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second time am writing a review for you but man you are good don't let anyone tells you otherwise .
I read a few chapters and really enjoyed what I read, but from the moment the protagonist starts sharing his powers with other characters, It gives the feeling that he has lost his individuality, that which makes him special. I don't particularly like stories with this aspect. But other than that, the fanfic is very good. I was enjoying it. If you don't mind that aspect I described, I recommend you read it.
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Man… I don’t know where this author came from, but the things he writes are.. Top Keep going, this is fantastic Especially this Fic
A really good start, can’t wait to see what he does with all the money hes trying to get and whether he’ll be a hero or not. (Current chapter 25)
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Good story only needs more chapters lol Also I am wondering about merging things like different books to create an grimoire, different metals to create a better one, a metal with an animal to see if it creates a stronger defence, different animals with each other to grow basic talents, like an elephant, gorilla, tiger and other strong animals to create a physical strong animal, animals like crocodiles, hippo, turtle, armodillo and such to create an animal with strong defence and then merge the blood of these animals to himself or merge blood of himself into these animals to make them loyal/ tame to him. take blood of meta's aliens and the like to get their ability's. The options are limitless. Also merge the flowers together so instead of each time having to merge the powders he could just have the flower directly and take it from there and buy a plantage to grow them.
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one of the best dc fanfics. only problems would be upload schedule and that we dont really get told how much his strength increases from becoming a serpentkin and serpentbeast kin which makes it hard to know how strong he is from guessing, not really major problems just minor ones.
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A pretty damn good DC fanfic that doesn’t downplay the MC to meat ride the DC natives or depower DC characters to make the MC stupidly OP.
As of the time I am writing this review, it's on chapter 10, hoping the number will continue to grow. Personally, I like the story very much. There aren't many grammar errors, the MC isn't an idiot, and the system is simple, easy to understand, and quite powerful. The only thing that kinda sucks are the updates. But assuming that the author has a life outside of writing this story I think it's understandable.
Phenomenal story, I love this type of system story but there aren’t many out there and far fewer good ones. Please don’t drop it.
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🙏 A Unique & Entertaining Book. Anyways, Great Work Author 💯😎👍. Hope that this Book reaches it's grand completion without being drooped. 🙏 The only cons of this Book is slow updates. Hopufully Author fix that soon. 🙏
It has good start i like it has great potential I will also renew my review at 30 chapter if I want dropped
Has potential but need more frequent uploads. I will update my review once there is 30+ chaps(if this does not get dropped).
Upon reading your work I can't read anybody else because it doesn't have the same vibe or creativity its like all of the other stories all have the same author with the same mindset of how “systems” work
Reveal Spoiler second time am writing a review for you but man you are good don't let anyone tells you otherwise .
I read a few chapters and really enjoyed what I read, but from the moment the protagonist starts sharing his powers with other characters, It gives the feeling that he has lost his individuality, that which makes him special. I don't particularly like stories with this aspect. But other than that, the fanfic is very good. I was enjoying it. If you don't mind that aspect I described, I recommend you read it.
Reveal Spoiler Man… I don’t know where this author came from, but the things he writes are.. Top Keep going, this is fantastic Especially this Fic
A really good start, can’t wait to see what he does with all the money hes trying to get and whether he’ll be a hero or not. (Current chapter 25)
Reveal Spoiler Give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter
Good story only needs more chapters lol Also I am wondering about merging things like different books to create an grimoire, different metals to create a better one, a metal with an animal to see if it creates a stronger defence, different animals with each other to grow basic talents, like an elephant, gorilla, tiger and other strong animals to create a physical strong animal, animals like crocodiles, hippo, turtle, armodillo and such to create an animal with strong defence and then merge the blood of these animals to himself or merge blood of himself into these animals to make them loyal/ tame to him. take blood of meta's aliens and the like to get their ability's. The options are limitless. Also merge the flowers together so instead of each time having to merge the powders he could just have the flower directly and take it from there and buy a plantage to grow them.
Reveal Spoiler one of the best dc fanfics. only problems would be upload schedule and that we dont really get told how much his strength increases from becoming a serpentkin and serpentbeast kin which makes it hard to know how strong he is from guessing, not really major problems just minor ones.
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A pretty damn good DC fanfic that doesn’t downplay the MC to meat ride the DC natives or depower DC characters to make the MC stupidly OP.
As of the time I am writing this review, it's on chapter 10, hoping the number will continue to grow. Personally, I like the story very much. There aren't many grammar errors, the MC isn't an idiot, and the system is simple, easy to understand, and quite powerful. The only thing that kinda sucks are the updates. But assuming that the author has a life outside of writing this story I think it's understandable.
Phenomenal story, I love this type of system story but there aren’t many out there and far fewer good ones. Please don’t drop it.
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🙏 A Unique & Entertaining Book. Anyways, Great Work Author 💯😎👍. Hope that this Book reaches it's grand completion without being drooped. 🙏 The only cons of this Book is slow updates. Hopufully Author fix that soon. 🙏
It has good start i like it has great potential I will also renew my review at 30 chapter if I want dropped
Has potential but need more frequent uploads. I will update my review once there is 30+ chaps(if this does not get dropped).
Upon reading your work I can't read anybody else because it doesn't have the same vibe or creativity its like all of the other stories all have the same author with the same mindset of how “systems” work
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