DXD : Ray Gremory

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Daoist890597

These paragraphs genuinely impress me. "Because of where I am today, for a brief second, I thought of what would happen to the world and history if I just shot child Issei with a bolt of Demonic Power, and realized I could never really do such a cruel thing. I might be a Devil, but I am kind at heart. I will just let Issei live his life. I felt horrible having thoughts of either killing or recruiting him. Having knowledge of my world is very terrifying to even make me want to plot against a 3.5 year old child. Those reincarnation and transmigration protagonists are twisted individuals now that I think about it. And I hope I never become corrupted with thoughts of manipulating others. But sadly, it might happen without me realizing it, sigh." This is a true fact that everyone tends to overlook! Reincarnated protagonists in fanfiction, particularly in the DxD fandom, ALWAYS exhibit traits of being hypocrisy, twisted and evil. It seems like I come across them every day in almost every DxD fanfic I read

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PENUNGGUNOVELEMAS

Too slow chapter and too slow paced story i don't recommended it for people who don't like story too much detailed like how he is from born, how the character got together, and too many monologue this story is absolute unbearable HECK IN CHAPTER 20s He still in 8-10s Age years Old HOW LONG DO I NEED TO WAIT FOR HE REACH ADULTHOOD? 100s Chapter?

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AgniFaradel

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Tiachanfmc

I think, I am see this story some months ago with this picture and similar plot that Mc replace Rias ..............................................................

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applo43

ok, let's see what happens in this story.....

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FireFlames

Fantastic fanfic, but had to drop this book, Reason: communications… because their talks as robots, telling EACH specific information. don’t give emotions from their chats.

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wanderer12

just thinking what if he accidentally goes to the canon dxd and meet Rias

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Tyusan

Muito bom, mas tem espaço para melhoras. ...... ...... ....... ....... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ....... ........ ...... ...... ...... ......

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Rygurd

for me, I got interested in DxD world and the MC replaced Rias. It's a new thing for me. Even though the MC got the knowledge of OG DxD he doesn't try to bashed Issei just like any other DxD fanfic, That's a good one for me. The downside are, this is just too slow-paced, and the cliffhanger in every chapter is just so bad. one of the example is, when some character want to say something, author just put an end to that chapter. that's not how you end a chapter, at least let them finish what they said. Not only that, in a chapter when you gonna change the setting of place or time, at least used some symbol to differintiate it, like "------" or "###" or anything else. I think that's all about my personal opinion. Thanks, and good luck author.

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Slicknation

Will there be a update for the next chapter?

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Cevahir_Gezer

It's an article that doesn't give an original feeling. One doesn't feel any emotion while reading it, it's as if it's very dry. You have some good ideas, I hope you can write better in the future.

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RoneGreninja

.......................................................Pretty good so far keep it up........................................................

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Sergio_Navarrete

It's a good start. Keep it up!