading a chapter. All I can say is, Thank you~!
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The MC is a Transmigator in Ancient Greece. He is the weakest cuz he is a modern man in Ancient Greece when everyone is basically a superhuman. But for his glorious death he is going to fights all odds to sit on the Throne of Heroes.
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Encontré está gran historia gracias a está traducción. Ya me leí el libro en el link que dejó en la descripción, pero ya no se actualiza ahí y el otro link es de paga. Entonces solo puedo releer la historia hasta que alcance el libro en el link
Epico, la risa no para, y aunque la historia parece ser en la época moderna, es una trampa, pues toda la historia transcurre en la era de los dioses, mc conoce a todos los héroes y dioses de la época mientras crea su leyenda, además de atrapar algunos héroes para que lo acompañen al argo, mc no es un héroe de combate, y todo el mundo se apiada de su debilidad, pero también es una trampa, aunque el mc no puede ganarle en combate ni en magia a ningún héroe decente, solo los dioses pueden sobrevivir cerca, pues incluso atalanta y medea casi mueren si hecate y Artemisa no las rescatarán, los medios del mc hace que sea extremadamente peligroso para cualquier mortal, si tuviera que darle una clase, sería caster, muy similar a Shakespeare, capaz de eliminar a sus oponentes sin siquiera luchar, pero el mc todavía no se da cuenta de esto, la historia es muy divertida, especialmente el objetivo del mc para no casarse, pero no se dió cuenta de que, gracias a la bendición de Hera que el mismo se esforzó en conseguir, esta condenado a casarse en algun momento, enamorando descuidada mente a mortales y diosas al azar, todo mientras le declara al cielo que no tiene intencion de casarse, juramento que solo divierte a los dioses capaces de ver el futuro, la historia es extremadamente divertida, la recomiendo seriamente.
super funny story. I can't wait for him to finally be summoned at chaldea. it'd so fun if Promise summoned himself.
I didn't read the find print and suffered greatly for it. This really does seem to only revolve around the age of gods, the character interactions are nice and funny but everything lacks suspense so your mostly just along for the ride. it's good though if you just want to relax and get a hit of the Fate and Greek mythos at the same time.
First of all, this review will strictly be about the novel itself, ignoring stuff like paid chapters and Patreon. I'm caught up on chapters (chapter 123 at the time of writing this), and it's a top 3 fate fic for me. It is a translation, but it doesn't come off nearly as much as most others, and its readable. It's a fresh take on fate, with an MC with little to no personal power, but using his other skills to become a legend. The story mainly focusses on the MC, gods, and a small number of heroes. The mc's goal is to die the greatest legend of all, and it's pretty funny at some moments. The mc using Paintings, Music, and his own personality to earn the favor of many and it works. It's a new take that I really like and something I haven't seen before. it takes place in ancient Greece, and it makes use of lot a lot of different legends. Overall, would definitely give it a shot if it seems interesting.
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Great and intriguing story. The characters are well developed and are introduced with, at the very least, a pretty nice exposition of their role in history and Greek mythology. The story and the main character both possess comedic timing and some pretty nice jokes(in my opinion at least) that really makes one want to read more and eases the reading experience. It does need saying that not everything in this story is perfect: The timeline may be a bit messed up in regards to some events and the spelling has certain errors that seem to persist but they are honestly a non-issue. Overall, an immensely enjoyable reading experience.
It's a good story, with nice character development, although MC has BIG plot armor and sometimes gets abilities that are hard to figure out where he got them from (e.g. he suddenly had an observation haki-like moment when he was completing Trial of Demeter), the motivation, fear is realistic. Just is too much of a nice guy but it's understandable (would you try to beat up Zeus, Artemis, etc. with those flimsy arms)
Uh! As I've always done, I'll give five stars to the fanfic. Although I've already written in the synopsis, I'll still say..this is just a translation. As for the story, tbh although I didn't like it too much but it was still good. It's just the theme matches another fanfic with the same name and that one is quite interesting.. Also, although I might be wrong but I've read a similar story.. Spoiler: In which the Mc give tribute to the gods...I don't know which one is the copy of which... Well putting aside these useless things.. It's a readable fanfic and I think you guys should give it a try...
Reveal Spoiler Been reading this story since ch 20 till 200. I've got to say...It's Perfect. Promise is probably one of the few fate fic protag that make us relate the most. He start off weak yet he has done deeds greater than any hero. Want more. Need more. Thanks for gifting us this story no, this legend.
This is an amazing read. The story revolves around Promise, our mc, who tries his hardest to become the strongest Servent. He does this by creating legends about himself by interacting with other gods and heros. Then he “plans” to die a big dramatic death. There is a hint at harem? But personally don’t think that’s gonna happen. No segs, at least not yet. Characters are based of myths/legends and the Fate series but have an original twist to them so they feel unique. Story setting is Ancient Greek I think and the story pacing is quite good. In short you should definitely read this if you’re interested in Fate or mythology and support the author too.
It's not type moon its only age of gods change the title u baited a lot of people.
soy latino asi que usar traductor si no me entiende : excelente historia lo que puedo decir que me encontrado en web novel el noble phantasm no deberian ser los cuandros si no el libro de venganzas de promise Np anti mundo capacidad de llamar a todos heroes y dioses escritos en el en su prime se toma en cuenta muchas cosas
Good day dear viewer! I would like to say that this fiction is really, really good. Perhaps the only problem is that the Greek Gods are mellow and do not act like they would in the original Ancient Greek Myths
HELLO AUTHOR! YOUR WORK IS GOOD, NO EXCELLENT BUT PLEASE PRIORITIES THE QUALITY OVER THE QUANTITY OF YOUR UPLOADING. THANK YOU
Honestly one of the best novels I've read, seriously. Only negative is the MC name lol, everything else is great. I know you translated and didnt write it, but have to say you have done such an amazing job to the point that if I didnt even know it was a translated work until I tried to look into your bio.
Weird.Just weird. 178 chapters waiting for him to die and ascend to a new world or something.Not to mention the fact this feels like every character is bending over for him which I dislike.Thirdly the beginning of the story was so amazing but this is really like really really dragged the hell out.Im not going to lie I thought this would be a cooler story but it's just a very long death date which should've ended 79 chapters ago.I really am not understand what else u can possibly write about.How many more chapters until bro dies. The story development is so weird as well.The whole premise of the story was set around him dying but then he randomly in such a short time frame went from an F level spirit to a B and A level spirit.When I say short I'm saying like 30 chapters.His goal was to be an S class and die.If he can jump from F to B and A in less than 30 chapters why is it taking a whole 150 more chapters for an S class.He litteraly wants to die and I thought this was a world jumping or Era jumping type of fanfic by the way I was going.Then 40 chapters went by...50 went by...80...90..169..He still isn't deaf what the hell is this bro.?If ur going to drag the story just say that cause I want my time back.
I have not enjoyed a fanfiction as much as i am enjoying this one thanks for translating this
The plot is very slow, maybe there are no events from the Fate series, it's just the Fate world disguised as the Greek era.[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Reveal Spoiler Me gusta mucho el libro y, a pesar de que ya me leí parte de la obra original, no me canso de releer la historia aquí. La traducción es muy buena y me ayuda a comprender mejor algunas cosas que antes no entendía
Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo Lindo
Bellissimo............................................................................................................................................................................
By far the best and funniest fanfic of fate i have ever read, i curse you to continue writing this masterpiece even after it's end, in short please dont stop the story when he finally returns home.
Dude great fan fiction Just correct chapter 122 first heroic painting is a duplicate of chapter 121
Daily uploads plus really good story? Straight to favorites. Hope they keep up with the story there's too few fate fanfics as good as this one that haven't been put on hiatus.
Thank you so much for translating this~! I didn't expect for this stort to be so great since it's been stuck in my library without even reading a chapter. All I can say is, Thank you~!
Reveal Spoiler The MC is a Transmigator in Ancient Greece. He is the weakest cuz he is a modern man in Ancient Greece when everyone is basically a superhuman. But for his glorious death he is going to fights all odds to sit on the Throne of Heroes.
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Encontré está gran historia gracias a está traducción. Ya me leí el libro en el link que dejó en la descripción, pero ya no se actualiza ahí y el otro link es de paga. Entonces solo puedo releer la historia hasta que alcance el libro en el link
Epico, la risa no para, y aunque la historia parece ser en la época moderna, es una trampa, pues toda la historia transcurre en la era de los dioses, mc conoce a todos los héroes y dioses de la época mientras crea su leyenda, además de atrapar algunos héroes para que lo acompañen al argo, mc no es un héroe de combate, y todo el mundo se apiada de su debilidad, pero también es una trampa, aunque el mc no puede ganarle en combate ni en magia a ningún héroe decente, solo los dioses pueden sobrevivir cerca, pues incluso atalanta y medea casi mueren si hecate y Artemisa no las rescatarán, los medios del mc hace que sea extremadamente peligroso para cualquier mortal, si tuviera que darle una clase, sería caster, muy similar a Shakespeare, capaz de eliminar a sus oponentes sin siquiera luchar, pero el mc todavía no se da cuenta de esto, la historia es muy divertida, especialmente el objetivo del mc para no casarse, pero no se dió cuenta de que, gracias a la bendición de Hera que el mismo se esforzó en conseguir, esta condenado a casarse en algun momento, enamorando descuidada mente a mortales y diosas al azar, todo mientras le declara al cielo que no tiene intencion de casarse, juramento que solo divierte a los dioses capaces de ver el futuro, la historia es extremadamente divertida, la recomiendo seriamente.
super funny story. I can't wait for him to finally be summoned at chaldea. it'd so fun if Promise summoned himself.
I didn't read the find print and suffered greatly for it. This really does seem to only revolve around the age of gods, the character interactions are nice and funny but everything lacks suspense so your mostly just along for the ride. it's good though if you just want to relax and get a hit of the Fate and Greek mythos at the same time.
First of all, this review will strictly be about the novel itself, ignoring stuff like paid chapters and Patreon. I'm caught up on chapters (chapter 123 at the time of writing this), and it's a top 3 fate fic for me. It is a translation, but it doesn't come off nearly as much as most others, and its readable. It's a fresh take on fate, with an MC with little to no personal power, but using his other skills to become a legend. The story mainly focusses on the MC, gods, and a small number of heroes. The mc's goal is to die the greatest legend of all, and it's pretty funny at some moments. The mc using Paintings, Music, and his own personality to earn the favor of many and it works. It's a new take that I really like and something I haven't seen before. it takes place in ancient Greece, and it makes use of lot a lot of different legends. Overall, would definitely give it a shot if it seems interesting.
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Great and intriguing story. The characters are well developed and are introduced with, at the very least, a pretty nice exposition of their role in history and Greek mythology. The story and the main character both possess comedic timing and some pretty nice jokes(in my opinion at least) that really makes one want to read more and eases the reading experience. It does need saying that not everything in this story is perfect: The timeline may be a bit messed up in regards to some events and the spelling has certain errors that seem to persist but they are honestly a non-issue. Overall, an immensely enjoyable reading experience.
It's a good story, with nice character development, although MC has BIG plot armor and sometimes gets abilities that are hard to figure out where he got them from (e.g. he suddenly had an observation haki-like moment when he was completing Trial of Demeter), the motivation, fear is realistic. Just is too much of a nice guy but it's understandable (would you try to beat up Zeus, Artemis, etc. with those flimsy arms)
Uh! As I've always done, I'll give five stars to the fanfic. Although I've already written in the synopsis, I'll still say..this is just a translation. As for the story, tbh although I didn't like it too much but it was still good. It's just the theme matches another fanfic with the same name and that one is quite interesting.. Also, although I might be wrong but I've read a similar story.. Spoiler: In which the Mc give tribute to the gods...I don't know which one is the copy of which... Well putting aside these useless things.. It's a readable fanfic and I think you guys should give it a try...
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