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After Seraphina's escape, the story becomes captivating. However, the characters could be more relatable, and the plot feels rushed at times. It's a decent read, but I was hoping for a bit more depth.
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This ongoing story is a captivating journey filled with suspense, drama, and unexpected turns at every corner. Seraphina's quest for revenge against the crown prince takes a complex turn when she finds herself entangled in a web of emotions, including love and desire. The evolving dynamics between Seraphina and Alexander keep readers hooked, eagerly awaiting each new chapter to see how their relationship unfolds. With each twist and revelation, the plot thickens, leaving readers on the edge of their seats and hungry for more. If you're a fan of gripping narratives with intricate character development, this story is a must-read.
Author here the first chapters are really short but it gets better. This was the first story i wrote on this platform so was unsure with the word count at first. However, in newer chapters you would be able to enjoy the story better as i have increased the length of the chapters.Thank you and also stick around !!
Hello, I am creating a writers first platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and contests at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels.com), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
After Seraphina's escape, the story becomes captivating. However, the characters could be more relatable, and the plot feels rushed at times. It's a decent read, but I was hoping for a bit more depth.
Reveal Spoiler This ongoing story is a captivating journey filled with suspense, drama, and unexpected turns at every corner. Seraphina's quest for revenge against the crown prince takes a complex turn when she finds herself entangled in a web of emotions, including love and desire. The evolving dynamics between Seraphina and Alexander keep readers hooked, eagerly awaiting each new chapter to see how their relationship unfolds. With each twist and revelation, the plot thickens, leaving readers on the edge of their seats and hungry for more. If you're a fan of gripping narratives with intricate character development, this story is a must-read.
Author here the first chapters are really short but it gets better. This was the first story i wrote on this platform so was unsure with the word count at first. However, in newer chapters you would be able to enjoy the story better as i have increased the length of the chapters.Thank you and also stick around !!
Hello, I am creating a writers first platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and contests at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels.com), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!