Reviews of First we fell. by Stivanstin - Webnovel

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4r3s
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Love the story. Few spelling mistakes but its nothing too bad. Wish I could read it ahead but all the same quality stuff, good characters and the world is intriguing, I hope you have some good twists planned.

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DaoistyA9bBi

Good premises for the plot but so many mistakes Proofread and correct it,then I'll change my review

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M4s4ki

I can't tell you how refreshing to read a novel without some silly system or the MC cultivate various flowers and ancient fruit to gain absolute nonsensical powers. The MC seems like a relatable, powerful but not too powerful, the side characters and the world building is nicely done and it's an easy read. I found myself actively wondering where the story will go. For a first novel it's looking good.

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8mth
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Asta_Clover_7282

I like the story so far... but there are many writting errors so do correct them please πŸ™‚

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Stivanstin

It’s my own work so I’m not going to underrate it. I will take any questions you might have right here and do my best to answer them quickly. All I can say is give it a try. Thanks for reading. PS - I do give myself power stones sometimes for personal reasons. πŸ™‚β€β†”οΈ

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4r3s
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Love the story. Few spelling mistakes but its nothing too bad. Wish I could read it ahead but all the same quality stuff, good characters and the world is intriguing, I hope you have some good twists planned.

8mth
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DaoistyA9bBi

Good premises for the plot but so many mistakes Proofread and correct it,then I'll change my review

8mth
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M4s4ki

I can't tell you how refreshing to read a novel without some silly system or the MC cultivate various flowers and ancient fruit to gain absolute nonsensical powers. The MC seems like a relatable, powerful but not too powerful, the side characters and the world building is nicely done and it's an easy read. I found myself actively wondering where the story will go. For a first novel it's looking good.

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8mth
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Asta_Clover_7282

I like the story so far... but there are many writting errors so do correct them please πŸ™‚

8mth
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Stivanstin

It’s my own work so I’m not going to underrate it. I will take any questions you might have right here and do my best to answer them quickly. All I can say is give it a try. Thanks for reading. PS - I do give myself power stones sometimes for personal reasons. πŸ™‚β€β†”οΈ

8mth
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