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Yeah, definitely a dark story but it’s really good, made me cry towards the end. For those who like story whit dark theme i totally recommend.
I think you should stop writing this story because nobody like the character who has no path for redemption you would have been taken the story in whole different way like for example could have given him some kind of love shakal but in a good way so he can be like grey help everybody with the money or anything that he can get from them so he can live with the women or a girl he is not with and she will help him in every kind of way and punish the peoples who had hurt or did anything wrong to him by humility in or anything she will punish those even his family the former one and the darker 12 with this your story would have been a good story but you did not think that so I think you should start doing your story and just don't do anything like this one
Based on the summary, I read this expecting Harry to follow Grindelwald's path but instead I get a victimized puppet Harry. What a waste of my time. But if you like seeing Harry tortured, this fic is for you.
This is not for the faint of heart. I had to stop reading after what happened in the chamber the first time he entered. It was heartbreaking, especially when he thought of her saying “please let me out i promise i’ll be good mom, dad where are you!” and the other times he visualized what she has been doing in there. Because, If you really think about it, something close or worse to this is happening to a real child somewhere. I also remember the journalist who took a photo of the girl and the vulture. The man committed suicide after a year. Harry was 12. I am already in chapter 62 (finished in a day). I am just hoping this won’t be dropped and will end on a lighter tone. I do not know if i can continue though. I am admittedly weak.
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I found myself skimming most of it. The writing quality is top notch, the story is somewhat interesting and all but the main character is pathetic. It’s realistic sure, but it’s also incredibly annoying. All he wants is to be useful lol. Whatever I suppose he may grow an actual backbone and get some power later but I’m done with the story.
La historia es muy buena, pero los sentimientos que te deja son simplemente horribles y muy oscuros. Si eres alguien que interactua con los personajes poniendote en su lugar lo pasaras algo mal leyendolo, pero bueno la historia lo compensa con el trasfondo de las acciones que tiene el mc y las consecuencias.
Una de las mejores fanfic de harry potter que he leido y eso que he leido muchos mtl como 50 eso deja bastante que decir, gran trabajo. Una de las mejores fanfic de harry potter que he leido y eso que he leido muchos mtl como 50 eso deja bastante que decir, gran trabajo.
great story ) there is not enough separation during the transition through events and sometimes you notice late that one has already ended and the dialogue from the other has begun
The book is nice but i do want more update stability as you do upload quite infrequently
This fanfiction ..... is great! like truly it's too good there are no cliche situations in this and most of what's written is original
Hi, I'm a new reader to this story, but in the few days I've read the current chapters and I can confidently say I REALLY LOVE IT, and WANT MORE!!! This is why I ask if there is a release schedule for this novel.
Please make him Harry kill them I'm sick and tired of the stories of dark Harry Potter who always forgive his family[img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the best fan friction on Harry Potter .. the thought process and the way you described the story of other side is really amazing… keep up the great work
more.......... please more chapters......... and for god's sake do not make harry go back to the light..... for once let the bad guys win...........................
Okay hear me out on this one. I think you made a good job by implementing the MC (new harry) into the story. The first time you mentioned his twin I really thought: "Ohh great its another one of those stories." But you really surprised me with it. It's also nice to see more of the Wizarding world outside of hogwarts since so many fanfiction are just a copy from the last. 1.) Reincarnated 2.) Except letter 3.) Becoming op fast 4.) Ploting against voldemort 5.) Happy ending It really IS refreshing to she the MC on the bad side, and I don't mean those Chinese potter novels where voldemort gets Reincarnated in a child's body and makes a 180° in his character. NO! I mean a real reason for the MC to become (evil) and do something other than play beta for the golden trio. KUDOS. I hope you continue this🫡
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For those of you hesitating to read my book each chapter of mine is around 2000 - 6000 words hence i almost write 4-5 chapter in one chapter the story will go on for 81 chapter
Yeah, definitely a dark story but it’s really good, made me cry towards the end. For those who like story whit dark theme i totally recommend.
I think you should stop writing this story because nobody like the character who has no path for redemption you would have been taken the story in whole different way like for example could have given him some kind of love shakal but in a good way so he can be like grey help everybody with the money or anything that he can get from them so he can live with the women or a girl he is not with and she will help him in every kind of way and punish the peoples who had hurt or did anything wrong to him by humility in or anything she will punish those even his family the former one and the darker 12 with this your story would have been a good story but you did not think that so I think you should start doing your story and just don't do anything like this one
Based on the summary, I read this expecting Harry to follow Grindelwald's path but instead I get a victimized puppet Harry. What a waste of my time. But if you like seeing Harry tortured, this fic is for you.
This is not for the faint of heart. I had to stop reading after what happened in the chamber the first time he entered. It was heartbreaking, especially when he thought of her saying “please let me out i promise i’ll be good mom, dad where are you!” and the other times he visualized what she has been doing in there. Because, If you really think about it, something close or worse to this is happening to a real child somewhere. I also remember the journalist who took a photo of the girl and the vulture. The man committed suicide after a year. Harry was 12. I am already in chapter 62 (finished in a day). I am just hoping this won’t be dropped and will end on a lighter tone. I do not know if i can continue though. I am admittedly weak.
Reveal Spoiler I found myself skimming most of it. The writing quality is top notch, the story is somewhat interesting and all but the main character is pathetic. It’s realistic sure, but it’s also incredibly annoying. All he wants is to be useful lol. Whatever I suppose he may grow an actual backbone and get some power later but I’m done with the story.
La historia es muy buena, pero los sentimientos que te deja son simplemente horribles y muy oscuros. Si eres alguien que interactua con los personajes poniendote en su lugar lo pasaras algo mal leyendolo, pero bueno la historia lo compensa con el trasfondo de las acciones que tiene el mc y las consecuencias.
Una de las mejores fanfic de harry potter que he leido y eso que he leido muchos mtl como 50 eso deja bastante que decir, gran trabajo. Una de las mejores fanfic de harry potter que he leido y eso que he leido muchos mtl como 50 eso deja bastante que decir, gran trabajo.
great story ) there is not enough separation during the transition through events and sometimes you notice late that one has already ended and the dialogue from the other has begun
The book is nice but i do want more update stability as you do upload quite infrequently
This fanfiction ..... is great! like truly it's too good there are no cliche situations in this and most of what's written is original
Hi, I'm a new reader to this story, but in the few days I've read the current chapters and I can confidently say I REALLY LOVE IT, and WANT MORE!!! This is why I ask if there is a release schedule for this novel.
Please make him Harry kill them I'm sick and tired of the stories of dark Harry Potter who always forgive his family[img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the best fan friction on Harry Potter .. the thought process and the way you described the story of other side is really amazing… keep up the great work
more.......... please more chapters......... and for god's sake do not make harry go back to the light..... for once let the bad guys win...........................
Okay hear me out on this one. I think you made a good job by implementing the MC (new harry) into the story. The first time you mentioned his twin I really thought: "Ohh great its another one of those stories." But you really surprised me with it. It's also nice to see more of the Wizarding world outside of hogwarts since so many fanfiction are just a copy from the last. 1.) Reincarnated 2.) Except letter 3.) Becoming op fast 4.) Ploting against voldemort 5.) Happy ending It really IS refreshing to she the MC on the bad side, and I don't mean those Chinese potter novels where voldemort gets Reincarnated in a child's body and makes a 180° in his character. NO! I mean a real reason for the MC to become (evil) and do something other than play beta for the golden trio. KUDOS. I hope you continue this🫡
Reveal Spoiler
For those of you hesitating to read my book each chapter of mine is around 2000 - 6000 words hence i almost write 4-5 chapter in one chapter the story will go on for 81 chapter