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This story is very good and well structured. But there are times where I fright whose the main character, main character is Orion. Also I hope the Augtor puts in the PoV
I'm really proud of you. While reading the book, I feel like I'm watching anime in front of the television. I believe it is very difficult for writers to create this feeling. But you can achieve this beautifully. I see that you put a lot of effort. I hope you can get the reward of your efforts soon.[img=update][img=recommend]
It's a very original concept, thrusting the reader into a game of chess. Not literally, you see. You'll have to read to understand what I mean. This is an action-packed novel, the fights might sometimes seem like the main character is overpowered, although I think that just adds spice. The writing can be enhanced and the author is actively improving, although for now I'd give the writing a passing grade as the author's thoughts and expressions are still being understood by the reader.
already got captivated by the first 4 chapters❤️. It is filled with beautiful characters who make the novel more intriguing. Beautifully written ❤️
The Arbiter concept along with the overall world creation is well done! Interactions between the characters are great. However the grammar is a bit iffy but that’s alright we can improve upon that. Keep it up!
A few chapters into this and I can already tell it's off to an entertaining start. The opening acts do a nice job setting the anime-stage. Fun read for lovers of this genre. I'd def recommend.
This story has quite an original concept, I like the Arbiters and the world building is interesting. Clashes between factions and colorful side characters give it a real anime feeling. However the language can be pretty rough and hard to follow at points. If the author puts more work into the grammar this could easily become a 5-star, I'm sure it will only get better over time!
You guys better read it and jump into the world of fantasy and enjoy. I must admit, I am completely engrossed in your world and cannot wait to reach the end. The way you have developed your characters and intricately crafted their journeys has left me emotionally invested in their fates. AJA AJA AJA FIGHTINGGGGG
The sypnosis caught my eye at first try and the idea it imprints on the readers mind is amazing. The first chapter instantly caught my attention and I felt the need to go on. This story is only on its building blocks but has already become a work of art. Keep up the good work
WARNING ⚠️- FIRST VOLUME CONTAINS 4K WORDS (LONG CHAPTERS) GRAMMAR MISTAKES- YES UPDATE STABILITY- MINIMUM 3 CHS/WEEK INACTIVITY STATUS- CAN HAPPEN ANYTIME JUDGE STORY/NOVEL- DECIDE YOURSELF CRITICISM- ACCEPTED ✅ BAD REVIEWS- ACCEPTED ✅ PRAISE- ACCEPTED ✅ GOOD REVIEWS- ACCEPTED ✅ GIFTS- ACCEPTED ✅
This story is very good and well structured. But there are times where I fright whose the main character, main character is Orion. Also I hope the Augtor puts in the PoV
I'm really proud of you. While reading the book, I feel like I'm watching anime in front of the television. I believe it is very difficult for writers to create this feeling. But you can achieve this beautifully. I see that you put a lot of effort. I hope you can get the reward of your efforts soon.[img=update][img=recommend]
It's a very original concept, thrusting the reader into a game of chess. Not literally, you see. You'll have to read to understand what I mean. This is an action-packed novel, the fights might sometimes seem like the main character is overpowered, although I think that just adds spice. The writing can be enhanced and the author is actively improving, although for now I'd give the writing a passing grade as the author's thoughts and expressions are still being understood by the reader.
already got captivated by the first 4 chapters❤️. It is filled with beautiful characters who make the novel more intriguing. Beautifully written ❤️
The Arbiter concept along with the overall world creation is well done! Interactions between the characters are great. However the grammar is a bit iffy but that’s alright we can improve upon that. Keep it up!
A few chapters into this and I can already tell it's off to an entertaining start. The opening acts do a nice job setting the anime-stage. Fun read for lovers of this genre. I'd def recommend.
This story has quite an original concept, I like the Arbiters and the world building is interesting. Clashes between factions and colorful side characters give it a real anime feeling. However the language can be pretty rough and hard to follow at points. If the author puts more work into the grammar this could easily become a 5-star, I'm sure it will only get better over time!
You guys better read it and jump into the world of fantasy and enjoy. I must admit, I am completely engrossed in your world and cannot wait to reach the end. The way you have developed your characters and intricately crafted their journeys has left me emotionally invested in their fates. AJA AJA AJA FIGHTINGGGGG
The sypnosis caught my eye at first try and the idea it imprints on the readers mind is amazing. The first chapter instantly caught my attention and I felt the need to go on. This story is only on its building blocks but has already become a work of art. Keep up the good work
WARNING ⚠️- FIRST VOLUME CONTAINS 4K WORDS (LONG CHAPTERS) GRAMMAR MISTAKES- YES UPDATE STABILITY- MINIMUM 3 CHS/WEEK INACTIVITY STATUS- CAN HAPPEN ANYTIME JUDGE STORY/NOVEL- DECIDE YOURSELF CRITICISM- ACCEPTED ✅ BAD REVIEWS- ACCEPTED ✅ PRAISE- ACCEPTED ✅ GOOD REVIEWS- ACCEPTED ✅ GIFTS- ACCEPTED ✅