Reviews of Naruto: Senmei Asahi by RroY - Webnovel

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EroDaGe

okay i sacrificed for you guys, i read the mtl upto 220, it became garbage after he got sage mode. the story goes like this, we talk, okay tíme to go sage mode xDD enemy dead everone applause. butterfly effect doesnt exist in this story the plot continues same as canon XDD. btw my 5 stars review is for the translator not for the story.

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Blurb12

Story is just overall very mid. U don’t really get attached to anyone and Mc is super distant.

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Dragon_CB97

I really really like it ❤️ I wish that author doesn't lose inspiration and continue writing^•^

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therealet

4/2/5/5/5 A hopeful review. As it stands, there's not much content in this story to accurately judge, but with the way it's progressing I could absolutely see myself placing this fanfiction in my category of favorites. The setting is perfect, set just after the 2nd ninja war, with the protagonist being in the same year as Team Minato. The protagonist Asahi is a little cold/stoic due to the seriousness of his situation (having been placed just before the 3rd war), but he can sometimes let out his more fun side when he gets worked up, this makes for a compelling character to follow and one that's easy to insert/immerse yourself with. The translation is a bit stiff and hard to follow at times but it's more than passable. My hope for this series dwindles a bit when I see how the translator at one point just left this series sitting without updates for a month, so I'm afraid I have to take away several stars there.

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Gamer_Tricker

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Runawayy_

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RroY
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I'm gonna rate it 5 stars first. You guys do share your views after some chapters. Looking forward to it.

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EroDaGe

okay i sacrificed for you guys, i read the mtl upto 220, it became garbage after he got sage mode. the story goes like this, we talk, okay tíme to go sage mode xDD enemy dead everone applause. butterfly effect doesnt exist in this story the plot continues same as canon XDD. btw my 5 stars review is for the translator not for the story.

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Blurb12

Story is just overall very mid. U don’t really get attached to anyone and Mc is super distant.

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Dragon_CB97

I really really like it ❤️ I wish that author doesn't lose inspiration and continue writing^•^

3mth
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therealet

4/2/5/5/5 A hopeful review. As it stands, there's not much content in this story to accurately judge, but with the way it's progressing I could absolutely see myself placing this fanfiction in my category of favorites. The setting is perfect, set just after the 2nd ninja war, with the protagonist being in the same year as Team Minato. The protagonist Asahi is a little cold/stoic due to the seriousness of his situation (having been placed just before the 3rd war), but he can sometimes let out his more fun side when he gets worked up, this makes for a compelling character to follow and one that's easy to insert/immerse yourself with. The translation is a bit stiff and hard to follow at times but it's more than passable. My hope for this series dwindles a bit when I see how the translator at one point just left this series sitting without updates for a month, so I'm afraid I have to take away several stars there.

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Gamer_Tricker

,boshsbslzisbsnsousndkdkdbsnsuhdnsjdjdndnidjdndmdo kdodidndjdududuodjdbdmdj mtl

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Runawayy_

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RroY
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I'm gonna rate it 5 stars first. You guys do share your views after some chapters. Looking forward to it.

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