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48.88% Forbidden Desires: A Targaryen Tale / Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Battle

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Battle

It was night, more specifically it was night before the arrival of their enemies, Daemon looked over at the bed watching Dany and Rhae share a slow kiss. His attention was taken away by the person sitting on his lap, his brother. Aegon held his cheek as kissed him, their cocks brushed against the other, Daemon's hands gripped Aegon's firm arse. His brother moaned.

 

"Even watching our wives didn't ease your mind, brother." Egg kissed his cheek. Daemon was a little annoyed, every battle he fought he got like this, but he was getting better. 

 

He smiled at his white haired sibling, and then he yanked forward and lifted his brother, Aegon let a chuckle and wrapped him legs on his waist. He carried the man to the bed, laying him beside Dany and Rhae. Dany smiled shyly at him, he pecked her lips and went back to Aegon. His lips touched his brothers' in a deep kiss, their tongues brushed on the others' gently making both moan.

 

After a few seconds he broke the kiss. "I'm fine, just a lot on my mind. It would stay like this before every battle." He said sitting on his calfs, Dany knelt beside him.

 

"You shouldn't, we are here with you. Oh my strong husband, I trust you, we trust you." She held his cheeks kissing him softly.

 

Her lips burned on his, she held his wrist and pulled him, making Dae lay on top of her, and Dany's right hand trailed gently on his back while the other held his cheek. "You shouldn't be anxious, neither should you be afraid. I'm not afraid, because I trust you. My love." At the moment, he thought he would cry, he loves this woman so fucking much.

 

He pressed their foreheads. "I love you… gods… I love you so much." He breathed staring into her violet eyes.

 

Daenerys heart raced and her eyes darkened. "I love you too, my dragon. More than anything." She kissed him again. Her tongue brushed softly on his, she whined when he sucked her tongue. 

 

"Gods… I love those little noises you make." He murmured against her lips as he began to kiss down her, Daenerys bit her lip.

 

He sucked on her pink nipple till it grew hard, Daenerys moaned softly when he took the hard nub between his teeth and pulled. Her eyes went to her niece and nephew, Rhaenys was on top of Aegon sucking his cock while he licked her pussy, Dany moaned when she felt Dae's lips surround her clit. 

 

Her hand went to his hair, and she forced his face against her crotch. "Dae… swirl your tongue… yes just like that my love… you know exactly how to eat my pussy." Dany murmured to him.

 

Daemon groaned and inserted two fingers into her cunt, Daenerys closed her eyes. "Oh, my gods…"

 

The prince hummed as her sweet taste took over his tastebuds, he circled the tip of his tongue on her clit making her raise her hips. Dany's eyes opened slightly, and she groaned looking at Rhae's pink lips wrapped tightly around Aegon's cock, her niece sucked her nephew slowly and deeply, making him moan.

 

A hard suck on her clit, and fingers curling inside her made her drift her attention away from them and grip Daemon's head tighter. "Your cunt is so sweet Dany." She shivered with the hot breath against her sensitive and swollen clit. "So wet for me…" 

 

She sucked her lip and whined. "Uhum, you make me so fucking wet, Dae." 

 

He hummed giving her engorged nub a last peck, Daemon made his way to her mouth, her husband smirked down at her and brought her into a kiss. Daenerys hummed as she tasted herself, her body grew hotter when she felt his hard and thick cock pressed against her. Dany gripped his curls and pulled back breaking the kiss.

 

"Put it in. Shove this big cock of yours in my little cunt, my love." Her hand went to his shaft.

 

He grinned. "Do you want my cock?" She nodded. "Beg for it." Dany whined.

 

"Give me your cock, please ." He shook his head.

 

"Dae…" She whined.

 

"You can do better." He sucked her neck.

 

'Fucker.' She thought annoyingly, but she had to give what he wanted.

 

"Please husband, I need this thick, veiny and long cock of yours in my "cunny"… I need you to pound into me till I beg you to stop." She used her small innocent girl voice to beg to him. Daemon growled and left her neck, he rolled both of them over. 

 

"Ride my cock." He ordered.

 

She let out little moan and nodded frantically, rushing to mount him, Daenerys was about to get in position when he made a noise. "Tsk tsk, your back entrance for me."

 

Fuck…

 

Daenerys obeyed and turned putting one knee on each side of his thighs, she passed her fingers on her tongue gathering spit and brushed the saliva on his cockhead. He held his cock and guided to her tight entrance, Dany slowly lowered herself on his shaft, in a matter of seconds she was impaled.

 

Daemon groaned feeling her tight walls wrapped around him, he rested his hands on her plush arse as she bent forward, Daenerys raised her hips till half of his cock was out then lowered. "Gods…" He murmured watching her lips grip his girth.

 

From their side, Rhaenys raised her head looking at the long cock in front of her, her work was done, her brother's cock was hard, coated with her saliva and throbbing. Daenerys small moans reached her ears and she eyed her aunt riding her brother slowly, his eyes stared at mesmerise at Dany's thick arse, he would pull her arsecheeks apart just to look at her tight puckered hole winking at him.

 

Rhaenys felt her pussy pulse. "Lay beside Dae." She told her husband, he moved laying beside his brother. She positioned herself above Aegon's cock and sat on him. Her husband gasped in pleasure.

 

Daenerys turned her head and grinned weakly at her as she and Dany began to bounce on their respective man, Daemon turned to look at his brother with a smile, Egg licked his lips and leaned bringing Daemon in for a slow kiss. Rhaenys groaned at the sight of her brother's tongues brushing against the other.

 

Feeling a little jealous, she tapped Daenerys' arm, Dany looked at her with her face full of bliss, Rhae held her arm making Daenerys sit on Dae's cock. Then she brought Daenerys into a kiss that would make people hard. She heard two grunts.

 

A harsh slap made Dany let go of her lips, her brother pulled Daenerys by the hair till her back was on his chest. She was impressed of how bendy her aunt was. 

 

"Did I tell you to stop riding?" Dae whispered on her ear, Dany bit her lip and shook her head.

 

"Hmm." He gripped Daenerys' neck tightly. "Get on your hands and knees, I will teach you a lesson." Rhaenys' throbbed. Oddly, Dae nodded at Egg.

 

"Woop!" Rhaenys was thrown at the mattress, her husband got up and dragged her to far from Daenerys, he put her chest against the bed and spread her legs, Aegon laid on top of her and roughly entered her. Rhaenys' left cheek was pressed against the sheet and her fingers got intertwined with his. Then he began to hammer into her.

 

Rhaenys gasped with the strength he uses, she had the perfect view of Daemon and Daenerys, her little brother was putting Daenerys in the same position. 

 

"Lower all your body, I want just this slutty arse up." He instructed and Dany obeyed raising her arse. He gave her a loud smack. Daenerys yelped as her hands clenched the sheets tightly. Daemon guided his cock into Daenerys cunt and hammered all in.

 

Dany eyes rolled up and she gasped. His hands gripped at her hips and he immediately began to pound into her. "Fucking whore…" He groaned as the smacks of his hips on her arse echoed through the chamber.

 

Daenerys gritted her teeth and groaned as Daemon gave her the hardest fuck on her life. At that moment, all of this seemed like a competition between the brothers, of who fucked their wife better… no, right now neither she nor Dany felt like they were being their wives… they were their whores. 

 

Aegon raised and lowered his hips in a speed Rhae never saw before, his cock almost kissing her cervix. Another painful cry brought Rhaenys attention to Dany again.

 

Smack!

 

Smack!

 

Smack!

 

Her brother kept slapping Dany's fat arse. Rhaenys was pretty sure her aunt was on full ecstasy mode, her eyes were half close, her lips parted with drool leaking from it. Daemon clenched his jaw as the loud moans Dany was emitting a few moments ago turned into grunts. 

 

That made Rhaenys reach her orgasm, of how hard she was being fucked, and how hard Dany was being fucked. "Fuck!" She screamed into the mattress as her pussy squeezed her husband's cock, that triggered his orgasm. The feeling of him twitching inside her made her heart burst.

 

Daemon watched the ripples appear on his wife's arse with each thrust he gave her, her pussy lips was red and her arsehole gapping a little. Her walls began to close around him and he moaned, Daenerys whimpers and red arse helped him reach his peak, he roared and buried himself deep in her. His balls soon were drained, and judging by the pitchy moan his wife gave, he reaches the conclusion that she had also reached her peak.

 

His eyes went to his brother who was rolling off Rhae, his cock began to soften and Daenerys' walls stopped convulsing around him, slowly he retrieved his shaft from her, she lowered her hips weakly. He laid beside her and put her on her back. Her body was limp and her eyes close, her breathing was weak. Dae brushed his fingers on Dany's cheek, she opened her eyes weakly. 

 

"Hello." He murmured.

 

Daenerys blinked a couple of times, then a small smile appeared on her lips, Dany held his cheek pecking his lips gently. "I love you." She whispered before she drifted to sleep.

 

His brother was on the same situation, he nodded to the couch, after he put Dany's head on a pillow he sat on the couch with his equally naked brother.

 

"You know, I've been thinking. I think it's time for us to reveal ourselves." He said drinking his… well Tyene's hippocras.

 

Aegon moaned as he drank the wine. "Hmmm, I was thinking the same. Westeros is starting to get involved… gods what is this?"

 

He hummed a laugh. "It's a drink from Westeros. It's Tyene's, so you better not tell her… she will probably throw one of her daggers at me."

 

"In the morning we will tell Rhae and Dany." Egg decided, then took another sip.

 

Both brothers stared outside the balcony at the full moon that was lighting up the night, and their dragons danced in the sky. 

 

 

Rhaenys' eyes roomed over the field, the Dothraki were marching in direction of the front gate of Meereen. Lucky enough the field had some irregularities that was going to interfere with the horselords charge. The field ran for two miles, so they had plenty of space to operate.

 

The Unsullied stood at the front with her spearmen. Behind them, a catapult with rocks, wooden projectiles, and wooden recipients full of oil. For every hundred meters a catapult stood aligned, like Daemon did with the Butcher's army, the elephants waited on the corners of the field, the horsemen were behind the spearmen followed by the arches and the soldiers. 

 

By the hill, the weapon that made her brother even more anxious waited for the sign. Daemon's eyes traveled to the other side of the field and to the hill every minute. She stepped in front of him and held his face. "Are you alright?" 

 

He nodded. She lifted a brow. Rhaenys eyed him. 

 

"Just somewhat nervous." Dae murmured.

 

She smiled at him a kissed him gently. "Everything will be fine… you help organise all of this." 

 

"Uhm" She kissed his cheek and returned to her position.

 

 

On the hill Daenerys stared down onto the field. She looked back at her dragon, who was tearing a whale apart. Daenerys is clad in armor, made of not steel but thick layers of leather to protect her from any arrow. Her dragon gained a settle and a thick lather armor that covered her belly. 

 

Daenerys groaned, the whole process of take the measurement of the beast took almost an hour, and don't even ask her how long it took to put it on the Dragon. Foot steps caught her attention, she looked back and her paramour was walking towards her. 

 

He stopped beside her. "Are they close?" 

 

Daario narrowed his eyes and pointed. "You see that mountain?" She nodded. "They are behind her, just waiting for the order to attack." 

 

"Are you sure it's safe?" He nodded at the dragon.

 

How cute.

 

Daenerys turned to him and held his chin. "Why? Are you worried about me? Or do you think I can't ride a Dragon?" She lifted her brow.

 

Daario swallowed. "Both? You first rode a dragon four days ago." 

 

She gave him an offended look. "I've practiced." Then she shrugged. "As I said to my family, I will be fine." 

 

He nodded, Dany held his face and kissed him, deeply and slowly. "Try not die." She pecked him.

 

"I advised you the same, Captain." Daenerys continued to give him small kisses, till the horn was blow.

 

 

Wooooooo

 

Daemon closed his eyes, he took a deep breath and exhaled opening his eyes. He held the reins of his horse and waited till the Dothraki appear on far, first came the faint screams, then the gallops.

 

'Face the Dothraki on open field… we would have no chance of surviving.' Arthur's voice echoed on his head.

 

That hadn't helped him a single bit, a few meters from him, Tyene sat on her horse, he nodded at her. 

 

Woooo woooo woooooooo

 

The first dots appeared from over the mountain, scarily fast, short time passed and more and more horses appeared. "Commander?" A soldier asked.

 

"Wait." 

 

Another minute, even more. 

 

"Wait. 

 

Almost. Get Ready.

 

"Now!" He yelled. The rocks were launched, his eyes watched the projectiles soar into the air till they landed on their enemy, the first rocks took out a dozen Dothraki and their horses. The first wave of shots took out at least two hundred more men. 

 

"Change ammunition!" He ordered. "Number two and three!" 

 

The projectiles with oil and the wooden projectiles.

 

Quickly as the Dothraki regroup themselves and began to dodge the corpses, the other ammunition was loaded. "Shot." 

 

He looked at Tyene and gave a nod. "Give the signal!" 

 

An archer aimed a flaming arrow to the sky and released it. 

 

 

Daenerys watched as the projectiles fell above the Dothraki. The barrage was able to slow them a little. "There." Daario said pointing to the arrow in the sky.

 

Ok, don't panic, you trained for this.

 

Ooooh shit! Who am I kidding. I'm terrified.

 

"Daenerys! You have to go now!" Daario shook her.

 

She blinked and nodded; she ran to her dragon who lowered her shoulder. "Shit, shit, shit, shit." Dany kept murmured. 

 

The Queen of Meereen climbed on her dragon and strapped the hook on her waist, her hand gripped tightly on Ella's spikes. "Sovēs." She murmured, the beast let a screech and began to run on the cliffs direction. The dragon jumped and flapped her wings.

 

Daenerys eyes went to the valley where the horsemen came. 

 

Fuck, they keep coming.

 

Her eyes went down, the projectiles began to crash against the Dothraki again, the wood would break making the small pieces pierce on the men and animals. The flaming ones coated them and the ground like a flammable liquid. Daenerys guided her dragon down, the beast roared spooking the horses, some threw their riders from their backs.

 

Daenerys breathed and closed her eyes. "Dracarys." The words rolled from her lips. 

 

None of them waited for the gigantic fire wall that formed, neither the impact of the explosion that almost sent her flying from her dragon's back. Dany could smell scent of burned leather and skin.

She decided to follow the plan and flew to The Valley.

 

 

Aegon's eyes widened when he saw the high the fire went, Ella flapped her wings fighting the impulse that the explosion made.

 

She was flying too low.

 

His head turned when he heard other roars and screeches, Aegon's brows furrowed, they didn't know of the dragons would participate of the battle. Till now Daenerys was the only one who rode a dragon. The other three dragons seemed to follow Ella, so they flew to the valley.

 

An arrow passing close to his head made him flinch. "Fuck!" From far a few Dothraki who passed the fire was approaching fast. 

 

"Archers!" He screamed. "Knock. Draw… Loose!" 

 

Aegon turned and walked to his horse, he trotted the animal and rode till his brother, a moment later he arrived. "They are passing the fire!" 

 

Daemon grimaced. "No shit!" 

 

"Fire the next battery!" His brother ordered. "Where's Rhae?" Daemon asked.

 

"Here." Rhae said appearing at their side.

 

"Where were you?" 

 

"Here." She shrugged.

 

"No, you weren't ." Daemon said.

 

"I was."

 

"Wasn't.

 

"Was."

 

"Wasn't."

 

Aegon groaned. "Hello!? Crazy Dothraki Screamers riding in our direction?"

 

Daemon shook his head. "Change of plans, we are going to move the shield wall forward with the archers behind them. The fire is slowing them down." He pointed to where Dany was unleashing hell over the Dothraki.

 

"You want me to lead?" Rhae asked.

 

Daemon breathed and nodded. "Yes."

 

Rhaenys nodded taking her spear and walking to the spearmen and Unsullied. Aegon stared at his brother.

 

"What?" 

 

"You're sending our sister to face a Dothraki charge." Aegon said slowly.

 

Daemon nodded again. "Aye… she is capable; besides you will be there."

 

"I beg your pardon?"

 

"You will command the archers. Where's my horse!? Go, they are marching." Dae patted his back and walked away to his horse.

 

Aegon groaned and turned to Balaq. "Let's go."

 

 

Daemon's eyes watched as the flaming projects fly high in the sky. "Arthur, I need you with the elephants, Ser Barristan, you take care of the cavalry. And where the fuck is Daario?"

 

Arthur raised a brow and starred at him. "What?" Dae asked.

 

"A please wouldn't hurt you, your grace?" Arthur asked.

 

"Oh…" Daemon grinned awkwardly. "Please go to the elephants?" He tried.

 

The Sword of the Morning gave him an amused look and mounted his horse.

 

"Soldiers! With me." He yelled. A minute later Daario appeared. "Nice of you to join us." He forced a smiled.

 

"I was on that hill. Takes a while to get from there to here." Naharis complained.

 

"Bla bla bla. Shut up. I need you to command the catapults, take your Second Sons and protect them." He ordered and mounted his horse.

 

 

Rhaenys Targaryen wasn't a stranger to battle, she fought a lot of them, but this… was beyond what she's fought before… this was fucking madness! Every now and then a couple of horses collided with the shield wall, the arrows that kept raining on the horsemen helped to keep them away. "Hold! Stay in position!" She ordered looking to the side where an arrow pierced an unsullied, killing him.

 

What happened next got her ears ringing and her head spinning, she blinked and coughed, feeling the hard ground under her. Rhaenys searched for her spear. "Ugh… fuck." She grunted getting of her feet, she looked at the dead horse beside her and frowned.

 

They breached?

 

Rhaenys blinked when the warm liquid ran on down her cheek, temple and eye. The princess passed her hand on her face clearing the blood. A yell was her answer if they had breached the shieldwall or not, Rhae jumped back as an arakh was waved at her. A bloodied Dothraki began his attack against her, he tried to hit her again but now she raised her spear. Rhaenys was lucky the spear's base was made of iron, it being able to stop his weapon.

 

She yanked her spear up and kicked his belly, he huffed and stumbled backwards lowering his arakh, Rhaenys saw opportunity and passed the spear tip from one of his temples to the other. Blood gushed on her as the horseman fell.

 

"Fuck." She said.

 

A few meters in front of her, Rhaenys saw ten to thirty Dothrakis fighting her soldiers. She waved her spear and ran to their direction, she pierced her spear on the back of a man's neck who was with his back to her, he dropped dead, and she searched for her next target. She found it quickly, a Dothraki atop of an Unsullied trying to pierce his blade on the man's neck. Rhaenys raised her spear and buried it in his spine, the man screamed and tried to reach his back.

 

The Unsullied saw the opportunity and took the Arakh and slit his throat, she pulled her spear back and looked to the sky where arrows rained over the Dothraki. What came next, she wasn't expecting, a loud roar reached her ears, Aeli quickly flew above her laying hell on the Dothraki. "Shit…" She murmured. The white dragon passed again before she landed in front of Rhaenys, the princess stared wide eyes at her Dragon, her breath caught in her throat when the beast lowered her shoulder.

 

You want me to ride you…

 

Rhae's body was filled with thrill and excitement, and fear, she didn't have a saddle. "Well, Egg and Dae think it's time for us to reveal ourselves. I think this is a good way to do it." She said to the dragon. She attached her spear to her back and walked to the dragon, carefully she climbed on the beast, her eyes went to two big spikes, and gripped them. Rhaenys held them tightly. Her eyes closed and she felt the fire fill her body.

 

The whisper that left her lips came naturally. "Sovēs"

 

 

An hour later, Daemon was in the middle of a bloodbath, men fell on his left and right. Daemon was on a hunt. A hunt for Khal Jhaqo. He has a plan, a hard and maybe impossible one, but still a plan. Rhaenys was surprisingly in the skies with Daenerys and Aegon was fighting somewhere else.

 

Daemon narrowed his eyes and saw a big man waving his arakh wildly, he had a long beard and braid. 

 

Found him.

 

"Nym!" He called the Sand sSnake. 

 

"Yes?" She shouted as she stabbed a man in the neck. 

 

"Where's Ty?" 

 

Nymeria looked around. "Umm, I don't fucking know, she was beside me moments ago." 

 

Daemon heard a shout and his head shot back quickly, a Dothraki ran in his direction with a spear in hand. He didn't have any time to do something, he was to close, so he just clenched his jaw and waited for the hit. 

 

The hit that never came, as a small woman threw her dagger on the man's neck, his eyes widened and his hands went to his neck trying to stop the bleeding. The Dothraki fell on his knees choking on his own blood. 

 

"I found her!" Nymeria yelled. 

 

He turned to her. "No shit, me too." 

 

Tyene smirked then slapped his cheek. "Ow!?" 

 

"Your imbecile, he almost killed you." She scolded.

 

He waved. "I'm fine. I need you and your sister. Nym! Come here!" 

 

"For what?" Tyene asked as her sister approached them.

 

"We are going to kill a Khal… well actually I'm going to kill him, you two take care of the two bloodriders beside him." He pointed his sword at their targets.

 

"We are what? I have to what?!" Nym exclaimed.

 

"You heard me, be careful." And with that he headed in the direction of Jhaqo.

 

Daemon dodged a man then killed him; he killed more Dothraki before he arrived at the Khal. He whistled gaining the man's attention, he waved at him and spat on the ground.

 

Jhaqo's face hardened and he marched to Daemon's direction, the prince did the same and ran towards the Khal's direction. The arakh and sword clashed harshly, Dae pulled back and tried to hit Jhaqo's leg but the man jumped back, he then unleashed swings on Daemon, left, right, up and down. Daemon block all of them and attacked when he had the chance. 

 

His head jerked to the side when he heard a pained cry, Ty was in a fist fight with a bloodrider and received a punch on the stomach, she fell on her knees making the man think she was hurt, the bloodrider walked on her direction just to be kicked in the legs and being sent to the ground.

 

Daemon knew he shouldn't take his eyes from the enemy, but he couldn't help it, it had a consequence though. The air of his lungs left him and the gigantic man sent him to the ground, the Khal jumped on him and began to punch his face, left, right, left, right.

 

Ouch. That's definitely gonna leave a bruise.

 

The prince groaned in pain, Jhaqo stopped just to pick his arakh. Dae's eyes widened as the man raised the weapon high in the air, he grabbed Jhaqo's arms stopping him, both men groaned and grunted as the other tried to bury the blade on the other's head while the other tried to prevent him. The Khal screamed and tried to forced his arakh on Daemon's face, the prince closed his eyes as he felt the steel kiss his skin. 

 

Daemon grimaced and yelled, pulling strength from deep inside him, he harshly pushed Jhaqo's hands to the side, the man grunted then screamed in pain as Daemon teeth pressed his skin. He had to push the wish of vomiting when the blood touched his tongue. The Khal shouted in pain, Dae took the opportunity to push the man from on top of him. He blinked as he felt the blood running down his cheek. 

Jhaqo was getting to his feet when Daemon kneeed him in the ribs earning a groan, he fell on to his side and Dae quickly kicked him in the mouth making a couple teeth fly.

 Jhaqo grunted and tried to raise himself again, just to receive another kick, now the tip of Daemon's boot connected with his temple. The Dothraki fell again and this time he didn't try to stand, his body contracted. Daemon rolled him and sat on him, the man's eyes were open wide and still, his jaw clenched. That didn't matter to him, Dae's fist connected with his face earning just a grunt, then another and another.

 

Daemon didn't know how many hits he gave, he just knew that he stopped when the fight around him seemed to stop, the only noise for a few seconds was his grunts and his fist clashing against the face on the now dead Khal. A hand on his shoulder made him flinch, he looked to the side ready to beat that person too, his fist and closed to the person's face when his eyes widened, and he stooped.

 

Daenerys breathed and crouched beside him, she held his pulse and touched his cheek. "It's over." She whispered. "We won." Her head motioned to the side, Ty and Nym were close to the corpses of the two bloodriders, and Rhaenys and Aegon close to Aeli. He blinked and breathed, Daenerys helped him to his feet, his hands were numb, and his face covered with blood. 

 

Daemon shook his head. "Why did they stopped fighting?" He murmured putting his arm around her neck for support.

 

Daenerys held his waist. "Nym and Ty killed two of his bloodriders, the other ones he had are dead too, and you killed the Khal…" She eyed him.

 

He stared at her for a couple seconds. "You know what that means right?" Dany mumbled.

 

Daemon closed his eyes and groaned. 

 

"Fuck."


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