Hazbin Hotel: Story of Cain

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Crytach

a bit confused ... isn't Cain Adams kid with eve? or did it change in the show? far as I know Cain killed his brother Abel and Adam chased him away after god cursed him.

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Aady_Shrestha

This fanfic all together isn’t bad. The writing quality is good and there are little to no grammatical mistakes, It updates very frequently like 1 chapter a day, and the world of Hazbin hotel just has so much potential to explode and expand. But where this fanfic falls of is in its story, the bits with Adam are very fun to read as we get to explore more of Heaven but the parts with Cain fall of flat. Cain is just not as interesting, he’s bland not because he has no character but because he has too much going on he is just really boring to read. This story should have focused on Adam and Cain equally. All in all it’s not a bad fanfic but it could definitely be better.

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Gamer_Otaku448879

What if you made a fic about Adam in hazbin hotel about a guy becoming Adam with a system

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DaoistUdrot0

10000000/10 a must read for any hazbin hotel/ helluva boss fan

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ydoBoN

Cane is overly 'Gary Stu,' resolving every problem with little to no consequences. The author also struggles with specific grammatical errors, such as repetitive phrasing within the same paragraph. Additionally, they have issues with punctuation, often misusing commas and periods, which leads to sentences that are too long. Besides that it's a solid story.

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maelvoid_2025

Overall it is a great story with little to no grammatical mistakes. However, the pov of Cane is boring. He's too perfect with no actual flaws which hampers the story in the long run. It would have been much more interesting actual watching him climb the latter towards being an overlord while building his empire. Theirs also the relationship development area...it's kinda lacking especially when hes first introduced into the story. The jabs he thrown at lucifer were unnecessary and overplayed. In general he is a gary sue type character.... Though this is just my opinion after reading it.

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DaoistX4em3e

Güzel bir seri devamı gelsin burdan sonrası anlamsız kelimeler ,................................................... ve bu şekilde 10 bölümden oluşan bir iki gün önce eklendi ve bu şekilde 10 bölümden oluşan bir iki gün önce eklendi ve bu şekilde 10 bölümden oluşan bir iki gün önce eklendi ve bu şekilde 10 bölümden oluşan bir iki gün önce eklendi ve bu 6

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CodexZero

Aye a Hazbin Hotel/Heluva boss fic, it is really rare to see. Hope you continue to update this, the fic itself is pretty good, but I noticed right off the bat that there are some spelling mistake, nothing too serious though

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Demons_Ki

10/10 so I'm looking forward to more. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Kenk98928

Had singing along with Cain on that one.

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DaoistX4em3e

Elinize sağlık çok güzel bölümler hızlı ama yetmiyor bide çok güzel yerinde bitiyorsun sanki gösterip de elletmiyor gibisin . ...... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . ..... . .....

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DaoistX4em3e

Güzel seri umarım devamı gelir 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Drackco

Do you Like Hazbin Hotel or Helluva Boss? Have you seen Hellsing Ultimate Abridged? Cain is enjoying a VERY enthusiastic walk

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DaoisthXTlCZ

This is a fun story to watch even if I think it's all very cliché, But the idea is something very diverse, That or it's simply hazbin's hype that's making it cool.