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Great book, it has gotten better the further along I've read. The author has definitely improved and for their own style. I look forward to more chapters.
Ladies and gentlemen this story is an absolute banger. I read the prologue and it almost made me drop this amazing story. I was so wrong. If you aren't sure whether or not to read this story just read the latest chapter. 17:8 is crazy!
I've been reading this for a while now trying to withhold judgement until there's enough material to judge, but with the last chapter and the author asking for some comments I'll give some thoughts. This story is extremely good. It's a shame that it hasn't taken off already. It's been light on the action so far, but the magic feels absolutely crazy. I dont think I've ever read such a well thought out magical system and the world seems so in-depth it borders on perverse. If ATriste sticks with this story it will take off eventually, you hear me author? STICK WITH THIS ITS FANTASTIC!
Great book by the author, nice plot, great story telling and world build. would 100% recommend.
This is a good story. The author writes really well. The world seems to have a lot of depth, and the style is different from other cultivation novels. It almost feels like I'm reading Harry Potter, but cultivation. The magic is interesting but also mysterious. The main character isn't OP. He might end up OP, though, considering the latest chapter. It's a good start.
The writing quality is great and so is the world background. The main character seems... Interesting, to say the least. I'm a little bit confused about Ea though. The story is slow paced and very descriptive. You can feel the main characters sensations as he experiences certain things and the world is vividly described. The story has a lot of potential, and though this may not make sense, it kinda reminds me of ATLA which was awesome. dunno what exactly though. Maybe I'm just imagining things.
Thank you for the chapter! Alright, it seems like we're finally getting some forward development at the end of this chapter. Not to mention, there are elves and dwarves in this world. Let's see what Favner has up his sleeve.
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I like the perspective of the characters. It's not a traditional cultivation story. I'd say it's more fantasy, but it's not bad, and the splash of romance is nice.
So far, the story is quite good. It's well written, and the author has been updating consistently. Will keep posted as the story progresses. So, far things are interesting, but the development is slow, I guess it might be a slow burn. We'll see.
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Great book, it has gotten better the further along I've read. The author has definitely improved and for their own style. I look forward to more chapters.
Ladies and gentlemen this story is an absolute banger. I read the prologue and it almost made me drop this amazing story. I was so wrong. If you aren't sure whether or not to read this story just read the latest chapter. 17:8 is crazy!
I've been reading this for a while now trying to withhold judgement until there's enough material to judge, but with the last chapter and the author asking for some comments I'll give some thoughts. This story is extremely good. It's a shame that it hasn't taken off already. It's been light on the action so far, but the magic feels absolutely crazy. I dont think I've ever read such a well thought out magical system and the world seems so in-depth it borders on perverse. If ATriste sticks with this story it will take off eventually, you hear me author? STICK WITH THIS ITS FANTASTIC!
Great book by the author, nice plot, great story telling and world build. would 100% recommend.
This is a good story. The author writes really well. The world seems to have a lot of depth, and the style is different from other cultivation novels. It almost feels like I'm reading Harry Potter, but cultivation. The magic is interesting but also mysterious. The main character isn't OP. He might end up OP, though, considering the latest chapter. It's a good start.
The writing quality is great and so is the world background. The main character seems... Interesting, to say the least. I'm a little bit confused about Ea though. The story is slow paced and very descriptive. You can feel the main characters sensations as he experiences certain things and the world is vividly described. The story has a lot of potential, and though this may not make sense, it kinda reminds me of ATLA which was awesome. dunno what exactly though. Maybe I'm just imagining things.
Thank you for the chapter! Alright, it seems like we're finally getting some forward development at the end of this chapter. Not to mention, there are elves and dwarves in this world. Let's see what Favner has up his sleeve.
Reveal Spoiler I like the perspective of the characters. It's not a traditional cultivation story. I'd say it's more fantasy, but it's not bad, and the splash of romance is nice.
So far, the story is quite good. It's well written, and the author has been updating consistently. Will keep posted as the story progresses. So, far things are interesting, but the development is slow, I guess it might be a slow burn. We'll see.
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