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A great story but you got harry's grandmother's family Wrong, she's from the blacks, not the green grasses.
This... is bad, it's like you make an AI read all the HP Fanfics out there targeting for children, select all the clichés with as much feel good elements with no order together and, for some weird reason, add a dash of benevolent Symbiote... That isn't even the worst part, this thing has NO life, none, it's completely robotic. FYI, all of the author's novel are the same in case you are looking to read it, so dont.
Would be a lot better and move along a bit faster if the author didn’t rewrite the same thing close to 50 times per chapter using different wording or different sentence structure.
Dude, it seems like I'm reading robotic writing, because I don't know, it's so chatty, the words are very formal and perfect, it's weird lol, and it seems like the writing slow
i LOVED the idea, but the execution makes me believe this is either ai generated or chinese, given author-san said they were using ai SOLELY to correct grammar then i believe it is the latter option. i have not seen any young masters so far and the grammer is just perfect, so if this is a translation it is surely not just MACHINE translation, but the writing style still have that chinese flavor that repeats the same thing over and over again in diferent ways that triggers my ptsd and kills my braincells, ya know?
A great story but you got harry's grandmother's family Wrong, she's from the blacks, not the green grasses.
This... is bad, it's like you make an AI read all the HP Fanfics out there targeting for children, select all the clichés with as much feel good elements with no order together and, for some weird reason, add a dash of benevolent Symbiote... That isn't even the worst part, this thing has NO life, none, it's completely robotic. FYI, all of the author's novel are the same in case you are looking to read it, so dont.
Would be a lot better and move along a bit faster if the author didn’t rewrite the same thing close to 50 times per chapter using different wording or different sentence structure.
Dude, it seems like I'm reading robotic writing, because I don't know, it's so chatty, the words are very formal and perfect, it's weird lol, and it seems like the writing slow
i LOVED the idea, but the execution makes me believe this is either ai generated or chinese, given author-san said they were using ai SOLELY to correct grammar then i believe it is the latter option. i have not seen any young masters so far and the grammer is just perfect, so if this is a translation it is surely not just MACHINE translation, but the writing style still have that chinese flavor that repeats the same thing over and over again in diferent ways that triggers my ptsd and kills my braincells, ya know?