Chapter 1: Chapter 1
(first person POV)
Recently, I've been immersing myself in the realm of gamma radiation experimentation. I've been dedicated to this endeavor for a few weeks now and have been steadily making progress, despite the slow pace. Fortunately, everything has been proceeding smoothly without any hitches so far.
Until now
The lab was chaotic, with alarms blaring and red lights flashing. Sweat dripped from my brow as I frantically adjusted the controls on the gamma radiation emitter. This experiment was meant to be simple - a controlled release of gamma energy to better understand its properties.
But no, of course, something had to go wrong.
The reactor started to hum ominously, emitting a deep vibration that resonated through the floor. The lights flickered, and I felt a terrifying sensation of his body beginning to change. It's as if something wants to emerge.
I tried to escape from my lab, but it was too late. Pain surged through me as my muscles expanded, my skin turning a violent shade of green. I roared in fury as I smashed through the lab equipment in a blind rage..
As the transformation neared completion, a sudden and intense surge of energy erupted from the reactor, filling the room with a blinding light. I turned to face it, feeling a mix of rage and confusion coursing through me. The energy began to coalesce, forming a radiant, blinding white light that enveloped me completely. I felt an irresistible force pulling me toward the reactor, and as I was drawn in, the last thing I remember was the sensation of being torn apart and reassembled. It was as if my very molecules were being ripped from one reality and flung into another, before everything went dark.
(3rd person pov)
The sun is shining bright over the busy city of Metropolis, giving a warm glow to the lively streets. People are walking around, creating a busy and bustling scene. The roads are packed with cars, as everyone is trying to get through the morning rush hour and reach their workplaces.
The city was having an amazingly peaceful day, even by its own standards. There were no signs of crime, the weather was delightful and promised to stay that way for the rest of the day, and even the usually impatient drivers seemed to have found their patience, with no honking or aggressive warnings.
But when we look at the sky
Something was falling
And fast
It's the Hulk
30,000 above the ground, where commercial planes fly at
Directly down the path of where he is falling is the middle of the city.
The Hulk lies motionless in the air, his colossal form spread across the vast expanse of the sky. After a few moments of stillness, his eyes flicker open, and he gradually regains consciousness, feeling disoriented and bewildered. As his senses sharpen, he peers downward and is overcome with a sense of alarm as he realizes that he is hurtling uncontrollably toward the heart of the city, his massive bulk hurtling through the air with unstoppable force.
Down to the ground
The citizens of Metropolis were walking around, minding their own business, until someone looked up. The onlooker was confused about the dot in the sky. It was getting closer by the second.
"What the hell," he whispered.
Then someone else close to him heard him and looked at him. She saw that his head was looking up. She also looked up to see the same dot getting closer by the second.
"What is that?" she said loudly enough for the people around her to hear.
Everyone looked up. People started to point at it. Some people took their phones out to record it. Some even called the cops. The dot was getting closer and closer, to the point where they could hear its roar as it was reaching the ground at breakneck speeds. The onlookers started to panic and began to run away.
Then
*BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM*
The ground shook as if an earthquake was occurring. A large amount of dust filled the air, resembling a sandstorm that had just struck Metropolis. Debris was scattered all around, damaging cars, buildings, and injuring some people who were unfortunate enough to be in the area.
As the dust settles, they are greeted by the sight of a colossal crater, spanning the expanse of a football field. What follows is an astonishing and unprecedented revelation.
A colossal figure standing at approximately 8 feet tall, with strikingly vivid green skin, a wild and unkempt mane of long, jet-black hair, and wearing peculiar yet fitting shorts.
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(How did I do? Was the grammar okay? Should I be more descriptive? Feel free to leave your feedback in the comments.)
(if it sounds like AI, I employed Grammarly to rephrase many of the paragraphs as this is my first attempt at writing. Like this one)
(I am currently contemplating whether the main character should remain as the Hulk or transform back into Bruce. This is my first attempt at writing, and I am uncertain about the best approach to take lol)
(I am considering the qualities of a woman who can provide a calming influence, akin to Black Widow in the movies or comics. I had initially considered Wonder Woman for this role, but I have doubts about her suitability for it lol)
(861 words. Is that too short?)
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