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Очень интересно получилось. Увлекательное повествование и довольно живые персонажи. Мне не хватало POV MC и интерлюдий. Но и так хорошо написано
Es lo máxima puntuación que puedo dar, la historia avanza muy rápido y mete habilidades de otros animes como Bleach...................................,...............................,...............................,
author you truly cooked this is the peak of jujutsu i look forward to your next creations.
.......................................................................................Goated jjk fanfic.......................................................................................
Goated truly goated author San I hearby declare that throughout all heaven and earth you alone are the heavenly writer 💋
This is THE Peak. I came across this thinking might as well read a sh*tty fanfic while waiting for other fanfics to update, boy im glad i was wrong about this being just another 'sh*tty' fanfic. This is one of the best fanfic ive read on this app.
this is just amazing. just completed the story and this is amazing I say. from jjk development to world development, economic and everything. and ending was great!
To keep it short and sweet (and not to discourage anyone), I liked parts of it, didn’t care for others. It had its problems and it’s strength and for a casual read it’s definitely a fun one.
Cara uma história bem um 7/10 ~ 8/10 um bom prato para quem está com dificuldade de achar uma para passar o tempo .....................................
Great story from beginning to end loved the journey from beginning to end and am glad I was on this journey Thank you so much for the time and effort you put in
well done❤. please write another one on seven deadly sins . i never really find any good fan fiction on that anime so please try. love your work
Exceptional chapters as well as story and great character development with a fitting end to the story. Great work
Great novel, definitely worth reading. It's also completed which is a big plus.
I thinks a pretty solid fanfiction althought the slang the author uses becomes a bit insufferable but if you push past that it's fairly good. I think the author underestimates the butterfly effect that someone like mc would have and nice to see some good endings for otherwise dead characters in canon. 6/10 overall
goated fic, I'd definitely recommend. but that "most handsome man in Japan" plot point was kinda useless lol
(PT-BR) Por favor autor não desanime com os comentários ruins, eu estou gostando bastante da história e de pra onde ela está caminhando e estou gostando do ritmo também, tenha consciência de que nem mesmo Deus consegue agradar todo mundo e foque em fazer uma história que você ache boa, só não exagere e mude totalmente o curso da história como os chineses fazer hahahahaha.
(PT-BR) Eu estou gostando bastante de história, tá se desenvolvendo bem e não está saindo muito do universo de Jujutsu no sentido que tipo não está mudando muito como funciona o Jujutsu.
You gotta work on the charachter personality and interactions all in all the fanfic is good tho
Ok, I have a problem with the novel, the interactions of the characters are robotic, there is no feeling behind the dialogues, an example of this is the death of the protagonist's parents, both times, in the same chapter, it is just these characters warning that they are going to die like "I'm going to die, ok?" which removes absolutely all the weight behind the "event". Furthermore, the pace of the novel feels extremely rushed from one moment to the next, there are jumps of events without any type of development. Also from time to time there is a focus on things not very relevant to the general immersion of the novel, again for example, in the same chapter as the last example the protagonist creates a wooden dragon to test his powers (which he obtained if I must add without no effort) but for some reason the author unnecessarily adds a paragraph where he explains "improvements" to the dragon's design, I understand the point of view when writing because you as the author have an idea in your head of what happens, but it is redundant to describe it to the reader Because over-explaining kills the reader's ability to delve into the narrative. Lastly and much more personally, I understand the admiration for other cultures, but when reading a story of the type the author is trying to write it is difficult for immersion to suddenly encounter Japanese words and subsequently their translation even going to the point of adding hiragana or katakana, It seems like a poor decision to try to educate? Through a story if what you want is for the reader to immerse themselves in your world. Apart from this I wish the author great success.
It's good and new concept senju Hashirama god of shinobi world in jjk it's going to be way good and I hope you continue it I am supporting it
boring. it was just straight boring. everything was just sped through and not really thought out. the was no emotion or feelings at all. everything just felt so dull and emotionless like he just didn't really care
This seems to be a regular occurrence in Webnovel rating your own fanfic as 5-Stars so I might as well join in this particular occurrence. -When in Rome Do as the Romans Do
Dude! Are you not going to make more Fanfics? This one was really amazing and I'm sure others will also be thrilled if you came up with another great fanFic.
Очень интересно получилось. Увлекательное повествование и довольно живые персонажи. Мне не хватало POV MC и интерлюдий. Но и так хорошо написано
Es lo máxima puntuación que puedo dar, la historia avanza muy rápido y mete habilidades de otros animes como Bleach...................................,...............................,...............................,
author you truly cooked this is the peak of jujutsu i look forward to your next creations.
.......................................................................................Goated jjk fanfic.......................................................................................
Goated truly goated author San I hearby declare that throughout all heaven and earth you alone are the heavenly writer 💋
This is THE Peak. I came across this thinking might as well read a sh*tty fanfic while waiting for other fanfics to update, boy im glad i was wrong about this being just another 'sh*tty' fanfic. This is one of the best fanfic ive read on this app.
this is just amazing. just completed the story and this is amazing I say. from jjk development to world development, economic and everything. and ending was great!
To keep it short and sweet (and not to discourage anyone), I liked parts of it, didn’t care for others. It had its problems and it’s strength and for a casual read it’s definitely a fun one.
Cara uma história bem um 7/10 ~ 8/10 um bom prato para quem está com dificuldade de achar uma para passar o tempo .....................................
Great story from beginning to end loved the journey from beginning to end and am glad I was on this journey Thank you so much for the time and effort you put in
well done❤. please write another one on seven deadly sins . i never really find any good fan fiction on that anime so please try. love your work
Exceptional chapters as well as story and great character development with a fitting end to the story. Great work
Great novel, definitely worth reading. It's also completed which is a big plus.
I thinks a pretty solid fanfiction althought the slang the author uses becomes a bit insufferable but if you push past that it's fairly good. I think the author underestimates the butterfly effect that someone like mc would have and nice to see some good endings for otherwise dead characters in canon. 6/10 overall
goated fic, I'd definitely recommend. but that "most handsome man in Japan" plot point was kinda useless lol
(PT-BR) Por favor autor não desanime com os comentários ruins, eu estou gostando bastante da história e de pra onde ela está caminhando e estou gostando do ritmo também, tenha consciência de que nem mesmo Deus consegue agradar todo mundo e foque em fazer uma história que você ache boa, só não exagere e mude totalmente o curso da história como os chineses fazer hahahahaha.
(PT-BR) Eu estou gostando bastante de história, tá se desenvolvendo bem e não está saindo muito do universo de Jujutsu no sentido que tipo não está mudando muito como funciona o Jujutsu.
You gotta work on the charachter personality and interactions all in all the fanfic is good tho
Ok, I have a problem with the novel, the interactions of the characters are robotic, there is no feeling behind the dialogues, an example of this is the death of the protagonist's parents, both times, in the same chapter, it is just these characters warning that they are going to die like "I'm going to die, ok?" which removes absolutely all the weight behind the "event". Furthermore, the pace of the novel feels extremely rushed from one moment to the next, there are jumps of events without any type of development. Also from time to time there is a focus on things not very relevant to the general immersion of the novel, again for example, in the same chapter as the last example the protagonist creates a wooden dragon to test his powers (which he obtained if I must add without no effort) but for some reason the author unnecessarily adds a paragraph where he explains "improvements" to the dragon's design, I understand the point of view when writing because you as the author have an idea in your head of what happens, but it is redundant to describe it to the reader Because over-explaining kills the reader's ability to delve into the narrative. Lastly and much more personally, I understand the admiration for other cultures, but when reading a story of the type the author is trying to write it is difficult for immersion to suddenly encounter Japanese words and subsequently their translation even going to the point of adding hiragana or katakana, It seems like a poor decision to try to educate? Through a story if what you want is for the reader to immerse themselves in your world. Apart from this I wish the author great success.
It's good and new concept senju Hashirama god of shinobi world in jjk it's going to be way good and I hope you continue it I am supporting it
boring. it was just straight boring. everything was just sped through and not really thought out. the was no emotion or feelings at all. everything just felt so dull and emotionless like he just didn't really care
This seems to be a regular occurrence in Webnovel rating your own fanfic as 5-Stars so I might as well join in this particular occurrence. -When in Rome Do as the Romans Do
Dude! Are you not going to make more Fanfics? This one was really amazing and I'm sure others will also be thrilled if you came up with another great fanFic.