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Write a reviewa top tier fanfic involving a symbiote. excellent writing and development, characters aren't cliche drones or paper cutouts, there is a distinct progression without feeling too powerless or overpowered, (no sudden nerfs. a weakness is used as a thing to overcome and work around rather than a stupid plot device to nerf the character. and they work towards improving and removing weaknesses.) the mc was a bit cold and seemed a bit unhinged in the beginning, but there is genuine character development and growth, without that character flaw taking center stage and ruining the story. not sure what else to say, other than it was a very enjoyable read.
Okay look you needa check like almost every single time El says something cus those sentences got butchered hard. Just entire words missing. Also, description made me think thered be no 18+ stuff early on and then the entire tentacle cumjuice stuff happens so yeah
Honestly, it's quite the amusing read so far. There's some light cringe here and there, but more or less intentional, and not "bad" or whatever. Overall, it's quite enjoyable and worth a read, but that's just my opinion lol. hopefully the updates keep on rolling lol
Pretty interesting story, if you like a more grey character with tendencies for slaughter, you know, the usual symbiote stuff. There's also some tentacle-yuri stuff going on, so if that's not your cup of tea, you've been warned. The main character is pretty messed up in the head but in a interesting way, not like some of the dark main characters that usually turn edgy and angsty. My only complain are the massive paragraphs in the first 30 or so chapters, other than that, there are some details here and there but those are more from a personal view. It's definitely a good read!
the story was fine until the asgard arc like you went out of your way to cause problems and it really is ruining this whole story she didn't need to do anything but you decided she should follow thor to asgard and beat up loki for no reason just to make her fall asleep with magic even tho you can't mentally interfere with a symbiote considering it's part of the symbiote God you know one of the most powerful people in marvel but you decided sleep magic should work on it
I quite likely like your story and am being curious to see what will happen, hope you'll keep updating your story and keep the quality of your story.
The way MC forces themselves within the plot in my eyes is not smart yes I know they are written to be a fan, but it just seems she just lacks the intelligence to do her own thing. In comparison, I like that the author did give the MC a different symbiote than Venom good job on that. Though this story is only 39 chapters in I do hope when i come back to it the author can improve.
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VERY s/utty but a good read for anyone who likes that with some action/adventure.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Loved the mcu and venom. Always wanted a good symbiote story that didnโt just drop so hopefully you keep goin. The writing quality is good, just sometimes there weird parts, otherwise itโs all fine
why do she have to get involved with the plot can she not just do her own thing why do need shield and the other super heros if shes's a vigilante
To start with i really love the idea behind the story, and the interactions between the the characters also feel naturel with the differing personalities, speaking slightly different. I also want to say the pacing is good but, since there is only 15 ch atm it's not easy for me to tell. And even the quality of the writing is good, as i haven't seen any spelling mistakes that took away my immersion. So to sum it up, great story and continue doing what you are and i believe it will be a fantastic read
Didnโt really have high expectations when I saw that this was a symbiote fanfic, but this piece of art blew me away. Itโs engaging and fun to read first of all. The characters feels real and not some phony dream versions. My only ick with this book is that I read the chapters faster then the author can make emโ๐ 5/5, excellent job. Keep going. p.s. if you ever decide to make a pa tr eon, you have my vote.
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐Muy buena historia, quiero leer mรกs๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
It is quite enjoyable, and the use of powers and how those powers interact with the powers and abilities of others is very interesting and well structured
a top tier fanfic involving a symbiote. excellent writing and development, characters aren't cliche drones or paper cutouts, there is a distinct progression without feeling too powerless or overpowered, (no sudden nerfs. a weakness is used as a thing to overcome and work around rather than a stupid plot device to nerf the character. and they work towards improving and removing weaknesses.) the mc was a bit cold and seemed a bit unhinged in the beginning, but there is genuine character development and growth, without that character flaw taking center stage and ruining the story. not sure what else to say, other than it was a very enjoyable read.
Okay look you needa check like almost every single time El says something cus those sentences got butchered hard. Just entire words missing. Also, description made me think thered be no 18+ stuff early on and then the entire tentacle cumjuice stuff happens so yeah
Honestly, it's quite the amusing read so far. There's some light cringe here and there, but more or less intentional, and not "bad" or whatever. Overall, it's quite enjoyable and worth a read, but that's just my opinion lol. hopefully the updates keep on rolling lol
Pretty interesting story, if you like a more grey character with tendencies for slaughter, you know, the usual symbiote stuff. There's also some tentacle-yuri stuff going on, so if that's not your cup of tea, you've been warned. The main character is pretty messed up in the head but in a interesting way, not like some of the dark main characters that usually turn edgy and angsty. My only complain are the massive paragraphs in the first 30 or so chapters, other than that, there are some details here and there but those are more from a personal view. It's definitely a good read!
the story was fine until the asgard arc like you went out of your way to cause problems and it really is ruining this whole story she didn't need to do anything but you decided she should follow thor to asgard and beat up loki for no reason just to make her fall asleep with magic even tho you can't mentally interfere with a symbiote considering it's part of the symbiote God you know one of the most powerful people in marvel but you decided sleep magic should work on it
I quite likely like your story and am being curious to see what will happen, hope you'll keep updating your story and keep the quality of your story.
The way MC forces themselves within the plot in my eyes is not smart yes I know they are written to be a fan, but it just seems she just lacks the intelligence to do her own thing. In comparison, I like that the author did give the MC a different symbiote than Venom good job on that. Though this story is only 39 chapters in I do hope when i come back to it the author can improve.
Tentacle +18 ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
VERY s/utty but a good read for anyone who likes that with some action/adventure.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Loved the mcu and venom. Always wanted a good symbiote story that didnโt just drop so hopefully you keep goin. The writing quality is good, just sometimes there weird parts, otherwise itโs all fine
why do she have to get involved with the plot can she not just do her own thing why do need shield and the other super heros if shes's a vigilante
To start with i really love the idea behind the story, and the interactions between the the characters also feel naturel with the differing personalities, speaking slightly different. I also want to say the pacing is good but, since there is only 15 ch atm it's not easy for me to tell. And even the quality of the writing is good, as i haven't seen any spelling mistakes that took away my immersion. So to sum it up, great story and continue doing what you are and i believe it will be a fantastic read
Didnโt really have high expectations when I saw that this was a symbiote fanfic, but this piece of art blew me away. Itโs engaging and fun to read first of all. The characters feels real and not some phony dream versions. My only ick with this book is that I read the chapters faster then the author can make emโ๐ 5/5, excellent job. Keep going. p.s. if you ever decide to make a pa tr eon, you have my vote.
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐Muy buena historia, quiero leer mรกs๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
It is quite enjoyable, and the use of powers and how those powers interact with the powers and abilities of others is very interesting and well structured