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it's a good story. i just hope it stays a good story for after the fallout world. because that is when writing the story is going to get hard.
moronic implementation of a good idea and a simple retelling of the plot of the game with a slight change to the “abilities” of the heroine, if you want to read it, but enough is enough for me
this is a great book. Although there are few chapters the chapters are long one with a lot of content.I hope the author continues to update more in the near future. Happy July 4 guys also for the weapons and armour for the spy game like the sniper set and the spy set could you put up there stats and a small description for those of us who have never played the game. I'm asking because you put the sniper set to have a plus 20 guns skill but no other sets stats was shown.
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Love it so far (I’m on chapter 10) and it’s one of the best fallout si I’ve seen
One of the best Fallout fanfics that I've found in a while that is still ongoing. So far it’s awesome!
Finished reading at time of writing. (6 chapters total.) B- quality. Typos a plenty, mostly needs a quick proof-read to fix. The author does sadly have the habit of copying conversation dialogue (and dialogue flow) one-to-one with canon. Should mix it up a bit to be fresher, considering this is happening years before canon. Even saw the same two jokes from Fallout 3 used back to back, despite being set in the Mojave, delivered by a different character... Oh, and the "chatroom" is kinda pointless? Everyone is in a different universe, and only MC realizes that she is in a fictional universe. Doesn't realize the others are as well. No-one in the chat knows about any of the other's universes. (Could've been pretty interesting "helping" these otherwise canon characters grow with some spoilers about their universe.) ...Anyway, it means MC can't help them, and they can't help her, making it all seem pretty pointless... Still, B- quality. Lore is mostly on-point or needs some small tweaks. (Like having the Goodsprings bar radio broken years before canon, despite it breaking hours before New Vegas begins.) Fallout fics are rare, and good Fallout fics even more so. B- is a glowing recommendation.
it's a good story. i just hope it stays a good story for after the fallout world. because that is when writing the story is going to get hard.
moronic implementation of a good idea and a simple retelling of the plot of the game with a slight change to the “abilities” of the heroine, if you want to read it, but enough is enough for me
this is a great book. Although there are few chapters the chapters are long one with a lot of content.I hope the author continues to update more in the near future. Happy July 4 guys also for the weapons and armour for the spy game like the sniper set and the spy set could you put up there stats and a small description for those of us who have never played the game. I'm asking because you put the sniper set to have a plus 20 guns skill but no other sets stats was shown.
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One of the best Fallout fanfics that I've found in a while that is still ongoing. So far it’s awesome!
Finished reading at time of writing. (6 chapters total.) B- quality. Typos a plenty, mostly needs a quick proof-read to fix. The author does sadly have the habit of copying conversation dialogue (and dialogue flow) one-to-one with canon. Should mix it up a bit to be fresher, considering this is happening years before canon. Even saw the same two jokes from Fallout 3 used back to back, despite being set in the Mojave, delivered by a different character... Oh, and the "chatroom" is kinda pointless? Everyone is in a different universe, and only MC realizes that she is in a fictional universe. Doesn't realize the others are as well. No-one in the chat knows about any of the other's universes. (Could've been pretty interesting "helping" these otherwise canon characters grow with some spoilers about their universe.) ...Anyway, it means MC can't help them, and they can't help her, making it all seem pretty pointless... Still, B- quality. Lore is mostly on-point or needs some small tweaks. (Like having the Goodsprings bar radio broken years before canon, despite it breaking hours before New Vegas begins.) Fallout fics are rare, and good Fallout fics even more so. B- is a glowing recommendation.
Has potential to be a great story if it isn't dropped early