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Creepy_CuddleBear

Love the story so far, love dragons. Im here to see the eventual outcome of our mc above the clouds 360 pov, riding atop the snout of a dragon posing, arms crossed, half dragon form as his tail sways behind him (lorgenome style from gurren lagann) as it zooms across the sky along with an army of dragons in tow. But im here for the ride, CCB out! :~).

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CephalonCoda

The story itself up to what I have available, (chapter 50) Has been very enjoyable and interesting. A few VERY minor spelling errors but consistency is there in terms of names and genders not changing every few paragraphs like in some books. Overall very enjoyable read, even though I admit I was a bit confused by the second summon so quickly after the first, but not sure how that will end up yet. In the end this is a really new story and ill update the review once more is available. My one major concern is Ive noticed a couple dropped stories by the author and im really hoping this isnt going to become one of those as it has a lot of promise. The world building is good, although not everything is well explained, probably on purpose to go more in depth into it later (structure of the cities, it was talking about sectors but that doesnt really get explained at all as of yet.)

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Anubesetesh

If not for grammar or spelling issues it'd get a full 5/5. so far (as of now only 146 chapters) it's a great story! People will argue it's SL copy...while I could see that it'd be more to say it's a dragon version but no less worthy of praise. tbh this as well as a few other stories I've read are similar but different to SL and very well worth the read and need of recognition. Don't just drop becaus you believe it to be a knock off. read it all. enjoy the story. don't compare bananas to plantains! Give this author support!

4mth
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John1500

Review: Great Potential but Disappointing Execution I really like the premise of the story, especially the teased late-game scenario where the protagonist might face off against humanity (at least that’s hinted at in the preview chapter). However, after 100 chapters, I don’t see much of that, and I strongly dislike some of the author’s decisions. The Main Character and His Abilities The story begins with a classic “weak-to-strong” setup: the protagonist receives an SSS-tier skill, a god-tier rarity that most people believe to be a myth. Despite this, he’s pitied by everyone around him simply because he’s a summoner—a class that’s generally considered weak. His friends even abandon him. This makes no sense. There aren’t any other SSS-tier summoners to compare him to, and such a rare skill should logically spark interest or greed rather than dismissal. Instead, the author seems to force a betrayal and revenge subplot that ultimately doesn’t add much to the main storyline. In reality, this isn’t a “weak-to-strong” story at all; it’s more of an “overpowered from the start” narrative surrounded by characters who act irrationally. It’s also not a “hides-his-strength” trope since the protagonist doesn’t conceal his abilities—just one of his systems. Pacing and Worldbuilding The pacing is often described as “slow,” but it’s not because of deep worldbuilding or a complex, mysterious plot. Instead, it’s padded with filler. Even after 100 chapters, the world remains underdeveloped. There’s a vague mention of an apocalypse involving dragons, yet people don’t seem to care that the protagonist can summon them. Humanity now lives behind walls because of monsters and some kind of illness outside, but this isn’t explored in any meaningful way. The protagonist’s backstory is equally lacking. He used to live outside the walls with his sister before becoming an orphan, but there’s no information about his parents, his past, or any significant trauma. Instead, we get POV chapters from irrelevant characters, like a typical “clown” character or a random girl who’s introduced just to be killed off by the antagonist. Ironically, this girl has more backstory than the protagonist. Overall, the story gives little information about the world or its mysteries. It feels more like lighthearted banter among characters in an apocalyptic setting than a genuine attempt at creating a dark or suspenseful narrative. Characters and Atmosphere The side characters are generic tropes: clowns, tsunderes, and other archetypes that feel out of place in an apocalyptic story. Their constant jokes and cheerful attitudes ruin any potential for a dark or mysterious atmosphere. The antagonist is a one-dimensional murderer who kills for power without a clear motive but is somehow also portrayed as a “caring lover.” This inconsistency makes the character unconvincing and uninspired. Conclusion It feels like the author is working through a checklist: Want a “dark” story? Add a murderer antagonist. Want a “weak-to-strong” tag? Give the protagonist an overpowered skill and make everyone else act stupidly. The story refuses to take risks. There are no meaningful stakes, no emotional depth, and no sense of struggle. The protagonist doesn’t seem willing to make hard sacrifices, and it feels like he’ll achieve everything through plot armor. There’s no reason to expect tragic or challenging moments, such as the death of his sister or the loss of key characters. Instead, it’s shaping up to be a predictable, happy story with shallow antagonists, chapters filled with jokes, and harem-style rivalry. Ultimately, it’s disappointing, especially for readers looking for an atmospheric and well-thought-out narrative in a apocalyptic setup with a morally ambiguous protagonist.

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AllhailTrump

The novel wasn't that bad a typical modern talent awakening in apocalypse novel here are some pros and cons read it after you see them if you still interested. Pros : 1) Mc awakens a system and slowly matures. 2) Mc can summon dragons good thing is they already powerful and not start of as a baby or toddler . 3) Author makes the Mc to get better by using system like reminding him to daily quests so he can get his body stronger other than just be a summoner. 4) Some face-slapping here and there. 5) Mc gets into a good guild and they offer what he wants to him. 6) Cool part is i didn't see any limit other than system restricting him for summons also all summons totally loyal to Mc and can think by themselves and speak like humans. Cons : 1) System doesn't give any freedom to the host. It keeps on forcing him to this and that with no time to rest. 2) Author ruins story by giving Mc a past life bs memory and also connects him to the guild leader in past with some things relating to him. 3) Apocalypse is bascially a rip off part as monster classifications and everything is not even properly devloped in the story they just say that's an A-rank monster oh there a bunch of S-ranks over there which i didn't quite like as he could have clearly explained how the outside is but it feels like he just making it up along the way. 4) System can open different dimensions. Also one of Mc's enemy's gets an Abyss system at this point i'm not sure what author is even thinking he could have just introduced abyss invasion that lead to apocalypse but he playing around here and there making too much chaos in the novel . 5) All the spectators are some-what blind at the start they always look down on the Mc or get jealous nobody talks positive about him unless they stream him even then these idiots in the guild still provoke the Mc saying he newbie and shit. I was disappointed nobody even pointed the fact he cleared the A-rank dungeon solo at the start without summons .

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Author_han

I...don't know what to say. I'm at chapter 12 and I doubt I'd get up to chapter 20, but wow! What a read! Three words: I love draconic overlord ʕ⁠ ⁠ꈍ⁠ᴥ⁠ꈍ⁠ʔ Would definitely support and recommend it to new readers.

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Kevin_Sword

Great story, well worth the read. Overall the theme of dragons is done well and a wonderful story.

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Steelixthelegend

this story is great, although the flow does tend to go from nearly too slow to almost too fast, but the author skillfully reins the story in. the slight spelling errors are hardly noticeable, and usually, I can just skate over them all together. every once in a while, there will be some minor confusion from it. overall a great story that I highly recommend

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Jordzfml_7

A combination of my 2 favorite things . SUMMONING × DRAGONS !!! honestly the writing is impeccable, I have absolutely no complaints there. The story is so immersive and overall enjoyable ( honestly binge worthy). The mc of the story = perfect. it's honestly so relieving finding a novel with both an amazing story and main protagonist. He's smart , cool-headed , ambitious and ruthless when needed. The side-characters are also well written and enjoyable ( Cinder best waifu !!! ). if you enjoy dragons aswell as summoner classes with an overpowered mc who's not afraid to show his power (but also not reckless) then this is honestly the best book for you ... and join the discord if you enjoy it (it's so dry in here [img=Speechless])

1mth
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Big_Doggo_9914

Question author can the mc become a full dragon if he levels up enough and makes his bloodline more pure bc to me its a little weird if he is the overlord of the dragons if he isnt even a full dragon and just has a little bit of dragon blood

1mth
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GodwinBG

The book is very interesting till chapter 11 that I have read recently but I can say for sure the story is good and the characters relation how they know each other and what ranks or power do they have really amazes me BTW 5 Stars recommended to read

2mth
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Enyo_9753

I thought book had a good premise but there are some things i dont like. 1. He had an SSS Rank Talent. Even If Summoners are bad, they should think that such a high talent is something worth. 2. I was hoping there is no girlfriend/friend betraying him cliche. 3. When Cinder was summoned we saw her rank but after that no info panel for the other dragons and Daven summoning was even skipped. 4. He was threatening to get that sap from the world tree using force. I dont like MC's that resort to force when they dont get something and the other party is innocent. That's were i left. All in all: Not my Jam

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VingadorVVX

I only read the initial chapters, but I liked the world so far. The world building and mc's power sound pretty interesting. The grammar is very good, nothing to say about that

2mth
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Nicholas_Morgan213

i love the development and the slow gaining of powers by the MC it's a good story

2mth
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Paulotut_Enriquez

First of all, it's awesome. But some things need more work. 1. Some stories are out of place. Especially the PENALTY QUEST "It is so drawn out, instead of giving it its own arc, you squeezed it into a penalty quest making it boring and out of place". It is a penalty quest event but it lasted more than 5 chapters I think. It made me feel like I skipped a hundred chapters. 2. PROLONGED SCENES, when the reaper guild triggered the signal jammer I was surprised that it took 2 chapters before the scene played out. I think you should cut it short OR go for the fight scene then insert the trigger activation close to the end so as not to waste the build-up. I hope this help. Keep up the good work

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jspencerlove

Up to chapter 182 I was enjoying the story, but 183-185 appear to be a platform malfunction. As if a totally different novel about a Gear Mage intruded. Customer support is useless again. I would love to read more about Alister but this other story is not even in the same universe. I'll check back to see it it gets fixed but otherwise I am done and will stop reading this story. Sad.

3mth
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BL00DY

Idk what's the use of even reading it. The first few chapters show that MC and everyone else are brainless and the rest of the novel will be simply razing everything with an OP MC and same old cliche plots. You make a new novel then at least put more effort into it, not cliche everything while adding a grain of your own wishes.

3mth
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Empyrium

Story is like many others of the kind, would say often even a bit better. Give it a try, but be warned that there are a lot of grammar mistakes. And author wont fix them or even try it. Read a bit into pay chapters and have to say, if grammar is important for you, dont buy them. If you can ignore those many mistakes go ahead

4mth
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rabearisoa_sariaka

c'est un bel œuvre.... peut-être un peu magique!

4mth
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Pan_Cakes

So alpha wolf dragon sigma male I hope MC continues to mog every little beta who dares get in his way 🐺🐺🐺😈😈😈😈😈

4mth
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Magorias

Found this recently, and it has quickly become my new must-read. Though the supporting character perspectives do not interest me, I have not found myself zoning out to do other things as I do with other books.

4mth
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David_Powers

Honestly it started out pretty good. the summoning was pretty cool the mc is ok and his power set seems alright. The problem is the pointless chapters that are 100% filler. this story as of chapter 110 is 40% filler chapters that either try to be funny or just another pov that doesn't really go anywhere. like the twins 2 chapters wasted on some dumb prank that wasn't funny in the slightest just to show how much the mc ate at the end of the 2nd filler chapter. reminds me of DBZ when goku was powering up for 5 episodes yelling all the while a flashback was happening.

4mth
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Beatriz_Batista_II

livro envolvente , com uma narrativa boa e que prende o leitor

4mth
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Daoistg1Knv0

histoire bien écrite et envoûtante j'ai hâte de lire la suite

4mth
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fist_immortal

Dragons! Dragons! Dragons! I like dragons!

4mth
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Raj_Shah_7152

Putting this review here, to remind me to pick this book up later

4mth
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The_Broken_Author

Honestly, this novel left a deep impression on me. I mean who would have expected such a an awesome novel to be hanging around the corner? The author really did a wonderful work. His narrative is just to wonderful and intriguing, the way he brings the characters to life, leaves me in complete awe. This, is a job well done.

4mth
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JOSHHHHHHM

I like it. A bit expensive for privilege.

4mth
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shoryadevraj

i want to find the Nobel in which men character was blind at the starting and orphan he was taken in some family for work because that family doesn't want anyone to see what they are doing he work for that family for sometime and after finding a cultivation technique in that family he regain his eye power can someone find this novel

4mth
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Zurbluris

Hello guys, it's the author here. Decided it was finally time to make my shameless review after 100 chapters. treated this as a QnA section where you can get answers to your questions, but no spoilers. when writing this novel I really wanted to create something unique that was not really out there yet, and as a fan of novels and comics that keep me guessing I was sure did the same here, weaving in little mysteries. The concept of dragon-mancers is an already explored yet not commonly used concept, so I combined it with a little apocalyptic Si-Fi setting. the begining part of the novel is a bit slow due to the fact I had to lay down some groundwork for future chapters. This is my best work yet and I'm really proud the amount of effort I put in this time. Hope you enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing. Thank you.

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AuthorEriElegbede

Peak! Peak! did is say Peak! Peak! This story is one of the absolute best I have read second to Solo leveling hype in my head 😤😤...

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Samanda_76

The writer's imagition is very vivid, given reality to the characters. I can see the story before me. The story comes alive. I strongly recommend this book

5mth
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Creepy_CuddleBear

Love the story so far, love dragons. Im here to see the eventual outcome of our mc above the clouds 360 pov, riding atop the snout of a dragon posing, arms crossed, half dragon form as his tail sways behind him (lorgenome style from gurren lagann) as it zooms across the sky along with an army of dragons in tow. But im here for the ride, CCB out! :~).

6mth
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CephalonCoda

The story itself up to what I have available, (chapter 50) Has been very enjoyable and interesting. A few VERY minor spelling errors but consistency is there in terms of names and genders not changing every few paragraphs like in some books. Overall very enjoyable read, even though I admit I was a bit confused by the second summon so quickly after the first, but not sure how that will end up yet. In the end this is a really new story and ill update the review once more is available. My one major concern is Ive noticed a couple dropped stories by the author and im really hoping this isnt going to become one of those as it has a lot of promise. The world building is good, although not everything is well explained, probably on purpose to go more in depth into it later (structure of the cities, it was talking about sectors but that doesnt really get explained at all as of yet.)

6mth
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Anubesetesh

If not for grammar or spelling issues it'd get a full 5/5. so far (as of now only 146 chapters) it's a great story! People will argue it's SL copy...while I could see that it'd be more to say it's a dragon version but no less worthy of praise. tbh this as well as a few other stories I've read are similar but different to SL and very well worth the read and need of recognition. Don't just drop becaus you believe it to be a knock off. read it all. enjoy the story. don't compare bananas to plantains! Give this author support!

4mth
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John1500

Review: Great Potential but Disappointing Execution I really like the premise of the story, especially the teased late-game scenario where the protagonist might face off against humanity (at least that’s hinted at in the preview chapter). However, after 100 chapters, I don’t see much of that, and I strongly dislike some of the author’s decisions. The Main Character and His Abilities The story begins with a classic “weak-to-strong” setup: the protagonist receives an SSS-tier skill, a god-tier rarity that most people believe to be a myth. Despite this, he’s pitied by everyone around him simply because he’s a summoner—a class that’s generally considered weak. His friends even abandon him. This makes no sense. There aren’t any other SSS-tier summoners to compare him to, and such a rare skill should logically spark interest or greed rather than dismissal. Instead, the author seems to force a betrayal and revenge subplot that ultimately doesn’t add much to the main storyline. In reality, this isn’t a “weak-to-strong” story at all; it’s more of an “overpowered from the start” narrative surrounded by characters who act irrationally. It’s also not a “hides-his-strength” trope since the protagonist doesn’t conceal his abilities—just one of his systems. Pacing and Worldbuilding The pacing is often described as “slow,” but it’s not because of deep worldbuilding or a complex, mysterious plot. Instead, it’s padded with filler. Even after 100 chapters, the world remains underdeveloped. There’s a vague mention of an apocalypse involving dragons, yet people don’t seem to care that the protagonist can summon them. Humanity now lives behind walls because of monsters and some kind of illness outside, but this isn’t explored in any meaningful way. The protagonist’s backstory is equally lacking. He used to live outside the walls with his sister before becoming an orphan, but there’s no information about his parents, his past, or any significant trauma. Instead, we get POV chapters from irrelevant characters, like a typical “clown” character or a random girl who’s introduced just to be killed off by the antagonist. Ironically, this girl has more backstory than the protagonist. Overall, the story gives little information about the world or its mysteries. It feels more like lighthearted banter among characters in an apocalyptic setting than a genuine attempt at creating a dark or suspenseful narrative. Characters and Atmosphere The side characters are generic tropes: clowns, tsunderes, and other archetypes that feel out of place in an apocalyptic story. Their constant jokes and cheerful attitudes ruin any potential for a dark or mysterious atmosphere. The antagonist is a one-dimensional murderer who kills for power without a clear motive but is somehow also portrayed as a “caring lover.” This inconsistency makes the character unconvincing and uninspired. Conclusion It feels like the author is working through a checklist: Want a “dark” story? Add a murderer antagonist. Want a “weak-to-strong” tag? Give the protagonist an overpowered skill and make everyone else act stupidly. The story refuses to take risks. There are no meaningful stakes, no emotional depth, and no sense of struggle. The protagonist doesn’t seem willing to make hard sacrifices, and it feels like he’ll achieve everything through plot armor. There’s no reason to expect tragic or challenging moments, such as the death of his sister or the loss of key characters. Instead, it’s shaping up to be a predictable, happy story with shallow antagonists, chapters filled with jokes, and harem-style rivalry. Ultimately, it’s disappointing, especially for readers looking for an atmospheric and well-thought-out narrative in a apocalyptic setup with a morally ambiguous protagonist.

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AllhailTrump

The novel wasn't that bad a typical modern talent awakening in apocalypse novel here are some pros and cons read it after you see them if you still interested. Pros : 1) Mc awakens a system and slowly matures. 2) Mc can summon dragons good thing is they already powerful and not start of as a baby or toddler . 3) Author makes the Mc to get better by using system like reminding him to daily quests so he can get his body stronger other than just be a summoner. 4) Some face-slapping here and there. 5) Mc gets into a good guild and they offer what he wants to him. 6) Cool part is i didn't see any limit other than system restricting him for summons also all summons totally loyal to Mc and can think by themselves and speak like humans. Cons : 1) System doesn't give any freedom to the host. It keeps on forcing him to this and that with no time to rest. 2) Author ruins story by giving Mc a past life bs memory and also connects him to the guild leader in past with some things relating to him. 3) Apocalypse is bascially a rip off part as monster classifications and everything is not even properly devloped in the story they just say that's an A-rank monster oh there a bunch of S-ranks over there which i didn't quite like as he could have clearly explained how the outside is but it feels like he just making it up along the way. 4) System can open different dimensions. Also one of Mc's enemy's gets an Abyss system at this point i'm not sure what author is even thinking he could have just introduced abyss invasion that lead to apocalypse but he playing around here and there making too much chaos in the novel . 5) All the spectators are some-what blind at the start they always look down on the Mc or get jealous nobody talks positive about him unless they stream him even then these idiots in the guild still provoke the Mc saying he newbie and shit. I was disappointed nobody even pointed the fact he cleared the A-rank dungeon solo at the start without summons .

20d
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Author_han

I...don't know what to say. I'm at chapter 12 and I doubt I'd get up to chapter 20, but wow! What a read! Three words: I love draconic overlord ʕ⁠ ⁠ꈍ⁠ᴥ⁠ꈍ⁠ʔ Would definitely support and recommend it to new readers.

21d
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Kevin_Sword

Great story, well worth the read. Overall the theme of dragons is done well and a wonderful story.

24d
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Steelixthelegend

this story is great, although the flow does tend to go from nearly too slow to almost too fast, but the author skillfully reins the story in. the slight spelling errors are hardly noticeable, and usually, I can just skate over them all together. every once in a while, there will be some minor confusion from it. overall a great story that I highly recommend

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Jordzfml_7

A combination of my 2 favorite things . SUMMONING × DRAGONS !!! honestly the writing is impeccable, I have absolutely no complaints there. The story is so immersive and overall enjoyable ( honestly binge worthy). The mc of the story = perfect. it's honestly so relieving finding a novel with both an amazing story and main protagonist. He's smart , cool-headed , ambitious and ruthless when needed. The side-characters are also well written and enjoyable ( Cinder best waifu !!! ). if you enjoy dragons aswell as summoner classes with an overpowered mc who's not afraid to show his power (but also not reckless) then this is honestly the best book for you ... and join the discord if you enjoy it (it's so dry in here [img=Speechless])

1mth
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Big_Doggo_9914

Question author can the mc become a full dragon if he levels up enough and makes his bloodline more pure bc to me its a little weird if he is the overlord of the dragons if he isnt even a full dragon and just has a little bit of dragon blood

1mth
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GodwinBG

The book is very interesting till chapter 11 that I have read recently but I can say for sure the story is good and the characters relation how they know each other and what ranks or power do they have really amazes me BTW 5 Stars recommended to read

2mth
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Enyo_9753

I thought book had a good premise but there are some things i dont like. 1. He had an SSS Rank Talent. Even If Summoners are bad, they should think that such a high talent is something worth. 2. I was hoping there is no girlfriend/friend betraying him cliche. 3. When Cinder was summoned we saw her rank but after that no info panel for the other dragons and Daven summoning was even skipped. 4. He was threatening to get that sap from the world tree using force. I dont like MC's that resort to force when they dont get something and the other party is innocent. That's were i left. All in all: Not my Jam

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VingadorVVX

I only read the initial chapters, but I liked the world so far. The world building and mc's power sound pretty interesting. The grammar is very good, nothing to say about that

2mth
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Nicholas_Morgan213

i love the development and the slow gaining of powers by the MC it's a good story

2mth
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Paulotut_Enriquez

First of all, it's awesome. But some things need more work. 1. Some stories are out of place. Especially the PENALTY QUEST "It is so drawn out, instead of giving it its own arc, you squeezed it into a penalty quest making it boring and out of place". It is a penalty quest event but it lasted more than 5 chapters I think. It made me feel like I skipped a hundred chapters. 2. PROLONGED SCENES, when the reaper guild triggered the signal jammer I was surprised that it took 2 chapters before the scene played out. I think you should cut it short OR go for the fight scene then insert the trigger activation close to the end so as not to waste the build-up. I hope this help. Keep up the good work

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jspencerlove

Up to chapter 182 I was enjoying the story, but 183-185 appear to be a platform malfunction. As if a totally different novel about a Gear Mage intruded. Customer support is useless again. I would love to read more about Alister but this other story is not even in the same universe. I'll check back to see it it gets fixed but otherwise I am done and will stop reading this story. Sad.

3mth
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BL00DY

Idk what's the use of even reading it. The first few chapters show that MC and everyone else are brainless and the rest of the novel will be simply razing everything with an OP MC and same old cliche plots. You make a new novel then at least put more effort into it, not cliche everything while adding a grain of your own wishes.

3mth
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Empyrium

Story is like many others of the kind, would say often even a bit better. Give it a try, but be warned that there are a lot of grammar mistakes. And author wont fix them or even try it. Read a bit into pay chapters and have to say, if grammar is important for you, dont buy them. If you can ignore those many mistakes go ahead

4mth
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rabearisoa_sariaka

c'est un bel œuvre.... peut-être un peu magique!

4mth
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Pan_Cakes

So alpha wolf dragon sigma male I hope MC continues to mog every little beta who dares get in his way 🐺🐺🐺😈😈😈😈😈

4mth
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Magorias

Found this recently, and it has quickly become my new must-read. Though the supporting character perspectives do not interest me, I have not found myself zoning out to do other things as I do with other books.

4mth
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David_Powers

Honestly it started out pretty good. the summoning was pretty cool the mc is ok and his power set seems alright. The problem is the pointless chapters that are 100% filler. this story as of chapter 110 is 40% filler chapters that either try to be funny or just another pov that doesn't really go anywhere. like the twins 2 chapters wasted on some dumb prank that wasn't funny in the slightest just to show how much the mc ate at the end of the 2nd filler chapter. reminds me of DBZ when goku was powering up for 5 episodes yelling all the while a flashback was happening.

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Beatriz_Batista_II

livro envolvente , com uma narrativa boa e que prende o leitor

4mth
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Daoistg1Knv0

histoire bien écrite et envoûtante j'ai hâte de lire la suite

4mth
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fist_immortal

Dragons! Dragons! Dragons! I like dragons!

4mth
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Raj_Shah_7152

Putting this review here, to remind me to pick this book up later

4mth
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The_Broken_Author

Honestly, this novel left a deep impression on me. I mean who would have expected such a an awesome novel to be hanging around the corner? The author really did a wonderful work. His narrative is just to wonderful and intriguing, the way he brings the characters to life, leaves me in complete awe. This, is a job well done.

4mth
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JOSHHHHHHM

I like it. A bit expensive for privilege.

4mth
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shoryadevraj

i want to find the Nobel in which men character was blind at the starting and orphan he was taken in some family for work because that family doesn't want anyone to see what they are doing he work for that family for sometime and after finding a cultivation technique in that family he regain his eye power can someone find this novel

4mth
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Zurbluris

Hello guys, it's the author here. Decided it was finally time to make my shameless review after 100 chapters. treated this as a QnA section where you can get answers to your questions, but no spoilers. when writing this novel I really wanted to create something unique that was not really out there yet, and as a fan of novels and comics that keep me guessing I was sure did the same here, weaving in little mysteries. The concept of dragon-mancers is an already explored yet not commonly used concept, so I combined it with a little apocalyptic Si-Fi setting. the begining part of the novel is a bit slow due to the fact I had to lay down some groundwork for future chapters. This is my best work yet and I'm really proud the amount of effort I put in this time. Hope you enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing. Thank you.

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AuthorEriElegbede

Peak! Peak! did is say Peak! Peak! This story is one of the absolute best I have read second to Solo leveling hype in my head 😤😤...

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Samanda_76

The writer's imagition is very vivid, given reality to the characters. I can see the story before me. The story comes alive. I strongly recommend this book

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