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Write a reviewFull 5 star for your work keep doing that... I recommend this book to all those webnovel readers that have burnt their brain cells in fighting Chinese patriotism ... Very good work... character are more down to earth not some toys for mc to play
Hello author, I'm from Brazil and I've been following foreign works for some time and when it comes to your work I can only applaud it because it's so good, I hope for more chapters soon because I'm very excited.
The translation is as good as it can be, and the writing too, the translator does a good job, the only reason why I didn't give it 5 stars is the story itself, obviously it's Chinese so you shouldn't expect much depth, but more than "Diary System" it should be "Completely Embarrassing Drama System", basically the system makes what you write in your diary happen in simulations that transmit those events and feelings to your current self, meaning all the internal drama, the conflicting feelings are your own doing and not real, it's like when you were a teenager and you fantasized about being a tragic hero who lost his family. Honestly, you shouldn't expect much, read this to pass the time and don't be too critical, it's like a popcorn movie that they show on TV on a Sunday.
Best. Translation/Adaptation. I. Have. Read. Author has ruined Webnovel for me as now my standards are much higher. Thanks a lot author. How very dare you
Well, I appreciate all the effort of the translator to do massive rewrites. Unfortunately that appears to mean cutting out huge chunks entirely, which can make for some really short chapters. Overall, I’d say this story is above average, with a pretty neat and moderately well done premise. The only thing about it I really very much dislike, is that an absolutely huge percentage of what’s written is translators notes and explanations. Maybe author notes too, I’m not sure. But seriously, like 40% of what’s on these pages is not part of the story. Very irritating. I mean, we get it translator, you have worked hard. You don’t need to remind us with several hundred words every chapter. And you don’t need to respond to comments in the actual chapters. Or even use an entire chapter to tell us something that honestly doesn’t matter … like a as done many times.
I've reached chapter 55 before writing this review: Writing quality receives four stars - this is a translation and then translator is doing a sandwich good job with very few mistakes here and there. But he also rants way too much at the beginning and end of each chapter. Updating stability received four stars - the chapter release rate is not constant and often times misses chapters daily. Story development receives two star - this is one of those fanfics wear people go down on the MC and insult him with the MC just takes it without retaliating. Except for that I kind of like the concept of the story and the flow of it. Character design receives one star - The personality of the MC constantly shifts as he receives memories from simulations and his feelings are not his own as they are artificially created by the system, it's as if the author insists on the MC having mental issues. It's kind of annoying really. World background received 3 stars - this is a Marvel AU world, not the author world creation so I'll just leave it at 3 stars
This story is great, it's like a bread with hot chocolate on a rainy afternoon, with loose clothes, socks, with a blanket around you and watching a series next to your partner.
While the premise was good. The execution was not. It becomes a cringe corny entry after the other. And to top it off the mc gets to believe them himself. Too much big family, love, hero, save everyone to my taste.
The story is good with good plot delicvery. But kinda annoying because author put too much of his thought in chapter not on sidenotes or simply make group chat for reader. It’s annoying and need to skip reading and find the start of the chapter then at the end of chapter full of what author wanna said to readers almost as much as the chapter itself. I mean this not light novel at all, more like a note of author to make a main line of the story. And this one shoudn’t been published yet. I wish author soon make a real light novel about this story.
The amount of effort you put into this is amazing, praise worthy. I really love this and I'm sad that you just stopped and disappeared 1 month ago and i hope you come back with a mass release of this.
i've been searching for a good story for so long and when i finally found one of the best written fics on this app again... it hasn't been updated in a month 💔
Yo, first i want to say that I really enjoy your work and that it is currently my favorite fic on this platform. I hope you're well in your life, and hope that you won't drop this novel. 👌🤌🤜🫡
This ff was a translation of the mtl, but the author decided to fix it to make it readable and ended up doing a fantastic job, this ff can't even be called a translation anymore, it's obviously a new story based on Marvel
I just realized that you didn't talk about Yelena Beleova, Natasha's younger sister. It would be cool to read her reaction to that. When will you come back ? We are waiting for you.... 😔😔😔😔
So I can attest that this is a lot better the the original MTL counterpart. I seriously applaud the author for taking the care needed to make this more readable. I love the premise and the whole plot. My only gripe would be the consistency of updates, but I also understand that this is not the author's main job and is most likely doing this as a hobby. So I understand the delay. I'm mostly just too excited waiting for the whole thing to be completed.
Please update, i really love your work. It doesn't give me a headache like the mtl vers ioni read. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the translator will be working miracles with the mtl. the mtl is terrible, not to mention that the original work is a beautiful mess, it can be said that this is an original work due to the work that the translator is doing. [this has been translated into english] [img=recommend]
The translation is definitely on point, but I dislike the story. Basically some of the characters have copies of MC's diaries, and MC's abilities strengthen the higher the trust was. That hooked my interest, but sadly it's just badly executed. The diary holders were the most manipulative and paranoid among the bunch, yet trust rate is higher than 50% already.
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Full 5 star for your work keep doing that... I recommend this book to all those webnovel readers that have burnt their brain cells in fighting Chinese patriotism ... Very good work... character are more down to earth not some toys for mc to play
Hello author, I'm from Brazil and I've been following foreign works for some time and when it comes to your work I can only applaud it because it's so good, I hope for more chapters soon because I'm very excited.
The translation is as good as it can be, and the writing too, the translator does a good job, the only reason why I didn't give it 5 stars is the story itself, obviously it's Chinese so you shouldn't expect much depth, but more than "Diary System" it should be "Completely Embarrassing Drama System", basically the system makes what you write in your diary happen in simulations that transmit those events and feelings to your current self, meaning all the internal drama, the conflicting feelings are your own doing and not real, it's like when you were a teenager and you fantasized about being a tragic hero who lost his family. Honestly, you shouldn't expect much, read this to pass the time and don't be too critical, it's like a popcorn movie that they show on TV on a Sunday.
Best. Translation/Adaptation. I. Have. Read. Author has ruined Webnovel for me as now my standards are much higher. Thanks a lot author. How very dare you
Well, I appreciate all the effort of the translator to do massive rewrites. Unfortunately that appears to mean cutting out huge chunks entirely, which can make for some really short chapters. Overall, I’d say this story is above average, with a pretty neat and moderately well done premise. The only thing about it I really very much dislike, is that an absolutely huge percentage of what’s written is translators notes and explanations. Maybe author notes too, I’m not sure. But seriously, like 40% of what’s on these pages is not part of the story. Very irritating. I mean, we get it translator, you have worked hard. You don’t need to remind us with several hundred words every chapter. And you don’t need to respond to comments in the actual chapters. Or even use an entire chapter to tell us something that honestly doesn’t matter … like a as done many times.
I've reached chapter 55 before writing this review: Writing quality receives four stars - this is a translation and then translator is doing a sandwich good job with very few mistakes here and there. But he also rants way too much at the beginning and end of each chapter. Updating stability received four stars - the chapter release rate is not constant and often times misses chapters daily. Story development receives two star - this is one of those fanfics wear people go down on the MC and insult him with the MC just takes it without retaliating. Except for that I kind of like the concept of the story and the flow of it. Character design receives one star - The personality of the MC constantly shifts as he receives memories from simulations and his feelings are not his own as they are artificially created by the system, it's as if the author insists on the MC having mental issues. It's kind of annoying really. World background received 3 stars - this is a Marvel AU world, not the author world creation so I'll just leave it at 3 stars
This story is great, it's like a bread with hot chocolate on a rainy afternoon, with loose clothes, socks, with a blanket around you and watching a series next to your partner.
While the premise was good. The execution was not. It becomes a cringe corny entry after the other. And to top it off the mc gets to believe them himself. Too much big family, love, hero, save everyone to my taste.
The story is good with good plot delicvery. But kinda annoying because author put too much of his thought in chapter not on sidenotes or simply make group chat for reader. It’s annoying and need to skip reading and find the start of the chapter then at the end of chapter full of what author wanna said to readers almost as much as the chapter itself. I mean this not light novel at all, more like a note of author to make a main line of the story. And this one shoudn’t been published yet. I wish author soon make a real light novel about this story.
The amount of effort you put into this is amazing, praise worthy. I really love this and I'm sad that you just stopped and disappeared 1 month ago and i hope you come back with a mass release of this.
i've been searching for a good story for so long and when i finally found one of the best written fics on this app again... it hasn't been updated in a month 💔
Yo, first i want to say that I really enjoy your work and that it is currently my favorite fic on this platform. I hope you're well in your life, and hope that you won't drop this novel. 👌🤌🤜🫡
This ff was a translation of the mtl, but the author decided to fix it to make it readable and ended up doing a fantastic job, this ff can't even be called a translation anymore, it's obviously a new story based on Marvel
I just realized that you didn't talk about Yelena Beleova, Natasha's younger sister. It would be cool to read her reaction to that. When will you come back ? We are waiting for you.... 😔😔😔😔
So I can attest that this is a lot better the the original MTL counterpart. I seriously applaud the author for taking the care needed to make this more readable. I love the premise and the whole plot. My only gripe would be the consistency of updates, but I also understand that this is not the author's main job and is most likely doing this as a hobby. So I understand the delay. I'm mostly just too excited waiting for the whole thing to be completed.
Please update, i really love your work. It doesn't give me a headache like the mtl vers ioni read. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the translator will be working miracles with the mtl. the mtl is terrible, not to mention that the original work is a beautiful mess, it can be said that this is an original work due to the work that the translator is doing. [this has been translated into english] [img=recommend]
The translation is definitely on point, but I dislike the story. Basically some of the characters have copies of MC's diaries, and MC's abilities strengthen the higher the trust was. That hooked my interest, but sadly it's just badly executed. The diary holders were the most manipulative and paranoid among the bunch, yet trust rate is higher than 50% already.
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters