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Give the author a chance, he is new, do not start tearing him apart. He's obviously new, even those with experience in the field make mistakes
okay this.... could have been an awesome story. The setup was great the writting was decent and the ATG world has alot of stuff u can play with. But the big problem is something that has not been fixed and im starting to think wont be and it got to a point where i didnt care if it was. The start of a story sets the tone of the whole thing. Draws in the readers makes them love or root for the mc or laugh with them. This stoy made me intruged then excited for the mc. Then, he made me annoyed at his monologing. Cringe at his childlike behavior as he was supposed to be a college student when he died(i think) and is in a 16 year old body, so why is he acting 10. Then, it made me almost explode with anger at his naive thinking about not killing animals to eat them. But i kept giving the author leeway cause he said hes gonna turn it around. The last straw was when he saw a pretty girl for the first time and immediately acted like a idiot. On the first encounter with a main (and possibly important) character, and i think it was supposed to be played as funny ..... i gave the mc chances to realize where he is that even if he has cheats he should treat this world like a dangerous place and have some form serousness but hes treating these characters like they are dolls to play with not real people. And he sees the world as a playground. I love op characters but this guys seems more like a joke then anything else.
No la recomiendo el mc es un cliche viviente al principio es una persona que se deja dominar por su poder luego cambia a alguien tan humilde para regalar cristal veteado púrpura y píldoras de nivel emperador además de construir una formación para retener ataques de nivel soberano a cambio de que? De que dejen en paz a xia qinyue el mc literal se deja pisotear solo porque su mami lo crío para ser un beta
Okay story is vastly diffrent than i thought, Mc is overpowerd with no character development and an cringe personality, The romance is forced was hoping for something other than "i will marry you" as there first meeting and like i also mc character is very hard to like i get annoyed on his character, The writting also seems force like no emotions to it. Updates are great He describes the character over exagerated and story seems like an slice of life becausw he's op right away no start nada and romance is forced, Would highly not recommend.
brooooo don’t do this. it was going so well. Now he looks like a greenboy with no brains. Just goes and proposes to Xia. Begging for her hand like that… it’s demeaning . He’s the one with power girls should be coming to him not the other way around and its a cutthroat cultivation world he can’t afford to be naïve because he read a comic in his past life
I'll wait for the continuation............................................................................................................................................................................................
try to keep moderate not too op let him fight only use shadows when exterminating sects and clans and try change heroine fate no ntr on little aunt
Mano a sua história é boa só falta mais capítulos e os capítulos tem que ser maiores também tem que aumentar a contagem de palavras mas ainda assim é uma boa história bem criativa 🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍
Очень интересно, но хотелось чтобы главы выходили чаще. Спасибо автору за такой интересный фанфик)).[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love to read fanfictions. I had always wanted a fanfiction like this where the mc had the power of shadow monarch and lives up to the expectations of the readers. I promise you guys, this will be a hell of good novel. The plots that I have planned for the future are never found in any of the fanfics I have read and mind you I have been reading them for around 3-4 years. So, support me and give me 5 star ratings
Give the author a chance, he is new, do not start tearing him apart. He's obviously new, even those with experience in the field make mistakes
okay this.... could have been an awesome story. The setup was great the writting was decent and the ATG world has alot of stuff u can play with. But the big problem is something that has not been fixed and im starting to think wont be and it got to a point where i didnt care if it was. The start of a story sets the tone of the whole thing. Draws in the readers makes them love or root for the mc or laugh with them. This stoy made me intruged then excited for the mc. Then, he made me annoyed at his monologing. Cringe at his childlike behavior as he was supposed to be a college student when he died(i think) and is in a 16 year old body, so why is he acting 10. Then, it made me almost explode with anger at his naive thinking about not killing animals to eat them. But i kept giving the author leeway cause he said hes gonna turn it around. The last straw was when he saw a pretty girl for the first time and immediately acted like a idiot. On the first encounter with a main (and possibly important) character, and i think it was supposed to be played as funny ..... i gave the mc chances to realize where he is that even if he has cheats he should treat this world like a dangerous place and have some form serousness but hes treating these characters like they are dolls to play with not real people. And he sees the world as a playground. I love op characters but this guys seems more like a joke then anything else.
No la recomiendo el mc es un cliche viviente al principio es una persona que se deja dominar por su poder luego cambia a alguien tan humilde para regalar cristal veteado púrpura y píldoras de nivel emperador además de construir una formación para retener ataques de nivel soberano a cambio de que? De que dejen en paz a xia qinyue el mc literal se deja pisotear solo porque su mami lo crío para ser un beta
Okay story is vastly diffrent than i thought, Mc is overpowerd with no character development and an cringe personality, The romance is forced was hoping for something other than "i will marry you" as there first meeting and like i also mc character is very hard to like i get annoyed on his character, The writting also seems force like no emotions to it. Updates are great He describes the character over exagerated and story seems like an slice of life becausw he's op right away no start nada and romance is forced, Would highly not recommend.
brooooo don’t do this. it was going so well. Now he looks like a greenboy with no brains. Just goes and proposes to Xia. Begging for her hand like that… it’s demeaning . He’s the one with power girls should be coming to him not the other way around and its a cutthroat cultivation world he can’t afford to be naïve because he read a comic in his past life
I'll wait for the continuation............................................................................................................................................................................................
try to keep moderate not too op let him fight only use shadows when exterminating sects and clans and try change heroine fate no ntr on little aunt
Mano a sua história é boa só falta mais capítulos e os capítulos tem que ser maiores também tem que aumentar a contagem de palavras mas ainda assim é uma boa história bem criativa 🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍
Очень интересно, но хотелось чтобы главы выходили чаще. Спасибо автору за такой интересный фанфик)).[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love to read fanfictions. I had always wanted a fanfiction like this where the mc had the power of shadow monarch and lives up to the expectations of the readers. I promise you guys, this will be a hell of good novel. The plots that I have planned for the future are never found in any of the fanfics I have read and mind you I have been reading them for around 3-4 years. So, support me and give me 5 star ratings