Return Of The Rejected Luna

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DaoistBhfwEf

i enjoy this novel. It is a gold . .. . . . . .

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DaoistaMmS2L

I’ve just started reading but the story has kept my attention. Proud dumb Alpha rejects mates for being seemingly weak, another stronger and smarter Alpha accepts her without question and is gentle. I like the setup enough to keep reading. Looking forward to her getting strong and the relationship build. Thanks for the story.

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Maddy_9742

It really has potential for a new work, I hope it doesn't flop.

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Shadow_Lord_07

good novel , its very interesting and its keep you attached

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jyuni_hass

from 10 minutes reading it's okay so far, no major writing error. The storyline is quite common for starting chapters.

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JenniJeon

The book is very engaging with good storyline.

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Aniagboso_Martins

Nice work of art. A recommended read for everyone 👌🔥

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Stela_Bloom

I'm here for the event. I have only read the beginning chapters. I think you can add some more details in the chapters like the first chapter was alright until the rejection. the rejection could be more detailed and the emotions could be highlighted. then the meeting was okay but it just felt a little flat. there was less tension after the rejection. After that, it felt like everything happened in a second. there could be more details, so that the atmosphere felt more tense which would feel more rewarding when she was rescued. the emotions could be more nuanced. From a plot point of view, there is potential.

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Poison_Ivy_1989

Awesome, this book is pretty interesting so far.

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Hashwalth

Nice work, I'm enjoying every bit of this.

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Camal_Izigo

Ok so this is good and i totaly read this and not because i got a free pass.

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rizzoliisles_66

Not bad. I kind of like it. Keep it up, author- san

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Jack_Alcala

What a interesting story, it get me another good novel

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Vishal_Parmar_0641

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Vivaci0us

Books about redemption or rediscovery are usually mood lifting . Having a man who is everything is gold. Hope they stick together till the end. Thanks for the good book.

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Sanjeev_Gupta_3776

It is very interesting and exciting . I really enjoyed it

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shima_kima

This is a nove and it has chapters and i want a fp

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Suri_Silvestre34

Es una buena historia. Aunque el comienzo es similar a otras novelas, le da un giro interesante. La recomiendo

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DaoistW6SPnM

The story so far is really interesting, I'm already hooked.

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sara_sara_8174

lecture très agréable hate de connaître la suite des événements