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it's bearable grammar. also can you please add more space on each paragraph? it's need a lot of focus to not missed something important. sigh... a good novel actually.
It’s pretty good story with a lot of potential. I have read a few lotm x nasuverse crossing before but this is the most fun to read.[img=recommend]
Author here, just got bored of not having anything to read from the fanfic section and decided to try out one of my more intrusive thoughts. Still working out how to write effectivly but at least I’m trying! Very open to constructive feedback. If you are a troll then meh. Have fun and leave comments!
This is one of the best fanfics I've read in a while, and it's from books/games that I absolutely love. Author, you are great and I love reading your stuff, So please continue. I love the idea of Mother of Mysteries, the shroud, and the Marble of Oblivion. Great Great Great!
it's bearable grammar. also can you please add more space on each paragraph? it's need a lot of focus to not missed something important. sigh... a good novel actually.
It’s pretty good story with a lot of potential. I have read a few lotm x nasuverse crossing before but this is the most fun to read.[img=recommend]
Author here, just got bored of not having anything to read from the fanfic section and decided to try out one of my more intrusive thoughts. Still working out how to write effectivly but at least I’m trying! Very open to constructive feedback. If you are a troll then meh. Have fun and leave comments!
This is one of the best fanfics I've read in a while, and it's from books/games that I absolutely love. Author, you are great and I love reading your stuff, So please continue. I love the idea of Mother of Mysteries, the shroud, and the Marble of Oblivion. Great Great Great!