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This story is about someone who is OP at the start of the story and has been in the Naruto World for two unwritten years. The writing quality is terrible. There are zero spaces between paragraphs making each chapter only one paragraph. So far, the author/translator seems to only translate but not edit their story. The story itself seems to be written hastily because there are very little details about the story, it’s more just like a fast paced essay. Really, the biggest caveat is the lack of spaces between paragraphs. It’s the hardest story I have ever tried to read.
This story is about someone who is OP at the start of the story and has been in the Naruto World for two unwritten years. The writing quality is terrible. There are zero spaces between paragraphs making each chapter only one paragraph. So far, the author/translator seems to only translate but not edit their story. The story itself seems to be written hastily because there are very little details about the story, it’s more just like a fast paced essay. Really, the biggest caveat is the lack of spaces between paragraphs. It’s the hardest story I have ever tried to read.