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Lixo. Primeiro de tudo não é naruto nem é mil anos, pense mais como uma oc criada pelo autor com o nome de naruto em algumas de suas habilidades, não tem nenhuma personalidade de naruto nem nada parecido, tudo é forçado ao extremo e não tem construção de personagem, se você veio aqui pra ver um (naruto) kage após perder tudo e tendo sua evolução e tudo mais veio ao lugar errado, e apenas oc com o nome dele.
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Hello everyone, 5 episodes so far, I like the story because although it has just begun, it does not have exaggerated things to take Naruto to another world, due to the plot he lands in a certain place (if I say so it is a spoiler) and it has emotions that They would destroy anyone, but being Naruto he manages to maintain a bit of stability, the only thing the author adds is that Naruto is aware of himself because I see that he has free thinking and a bit of his own arrogance, as for the episodes, a bit crazy unlike the canon because it is almost a mockery on the part of the author that I agree a little when reading it. FINALLY, UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS, AUTHOR OF FANFIC LAZY.
I won't say much, but naruto in this fic is weak. Not necessarily weak in terms of power, but his mind and his will are feeble. It's like I'm reading about a worse version of child naruto. He has none of the wisdom and acumen that you'd expect from a Kage. Besides that he's lost kurama and his Chakra. When I read the synopsis I was expecting a wizened naruto that had grown into his position as a hokage and perhaps had taken his training seriously after learning that he would have to be a harder man to be a good hokage. What I got instead was a weak minded fool, even worse than the child naruto in the OG series who doesn't seem to have improved at all since the fourth Shinobi war. Sad. Lots of potential but it fell short.
Reveal Spoiler Lixo. Primeiro de tudo não é naruto nem é mil anos, pense mais como uma oc criada pelo autor com o nome de naruto em algumas de suas habilidades, não tem nenhuma personalidade de naruto nem nada parecido, tudo é forçado ao extremo e não tem construção de personagem, se você veio aqui pra ver um (naruto) kage após perder tudo e tendo sua evolução e tudo mais veio ao lugar errado, e apenas oc com o nome dele.
Reveal Spoiler Hello everyone, 5 episodes so far, I like the story because although it has just begun, it does not have exaggerated things to take Naruto to another world, due to the plot he lands in a certain place (if I say so it is a spoiler) and it has emotions that They would destroy anyone, but being Naruto he manages to maintain a bit of stability, the only thing the author adds is that Naruto is aware of himself because I see that he has free thinking and a bit of his own arrogance, as for the episodes, a bit crazy unlike the canon because it is almost a mockery on the part of the author that I agree a little when reading it. FINALLY, UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS, AUTHOR OF FANFIC LAZY.
I won't say much, but naruto in this fic is weak. Not necessarily weak in terms of power, but his mind and his will are feeble. It's like I'm reading about a worse version of child naruto. He has none of the wisdom and acumen that you'd expect from a Kage. Besides that he's lost kurama and his Chakra. When I read the synopsis I was expecting a wizened naruto that had grown into his position as a hokage and perhaps had taken his training seriously after learning that he would have to be a harder man to be a good hokage. What I got instead was a weak minded fool, even worse than the child naruto in the OG series who doesn't seem to have improved at all since the fourth Shinobi war. Sad. Lots of potential but it fell short.
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