One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock

LV 15

Requien

I gonna be honest the Story is Bad, it has such an Chinese vibe of One piece that u read out of it, with the young Master Element in it and co. The Figures like Hancock and Kizaru etc. are not themself. I recommend not to waste time on this FF after reading like some chapter ist gets pretty boring

LV 5

Uchicha_Remant

I am willing to be shameless and give myself good review

LV 15

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR

hey this is my only review or comment ill make on this ff now since I won't be reading it. It was great for a while, his abilities were cool and was looking forwardto what was next, I would say more but I won't cause I was disappointed with yuri in the harem, I even asked the author if there were any before reading it he said no, usually i take it like a grain of salt read abit before i personally see it or not. Sadly this was the case about chapter 50-52, just would've been great to be told so I didn't need to read it 😕

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

The protagonist is a dragon, that is, the privileged and ruling class of that world (one piece). I like that the protagonist is not Luffy's pet, and that from the beginning Boa Hancock is saved by the protagonist without putting her status at risk. It is a Chinese novel but the story is not bad, it could be better if the paragraphs that are obviously Chinese are edited.

LV 3

Kono_Timoda

Imma be real with you, it is another trashy translation. but, why I like it is because the Chinese author isn't just making a wish fulfillment story, he's actually trying to flesh out the characters and make a well developed story with proper characters. My one problem is that I would love if the translator could make the story easier to read with a more natural English based syntax (which I can see the TL is getting better at) but I'm not complaining because we have lemons muhahaha Ch30 btw

LV 13

KeazL_

RAW : 航海：开局天龙人，拿下汉库克 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

LV 13

GodOfReader

I'mma be honest, The author is Pedophile, so are the reader of his in patreon. This FF contain alot of pornography involving a children. Please report this shit.

LV 7

Melshan

Completely pathetic and disappointing, the author/translator has to put the tag Yuri, for people who hate Yuri like me, don't waste your time, Yuri is NTR.

LV 14

unknown_daoist

Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author

LV 14

1stDrunkenImmortal

Just a translation with a bad story.

LV 4

PRIMORDIAL_09

FINALLY! we getting a celestial dragon as a mc!!

LV 3

Markushnia

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LV 13

DaoistgLZGKT

Great fanfic so far. Author doing a pretty good translation and the story is also smooth, hopefully it continue so.

I love MC I love the development of his character from weak to world dominating. The system was great and the other worlds were good Also the female characters were mostly good.

LV 4

Master_Dao

Good Fanfiction One Piece. This is the first time i read a fanfic with a MC Celestial Dragon and for the moment, it's awesome.

LV 4

Author_for_fun

The Mc is just plain unlikable, and the constant gay undertones when he's binding men is annoying and honestly not funny, especially when it's constantly repeated. Also, I don't know why there's a romance tag considering that, so far, none of the girls he's with love him, Hancock has given up and basically accepted her fate but she seems not to enjoy his advances and was relieved when he ignored her. And the other is an undercover agent no need to explain.

LV 11

BrandPatriarch

not for everybody, slice of lemons, not many fights, and MC will be very OP sinse he is a tenryuubito with a system. still room for some charater develop tho, like MC gain power from system, but it does not increase his will (haki), or give him fighting exp, hope he will work for thouse

LV 1

Zakfiel_03

This is cool, the truth is that the proposal sounds interesting.............................................................................................

LV 1

eduardo_quintero

Sensacional y muy pero muy pero muy bueno espero por favor que lo continuas Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias

LV 4

New_to_you

I've read every chapter and all I can say is that this fic went to shit real fast, the MCs power is really cool and has a lot of applications, at first he focused on it's development but as the story went on the story devolved into nothing but r18 chapters, the author can't bear the thought to stop thinking with his dick for a while to actually write a normal chapter, this story isn't going anywhere and you should lower your expectations of it drastically or you will be disappointed. In summary, it's terrible, don't even read it.