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Was First exited for a new basketball novel, started reading it… The story development itself isn’t that bad. But I assume English isn’t the authors 1st maybe not even 2nd language… so it’s quite a difficult read. Author should look for an editor and I then, maybe this novel could become something. To reiterate this is just an objective critique, am not trying to antagonize the author, I appreciate his effort it takes much to write a novel…
Author here![img=proud][img=proud] I really can't believe the time has come to write a novel, with a 'system' and 'slice of life' theme. This is the first time I've ventured into a system novel, as I had no confidence in my abilities before. I hope you will enjoy this novel and don't hesitate to give me any suggestions or criticism if necessary. I would really appreciate your judgement. Thanks and Enjoy it! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Was First exited for a new basketball novel, started reading it… The story development itself isn’t that bad. But I assume English isn’t the authors 1st maybe not even 2nd language… so it’s quite a difficult read. Author should look for an editor and I then, maybe this novel could become something. To reiterate this is just an objective critique, am not trying to antagonize the author, I appreciate his effort it takes much to write a novel…
Author here![img=proud][img=proud] I really can't believe the time has come to write a novel, with a 'system' and 'slice of life' theme. This is the first time I've ventured into a system novel, as I had no confidence in my abilities before. I hope you will enjoy this novel and don't hesitate to give me any suggestions or criticism if necessary. I would really appreciate your judgement. Thanks and Enjoy it! [img=recommend][img=recommend]