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Entiendo q dumbledore sea un manipulador pero no era tan malvado como lo hace ver el fanfic se nota q el autor odia a dumbledore y lo hace ver con el odio q le tienen todos en el fanfic porq si eso me lo bajo una banda 6/10
A great Harry potter fanfic at the start its slow (I'm only at chap 32) but one of the greatest thing in the book for me is there is a proper sense of reasoning on the characters action and the reason/s is good enough for me as it gives the character more depth and the author put more thought on the actions of the mc. As of now the only thing i want more chapters if and only if the quality is the same it's gonna be a shame if the author sacrificed quality for quantity (i repeat I'm only on chap 32 and there may be some changes in the future)
Can’t remember where, or what title, but I have read a book that is a word for word copy of this. The only difference is that that book is further ahead than this one, but I guess I’ll be able to see by the next chapter or two if this is truly a different book. If this turns out to be the exact same book, and the author has posted this somewhere else under a different book name or author name, then I simply overlooked that fact and apologize for anyone who might think I am saying that this author copied the book from anyone. If, however, this is an uncredited copy then shame on the author for not giving credit where it is due.
The novel is good so far. The protagonist is not stupid and uses his position in the right way, but I wish there was a background about the protagonist's life in the orphanage, even if it was for a chapter or two. I feel that the protagonist has no history. He wakes up and then goes to buy school supplies. There is nothing about his life before that. Even when he mentions his life in the orphanage, he mentions a sentence or two at most and does not give details, although there is a message from Rob or something similar that mentions that his memories will merge, but there is no review of his memories. Half of him was living here as if he were just a corpse living in this world without consciousness.
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this is what i called a good fan fiction well written MC and everyone around him i perticuly like how well dumbledor character is portrayed in this FF (probably because thats how i would have described the puppeteer) like your work thank for this FF
So much for being an Extra. He was the Heir of House Black. how is that being an extra?
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Trust the reviews. There's no extras. Everything is easily given or luckily found, nothing conquered or even searched. Protagonists have inconsistent reasoning. Not my cup of tea.
WN-scaled rating is 4.6 ⭐️. Non-scaled rating is 7.7/10. It’s an interesting story with good overall writing quality and update consistency. There are definitely some AU changes and drama that people complain about, but overall it’s been quite good. Recommended as of ch 69.
dropped, one chapter smaller than the other full of talk and useless descriptions to fill sausage .................................................................
Well, I doubt a fan of the story would believe and trusting goblin at the first chance it got. Anyway did I tell you that the goblin here acts like an elf, with their servitude and all? Well cheers you're in for a treat if you are looking for something different than how the original race portrayed.
good novel so far, I just hope the author sticks to the side character, yeah hes a Black, so what technically bar Sirius all the other Blacks were side characters in the main story, so it does make sense to a point, my view is if he really is gonna be a side character, eg not putting his face smack bam in the middle of the main plot. if this happens Ill probably stop reading, but its been awhile since i have read an actual good HP fan fiction, so keep up the good work author, I look forward to see how you go. Ill consider being a patreon once i see how many updates your doing, I have a issue paying money then suddenly the author drops to 1 to 2 chapters a month,
talk about creativity and misleading, this work is the same as the one mentioned by the other review with extra steps.
- .... .. ... / .. ... / .- / .-. . -....- ..- .--. .-.. --- .- -.. / --- ..-. / .... .- .-. .-. -.-- / .--. --- - - . .-. ---... .-.. --- ... - / ... --- -. / ... - .. .-.. .-.. / .- / --. --- --- -.. / .-. . .- -.. / - .... --- ..- --. ....
Has a good plot but I suggest you change the book title, no son of black, would be considered an extra in any book
Yeaaaa, nah. This fanfic was really fun at first, until author just kept on putting theory after theory after theory about anything and everything into it, not confirming any, not sctually integrating them, but just assuming them to be true, and then just as self glazing of his "incredible" theories, confirmed most through the mfing talking hat. If you wanted to theory rant about fkng harry potter, then go on reddit. This story made an interesting and magical world into a boring and political driven bs.
Cara eu tava gostando, mais o cara fazer aproximadamente 7 capítulos para uma viagem de trem e a seleção de casa, sendo que 3 capítulos já seria legal foi de mais para mim
a história em si é boa, mas tem muito fillers e os capítulos muito pequenos, acaba que so no capítulo 44 que o protagonista vai conhecer o chapéu seletor, é ridículo isso///GOOGLE TRADUTOR///the story itself is good, but there are a lot of fillers and the chapters are very small, it ends up that it's only in chapter 44 that the protagonist will meet the sorting hat, that's ridiculous
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I liked it a lot inspite of the story's non lenghty stature. The story was on point looking for the plotholes i found nearly none. And the ones i found were due to the new added elements that weren't in the original books. All in all it was a good read i hope the writer continues the story.
Well… Title is somewhat misleading, due to his ancestry There are some obvious grammatical mistakes Some plot holes/lore errors (some pretty annoying ones) Overall , solid writing, idea and fanfic + a nice read so far👍 Sadly, not one of my favs so far, as I like lore correctness Still, give it a try Dear author, keep up your efforts 👍👍 Unfortunately, I like the Loki ff way more
(5/5) I'm at 31 chp The Story is going decent for now. The MC is smart and I like that about him. I hope he remains smart. Keep up the good work 👍 (Will review again at chp100)
HP: In The Magical World As An Extra is an expanded and rewritten version of the well-crafted story Harry Potter: Lost Son by another author, which was abandoned over a year ago. This new rendition adds greater depth and detail, offering a more descriptive and enriched narrative compared to the original. Overall, it presents a polished and refined version of the story, enhancing the reading experience while staying true to the original's charm. Overall I'm happy that this author has picked up the dropped FF.
Entiendo q dumbledore sea un manipulador pero no era tan malvado como lo hace ver el fanfic se nota q el autor odia a dumbledore y lo hace ver con el odio q le tienen todos en el fanfic porq si eso me lo bajo una banda 6/10
A great Harry potter fanfic at the start its slow (I'm only at chap 32) but one of the greatest thing in the book for me is there is a proper sense of reasoning on the characters action and the reason/s is good enough for me as it gives the character more depth and the author put more thought on the actions of the mc. As of now the only thing i want more chapters if and only if the quality is the same it's gonna be a shame if the author sacrificed quality for quantity (i repeat I'm only on chap 32 and there may be some changes in the future)
Can’t remember where, or what title, but I have read a book that is a word for word copy of this. The only difference is that that book is further ahead than this one, but I guess I’ll be able to see by the next chapter or two if this is truly a different book. If this turns out to be the exact same book, and the author has posted this somewhere else under a different book name or author name, then I simply overlooked that fact and apologize for anyone who might think I am saying that this author copied the book from anyone. If, however, this is an uncredited copy then shame on the author for not giving credit where it is due.
The novel is good so far. The protagonist is not stupid and uses his position in the right way, but I wish there was a background about the protagonist's life in the orphanage, even if it was for a chapter or two. I feel that the protagonist has no history. He wakes up and then goes to buy school supplies. There is nothing about his life before that. Even when he mentions his life in the orphanage, he mentions a sentence or two at most and does not give details, although there is a message from Rob or something similar that mentions that his memories will merge, but there is no review of his memories. Half of him was living here as if he were just a corpse living in this world without consciousness.
Reveal Spoiler this is one of the good ff i have read about. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
this is what i called a good fan fiction well written MC and everyone around him i perticuly like how well dumbledor character is portrayed in this FF (probably because thats how i would have described the puppeteer) like your work thank for this FF
So much for being an Extra. He was the Heir of House Black. how is that being an extra?
Reveal Spoiler Trust the reviews. There's no extras. Everything is easily given or luckily found, nothing conquered or even searched. Protagonists have inconsistent reasoning. Not my cup of tea.
WN-scaled rating is 4.6 ⭐️. Non-scaled rating is 7.7/10. It’s an interesting story with good overall writing quality and update consistency. There are definitely some AU changes and drama that people complain about, but overall it’s been quite good. Recommended as of ch 69.
dropped, one chapter smaller than the other full of talk and useless descriptions to fill sausage .................................................................
Well, I doubt a fan of the story would believe and trusting goblin at the first chance it got. Anyway did I tell you that the goblin here acts like an elf, with their servitude and all? Well cheers you're in for a treat if you are looking for something different than how the original race portrayed.
good novel so far, I just hope the author sticks to the side character, yeah hes a Black, so what technically bar Sirius all the other Blacks were side characters in the main story, so it does make sense to a point, my view is if he really is gonna be a side character, eg not putting his face smack bam in the middle of the main plot. if this happens Ill probably stop reading, but its been awhile since i have read an actual good HP fan fiction, so keep up the good work author, I look forward to see how you go. Ill consider being a patreon once i see how many updates your doing, I have a issue paying money then suddenly the author drops to 1 to 2 chapters a month,
talk about creativity and misleading, this work is the same as the one mentioned by the other review with extra steps.
- .... .. ... / .. ... / .- / .-. . -....- ..- .--. .-.. --- .- -.. / --- ..-. / .... .- .-. .-. -.-- / .--. --- - - . .-. ---... .-.. --- ... - / ... --- -. / ... - .. .-.. .-.. / .- / --. --- --- -.. / .-. . .- -.. / - .... --- ..- --. ....
Has a good plot but I suggest you change the book title, no son of black, would be considered an extra in any book
Yeaaaa, nah. This fanfic was really fun at first, until author just kept on putting theory after theory after theory about anything and everything into it, not confirming any, not sctually integrating them, but just assuming them to be true, and then just as self glazing of his "incredible" theories, confirmed most through the mfing talking hat. If you wanted to theory rant about fkng harry potter, then go on reddit. This story made an interesting and magical world into a boring and political driven bs.
Cara eu tava gostando, mais o cara fazer aproximadamente 7 capítulos para uma viagem de trem e a seleção de casa, sendo que 3 capítulos já seria legal foi de mais para mim
a história em si é boa, mas tem muito fillers e os capítulos muito pequenos, acaba que so no capítulo 44 que o protagonista vai conhecer o chapéu seletor, é ridículo isso///GOOGLE TRADUTOR///the story itself is good, but there are a lot of fillers and the chapters are very small, it ends up that it's only in chapter 44 that the protagonist will meet the sorting hat, that's ridiculous
Reveal Spoiler I liked it a lot inspite of the story's non lenghty stature. The story was on point looking for the plotholes i found nearly none. And the ones i found were due to the new added elements that weren't in the original books. All in all it was a good read i hope the writer continues the story.
Well… Title is somewhat misleading, due to his ancestry There are some obvious grammatical mistakes Some plot holes/lore errors (some pretty annoying ones) Overall , solid writing, idea and fanfic + a nice read so far👍 Sadly, not one of my favs so far, as I like lore correctness Still, give it a try Dear author, keep up your efforts 👍👍 Unfortunately, I like the Loki ff way more
(5/5) I'm at 31 chp The Story is going decent for now. The MC is smart and I like that about him. I hope he remains smart. Keep up the good work 👍 (Will review again at chp100)
HP: In The Magical World As An Extra is an expanded and rewritten version of the well-crafted story Harry Potter: Lost Son by another author, which was abandoned over a year ago. This new rendition adds greater depth and detail, offering a more descriptive and enriched narrative compared to the original. Overall, it presents a polished and refined version of the story, enhancing the reading experience while staying true to the original's charm. Overall I'm happy that this author has picked up the dropped FF.