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So the Novel itself is pretty damn good, not gonna complain, definetly worth the read, the story is really interesting and way more complex then it may seem at the beginning. The only thing that kinda confuses me is, that after the first few chapters pretty much any reliance on the MCs Luck seems to not matter at all anymore, with I think one exeption. Its just not relevant. Still a great Story, but that just gave me the feeling that the Title doesnt really fit all that much, cuz he isnt the weakest, and his luck doesnt really matter for the story asides from the beginning.
Too much drama and stup*d decisions for me to bother reading, so I dropped it at chapter 6. Honestly this has a good concept and excellent grammar, so it's such a shame the execution was done poorly.
This was a good story. The last 3 chapters were a bit rushed. The worst part of the story was messing up and switching multiple names (it's Hela, not Hera) and the inconsistent He/She swapping of various characters. I'm still not sure if Elowen is male or female...
All in all a great story with plenty of action and adventure. The ending unfortunately did seem kind of rushed though.
Una novela bastante interesante en mi opinión hasta ahora eh leído unos 30 capítulos y los encuentro muy buenos sigue con el buen trabajo autor.
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What an excellent story. And it's a mix of my favorite trope, rebirth, matched with my third favorite trope, VR Game dive. Definitely recommend and I'm absolutely adding this to my F5 List.
well how should I put I dont like it . Mc is like side character or pawn participating in chess and ending is also boring Mc is same like other god but difference is he is mc of novel . In ending war he is just like general role in army not like shades or some powerful . I think in the end mc Beame god king but sigh . You read see u like but I dont like
So is this book complete or what?? Because it says complete but when I look at the chapters it says there r like 3-5 a week so I want to know if this book is still going because if it or then I MIGHT JUST MIGHT read it!!
In general this a a really fun novel to read. My only real complaint is the lack of consistency on characters gender or names. The author continues to mix up pronouns even in chapter 200+ and will put the wrong names in for even main characters.
Fairly rough at the beginning, but does a get a little better. Was a decent story to pass some time; however, the inconsistencies in story development is a bit of a turnoff.
Interesting world setting cuz the author said the game world wont merge with the original word but the game world do exist in the university? Stability of Updates is good, 3 chapters per day. Story Development, a bit slow but the plots are well arranged. Character Design: VERY GOOD！
At Chapter 50, and I really like the woman in the Bible. Can the author tell me who she is? I give you 5 stars plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very good, I'm enjoying the direction this story is taking and I hope the author doesn't let it fall apart. The plot so far is going very well, the characters are very good, it makes you angry with some, happy with others, and that's a good sign, once you empathize or antagonize the characters it's because the author has done a good job creating good characters in his story.
you should write more about helena, but anyway thanks for the chapters -------------------------------------------------------------------------
Best of the best, hope the suggestions of mine do help you！ cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers!
It been interesting so far, the author could make some corrections in some places. On that note, if you're a fan of an erotic, succubus, supernatural themed story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
5 stars cuz I love this story, When i pick up the keyboard and what to write a story with overpower MC, i find myself a little hesitated. This time, I want to write sth new, You may have SSS talent , ur level may high above other players, but the game is not just about power, level and talent. This time, I wish both I and my dear readers can enjoy the game world itself, and that's the only thing i can guarantee is: I do put a lot of effort in the world building, you may find this story's pace is a bit slower from my other work, but it's plot is the best of them. Hope you enjoy the reading and the upcoming chapters won't let you down! Beside, you can ask me everything under this review!
So the Novel itself is pretty damn good, not gonna complain, definetly worth the read, the story is really interesting and way more complex then it may seem at the beginning. The only thing that kinda confuses me is, that after the first few chapters pretty much any reliance on the MCs Luck seems to not matter at all anymore, with I think one exeption. Its just not relevant. Still a great Story, but that just gave me the feeling that the Title doesnt really fit all that much, cuz he isnt the weakest, and his luck doesnt really matter for the story asides from the beginning.
Too much drama and stup*d decisions for me to bother reading, so I dropped it at chapter 6. Honestly this has a good concept and excellent grammar, so it's such a shame the execution was done poorly.
This was a good story. The last 3 chapters were a bit rushed. The worst part of the story was messing up and switching multiple names (it's Hela, not Hera) and the inconsistent He/She swapping of various characters. I'm still not sure if Elowen is male or female...
All in all a great story with plenty of action and adventure. The ending unfortunately did seem kind of rushed though.
Una novela bastante interesante en mi opinión hasta ahora eh leído unos 30 capítulos y los encuentro muy buenos sigue con el buen trabajo autor.
Reveal Spoiler What an excellent story. And it's a mix of my favorite trope, rebirth, matched with my third favorite trope, VR Game dive. Definitely recommend and I'm absolutely adding this to my F5 List.
well how should I put I dont like it . Mc is like side character or pawn participating in chess and ending is also boring Mc is same like other god but difference is he is mc of novel . In ending war he is just like general role in army not like shades or some powerful . I think in the end mc Beame god king but sigh . You read see u like but I dont like
So is this book complete or what?? Because it says complete but when I look at the chapters it says there r like 3-5 a week so I want to know if this book is still going because if it or then I MIGHT JUST MIGHT read it!!
In general this a a really fun novel to read. My only real complaint is the lack of consistency on characters gender or names. The author continues to mix up pronouns even in chapter 200+ and will put the wrong names in for even main characters.
Fairly rough at the beginning, but does a get a little better. Was a decent story to pass some time; however, the inconsistencies in story development is a bit of a turnoff.
Interesting world setting cuz the author said the game world wont merge with the original word but the game world do exist in the university? Stability of Updates is good, 3 chapters per day. Story Development, a bit slow but the plots are well arranged. Character Design: VERY GOOD！
At Chapter 50, and I really like the woman in the Bible. Can the author tell me who she is? I give you 5 stars plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reveal Spoiler Very good, I'm enjoying the direction this story is taking and I hope the author doesn't let it fall apart. The plot so far is going very well, the characters are very good, it makes you angry with some, happy with others, and that's a good sign, once you empathize or antagonize the characters it's because the author has done a good job creating good characters in his story.
you should write more about helena, but anyway thanks for the chapters -------------------------------------------------------------------------
Best of the best, hope the suggestions of mine do help you！ cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers!
It been interesting so far, the author could make some corrections in some places. On that note, if you're a fan of an erotic, succubus, supernatural themed story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
5 stars cuz I love this story, When i pick up the keyboard and what to write a story with overpower MC, i find myself a little hesitated. This time, I want to write sth new, You may have SSS talent , ur level may high above other players, but the game is not just about power, level and talent. This time, I wish both I and my dear readers can enjoy the game world itself, and that's the only thing i can guarantee is: I do put a lot of effort in the world building, you may find this story's pace is a bit slower from my other work, but it's plot is the best of them. Hope you enjoy the reading and the upcoming chapters won't let you down! Beside, you can ask me everything under this review!