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Write a reviewGood premises for the plot but so many mistakes Proofread and correct it,then I'll change my review
I can't tell you how refreshing to read a novel without some silly system or the MC cultivate various flowers and ancient fruit to gain absolute nonsensical powers. The MC seems like a relatable, powerful but not too powerful, the side characters and the world building is nicely done and it's an easy read. I found myself actively wondering where the story will go. For a first novel it's looking good.
Love the story. Few spelling mistakes but its nothing too bad. Wish I could read it ahead but all the same quality stuff, good characters and the world is intriguing, I hope you have some good twists planned.
Good premises for the plot but so many mistakes Proofread and correct it,then I'll change my review
I can't tell you how refreshing to read a novel without some silly system or the MC cultivate various flowers and ancient fruit to gain absolute nonsensical powers. The MC seems like a relatable, powerful but not too powerful, the side characters and the world building is nicely done and it's an easy read. I found myself actively wondering where the story will go. For a first novel it's looking good.
Love the story. Few spelling mistakes but its nothing too bad. Wish I could read it ahead but all the same quality stuff, good characters and the world is intriguing, I hope you have some good twists planned.