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Write a reviewThis is my second review as I feel it needed another one….the story can be predictable at times but there’s only so much a human can do to make things unpredictable…Khione needs to come back and once she does this is automatically a 5 star
i like this novel but, please don't waste chapters on someone nobody likes Ajax he's an extra and your MC can already rival a god if he goes all out so don't make the fight longer, make it shorter for it to be cool and Baddass, you just make the fight longer if he fought someone like a god, that's all. it's just ive been reading so many novels with OP MC and it makes the readers don't support it because when they got so strong they'll nerf him for some random reason. I've read this from Victor of MTWABV before the chapter hits 800. "if i make OP mc, i shouldn't make him weak when fighting extra despite the enemies marvelous historical data, because they aren't the MC of my story"
It’s a good story, worth reading,but it loses our coz things are predictable cliches, at times, and my goddess Khione isn’t back yet either 😭🥹
Overall it's pretty good atleast to my test. I like op chad mcs and it has one. If mcs are likeable then i usually read it. But it's world building is not great. I still don't understand where the counties exist. And the power lvl is pretty inconsistent, at first it was represented by levels, but later the lvl system is completely gone. But great job author, keep it up.
The main character is truly unlikeable. I am not a big fan of forceful relationships. in my eyes forcing slaves to do your s*exual desires is r*pe, which is truly odd to write about in a "good" light. The main character to me seems kinda corny, I feel as if his character is an appeal to an edgy audience who feel as if they're cooler than they really are. The writing quality from what I can see isn't bad at all. The sentences and ideas are spun together well. It isn't hard to imagine the background the characters are in. And the main character no matter how unlikeable he is, the author does a good job at showing what type of character he is in just the first chapter. When writing a character who is not a good person, it really is difficult to still make them likable to the audience, in my humble opinion the execution leaves me with a bitter taste in my mouth. I also was not a fan of how the characters interacted with each other, the interactions felt a little too forced for me, too unrealistic. But it wasn't unrealistic in an interesting or funny type of way. All in all, if you are weirdly into r*pe or super edgy mc's (who is lowkey just a loser), this novel is worth a shot. Perhaps things get better later on.
Reveal SpoilerI like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update 🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
some chapter that should have been combined have been separated which makes it disappointing after the wait... rest all is are, too good to be real
A little too bloated for my taste. Plot progression is ridiculously slow. Nevertheless, quite entertaining.
Author a quick question ....will Nathan ever have a women in his harem who is not a virgin ...I mean like Helen of Troy ..she is just used goods you know... having girls in harem who are not virgin doesn't sound so good ....have you thought about it ?
honestly guys this book is very addicting to read. once you start you're hooked and feining for new chapters. I warn you now, you will enjoy it.
To be honest, I did not expect that I would be able to read the first chapters so well, everything was read in one breath, building peace, relationships, people, everything is fine, I do not like that dark topics were raised in the third volume, but I think it needs to be experienced, I can't wait for what it will happen next. One minus, the system and characteristics are missing, again, if you have already entered it, then you need to continue, although I myself understand that this is an easy way for the authors to type 500 characters in a chapter.
I really enjoyed the novel up until Volume 3, but after that, it took a direction I didn’t find appealing. The story began to focus heavily on background information—like what the gods are doing or events in other locations—and it moved away from focusing on the main character and their companions. While I understand the need for world-building, this extra information felt overwhelming and disconnected from the core plot that initially drew me in. Because of this, I’ve become less motivated to unlock and read new chapters. Even when I did, I didn’t enjoy them as much. Many of the chapters felt like filler, and I was hoping for more focus on the main storyline and character development. What’s more frustrating is the lack of response from the author. I left feedback and comments in hopes of some acknowledgment, but there’s been no reply—not even a simple like to show the feedback was seen. I even joined the Discord server, though it was initially for illustrations, but later I wanted to ask something about the novel with other fans and the author. However, there’s no dedicated channel for conversations, which makes it even more disappointing. It feels like readers’ voices aren’t being heard.
I'm going to be honest and say that the first volume of this novel was actually fire. But from the second volume the MC became way too arrogant and edgy, constantly threatening people, unable to hold a proper conversation with anyone. Maybe it's because of the new magic he got which supposedly mutes his emotions, but I haven't seen even flashes of his previous self. He hasn't thought about his vol 1 GFs (only once in Vol 2 I'm pretty sure) after getting separated, the only thing he has thought about is revenge. Maybe this changes when he finds a solution to his problem or reunites with the original gang, but I will be dropping this for now.
author would Nathan get his white hair look back in the future or would he just stay as he is
Reveal SpoilerAuthor a quick question ....every picture you posted on discord ..are they all going to be harem members?...even the gods??...
Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏
u made the goodness an arrogant being so people can agree with Mc , you should've made her innocent
Novel for Cultured Men only. With good amount of lemons, romance, story and a lot of waifus of different races! No NTR. NO YURI. Ask any questions and I will answer
This is my second review as I feel it needed another one….the story can be predictable at times but there’s only so much a human can do to make things unpredictable…Khione needs to come back and once she does this is automatically a 5 star
i like this novel but, please don't waste chapters on someone nobody likes Ajax he's an extra and your MC can already rival a god if he goes all out so don't make the fight longer, make it shorter for it to be cool and Baddass, you just make the fight longer if he fought someone like a god, that's all. it's just ive been reading so many novels with OP MC and it makes the readers don't support it because when they got so strong they'll nerf him for some random reason. I've read this from Victor of MTWABV before the chapter hits 800. "if i make OP mc, i shouldn't make him weak when fighting extra despite the enemies marvelous historical data, because they aren't the MC of my story"
It’s a good story, worth reading,but it loses our coz things are predictable cliches, at times, and my goddess Khione isn’t back yet either 😭🥹
Overall it's pretty good atleast to my test. I like op chad mcs and it has one. If mcs are likeable then i usually read it. But it's world building is not great. I still don't understand where the counties exist. And the power lvl is pretty inconsistent, at first it was represented by levels, but later the lvl system is completely gone. But great job author, keep it up.
The main character is truly unlikeable. I am not a big fan of forceful relationships. in my eyes forcing slaves to do your s*exual desires is r*pe, which is truly odd to write about in a "good" light. The main character to me seems kinda corny, I feel as if his character is an appeal to an edgy audience who feel as if they're cooler than they really are. The writing quality from what I can see isn't bad at all. The sentences and ideas are spun together well. It isn't hard to imagine the background the characters are in. And the main character no matter how unlikeable he is, the author does a good job at showing what type of character he is in just the first chapter. When writing a character who is not a good person, it really is difficult to still make them likable to the audience, in my humble opinion the execution leaves me with a bitter taste in my mouth. I also was not a fan of how the characters interacted with each other, the interactions felt a little too forced for me, too unrealistic. But it wasn't unrealistic in an interesting or funny type of way. All in all, if you are weirdly into r*pe or super edgy mc's (who is lowkey just a loser), this novel is worth a shot. Perhaps things get better later on.
Reveal SpoilerI like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update 🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
some chapter that should have been combined have been separated which makes it disappointing after the wait... rest all is are, too good to be real
A little too bloated for my taste. Plot progression is ridiculously slow. Nevertheless, quite entertaining.
Author a quick question ....will Nathan ever have a women in his harem who is not a virgin ...I mean like Helen of Troy ..she is just used goods you know... having girls in harem who are not virgin doesn't sound so good ....have you thought about it ?
honestly guys this book is very addicting to read. once you start you're hooked and feining for new chapters. I warn you now, you will enjoy it.
To be honest, I did not expect that I would be able to read the first chapters so well, everything was read in one breath, building peace, relationships, people, everything is fine, I do not like that dark topics were raised in the third volume, but I think it needs to be experienced, I can't wait for what it will happen next. One minus, the system and characteristics are missing, again, if you have already entered it, then you need to continue, although I myself understand that this is an easy way for the authors to type 500 characters in a chapter.
I really enjoyed the novel up until Volume 3, but after that, it took a direction I didn’t find appealing. The story began to focus heavily on background information—like what the gods are doing or events in other locations—and it moved away from focusing on the main character and their companions. While I understand the need for world-building, this extra information felt overwhelming and disconnected from the core plot that initially drew me in. Because of this, I’ve become less motivated to unlock and read new chapters. Even when I did, I didn’t enjoy them as much. Many of the chapters felt like filler, and I was hoping for more focus on the main storyline and character development. What’s more frustrating is the lack of response from the author. I left feedback and comments in hopes of some acknowledgment, but there’s been no reply—not even a simple like to show the feedback was seen. I even joined the Discord server, though it was initially for illustrations, but later I wanted to ask something about the novel with other fans and the author. However, there’s no dedicated channel for conversations, which makes it even more disappointing. It feels like readers’ voices aren’t being heard.
I'm going to be honest and say that the first volume of this novel was actually fire. But from the second volume the MC became way too arrogant and edgy, constantly threatening people, unable to hold a proper conversation with anyone. Maybe it's because of the new magic he got which supposedly mutes his emotions, but I haven't seen even flashes of his previous self. He hasn't thought about his vol 1 GFs (only once in Vol 2 I'm pretty sure) after getting separated, the only thing he has thought about is revenge. Maybe this changes when he finds a solution to his problem or reunites with the original gang, but I will be dropping this for now.
author would Nathan get his white hair look back in the future or would he just stay as he is
Reveal SpoilerAuthor a quick question ....every picture you posted on discord ..are they all going to be harem members?...even the gods??...
Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏
u made the goodness an arrogant being so people can agree with Mc , you should've made her innocent
Novel for Cultured Men only. With good amount of lemons, romance, story and a lot of waifus of different races! No NTR. NO YURI. Ask any questions and I will answer