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I have a question, is this a novel in which the protagonist rises to planes of existence like in other cultivation novels?
so I left an early review and thought I should update as we are now well into it. this is a genuine 5-star book. great to read, leaves you wanting more, and the author is covering everything you could want from this genre. I look forward to hopefully a long road ahead
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There are not many chapters yet, and that may change some of my thoughts as the story progresses. It is well written and draws me in to want more (always a good sign with a new novel). There hasn't been much world building, but I believe that is due to limited chapters and trying to focus on the MC situation. They slightly glaze over the situation that enables the MC growth (as a reader, I find it strange no one in their world questions things falling from the sky) but again, this may be touched on in later chapters. All in all, I highly recommend based on what we have so far.
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I know there aren't many chapters (17 at the time of my review) but I don't understand how there are so few people reading this. The story is very well written for a webnovel.
The opening is good. I skipped the prologue but then thought it might make sense to go back and read it. I was wrong, it just confused me. But I'm guessing it will make sense in the future? Hopefully.
Thank you for the chapters. I went to sleep and woke up to some more so you earned a review for that! PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! Just more words so I can post the review.
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The author is so good at describing everything. It made the story really fun to read. I just wish there were more chapters so I could binge it from start to finish.
I stalked you a bit since we've worked together to create your Webnovel covers and lo and behold you released another one! I checked out some of the chapters and they seem pretty darn great so far! Not a huge reader, but this might just change that.
seems interesting so far, but will give it some time. i dont think a lot of novels have great writing on here, but this one is definitely among the ones that do
Incredible improvement in the writing quality and a well paced plot so far! Looking forward to more chapters and the cliff hangers are definitely getting me.
Hmm... Good start... I will update my review after I have read more. It seems promising from the first couple of chapters. Quality-good Language-average Plot-interesting Character development-not seen any yet.
I read your last novels, the first one was fun to read but it felt rushed, the second one was a lot better and now this is by far the best novel you have written. The plot seems strong so far, the writing quality is among the best I have seen from a webnovel and the character is one that I wanted to know more about from your f rank novel. I'm guessing takes place thousands of years in the past.
It's a biased review since I'm the Author. I would first like to thank you all for considering to spend your time reading my work. If you have any questions then feel free to ask and I will try to reply to as many people as I possibly can.
I have a question, is this a novel in which the protagonist rises to planes of existence like in other cultivation novels?
so I left an early review and thought I should update as we are now well into it. this is a genuine 5-star book. great to read, leaves you wanting more, and the author is covering everything you could want from this genre. I look forward to hopefully a long road ahead
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES Just filling words for review. I found this dude on Wattpad and I see he got another book now
There are not many chapters yet, and that may change some of my thoughts as the story progresses. It is well written and draws me in to want more (always a good sign with a new novel). There hasn't been much world building, but I believe that is due to limited chapters and trying to focus on the MC situation. They slightly glaze over the situation that enables the MC growth (as a reader, I find it strange no one in their world questions things falling from the sky) but again, this may be touched on in later chapters. All in all, I highly recommend based on what we have so far.
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I know there aren't many chapters (17 at the time of my review) but I don't understand how there are so few people reading this. The story is very well written for a webnovel.
The opening is good. I skipped the prologue but then thought it might make sense to go back and read it. I was wrong, it just confused me. But I'm guessing it will make sense in the future? Hopefully.
Thank you for the chapters. I went to sleep and woke up to some more so you earned a review for that! PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! Just more words so I can post the review.
Reveal Spoiler The author is so good at describing everything. It made the story really fun to read. I just wish there were more chapters so I could binge it from start to finish.
I stalked you a bit since we've worked together to create your Webnovel covers and lo and behold you released another one! I checked out some of the chapters and they seem pretty darn great so far! Not a huge reader, but this might just change that.
seems interesting so far, but will give it some time. i dont think a lot of novels have great writing on here, but this one is definitely among the ones that do
Incredible improvement in the writing quality and a well paced plot so far! Looking forward to more chapters and the cliff hangers are definitely getting me.
Hmm... Good start... I will update my review after I have read more. It seems promising from the first couple of chapters. Quality-good Language-average Plot-interesting Character development-not seen any yet.
I read your last novels, the first one was fun to read but it felt rushed, the second one was a lot better and now this is by far the best novel you have written. The plot seems strong so far, the writing quality is among the best I have seen from a webnovel and the character is one that I wanted to know more about from your f rank novel. I'm guessing takes place thousands of years in the past.
It's a biased review since I'm the Author. I would first like to thank you all for considering to spend your time reading my work. If you have any questions then feel free to ask and I will try to reply to as many people as I possibly can.