PLEASE READ:How to survive the multiverse by dying every day! Instead.

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Rusty_noddle12

the pacing of the story is very fast, too fast even. As you mentioned in the story, the events that Kenichi had days, weeks, and months to prepare for were squeezed into a few days. You have put in the story that he had years to hone his senses when it should have been more of a simile because he's only had days. Drawbacks or Banes, as you put it, we're perfectly fine, didn't have any problem with it, what's up with people and wanting to kill everyone? My best guess as to why the story is currently so fast is because it's still the prologue, and you wanted to get to the meat of the story(Sorry vegans and animal protesters). The progress of his relationship is also very fast, I'm not sure if that's good or bad, but it went from PG13 to R17 in a few chapters. Kinda sad what happened to his Banes, I've only read one fan fiction where the main character didn't kill. Hopefully, it remains a last resort. Powerscaling is probably the biggest reason to me that the story felt fast-paced because in 20 chapters, it went from schoolyard bullies, to city destroyers. Loved the choices in the world hop and direction the story is going. I wish I knew where the powersystems came from, I only recognize 3 of the mentioned since chapter 20something. Characters are developing very well, I'm getting some idea of their current ideals I think, but I'd love if he was just a tad bit more family oriented, though that's just personal preference as someone that believes that family is more important than a lot of things including self preservation. Awesome story, and solidly recommend reading now, now that intro arc is finished and new one is starting. ( What's up with the silver hair people being set up as overpowered, then getting thoroughly manhandled (Sorry feminist) recently? 😅)

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InterPlanarGod

I appreciate the person who removed their unreasonable review after giving it a second chance! Remember to read, review, and enjoy! As the author, I am extremely biased. Please keep me in check OR praise me. But don't do so until you have read up to chapter 25 and interlude 1 and interlewd 1.

LV 13

InterPlanarGod

Yuri_Is_NTR is now banned from this book. if he comments on the story or reviews it, those comments and reviews will be deleted. stop with your nonsense and stop harassing me.

LV 12

M_OB

hmm this was a good fanfic the only thing I don't like sometimes mc act stupid. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR

LV 6

EmbarrassedEdge

It different from most fanfics and updates are frequenct.

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Angel_Whis

Thank you for sharing your work, author. I enjoyed it and I hope you will continue writing.

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BoTMaster

Is there any yuri 🤢, I hope there isn't....................................................................................................

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InterPlanarGod

Shameless 5 star review, read it here or at QQ. :D lets gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo