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First things first, I applaud your work, I love the honey you are giving to the characters who truly deserve it, since I started to see this work it caught me, I hope you continue like this so I can enjoy your work.
onc off the best fan fiction , i like the character, that's not bowling to people's opinions and needs. good job.
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A lil bit of a spoiler but harry is basically thanos reincarnated with how the way he collected 5 lordship rings and 2 pending if the author should head in that direction which i really hope they do. anyways the story is amazing a lil slow paced in the beginning but it gets soooo much better and its a amzing read. im glad we get a confident harry who doesnt hide his power like a bunch of others in different fics we dont get those annoying excuses other authors try to shove down our throats. it may be the inner Jiraiya in me but i hope he gets 1 girl for every lordship my boyy has. again i highly recommend this fic and sincerely hope the author does not drop this.π«Άπ½
Great Story.....! looking forward to see what happens next.. keep updating [img=recommend][img=recommend]
nostalgic cringe. it's toned down from early hp fanfic cringe. i remember wbwl fanfic drinking games about all the bad tropes. at least his name isn't Hadrian.
Very good my only complaint is that the chapters are too short for me. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Iβll admit, this does not follow cannon, but who cares. I find myself cheering the op every chapter.
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Es una buena idea la dΓ© ir revelando las actividades de Dumbledore Pero espero que no dejen la historia a medias como por ejemplo la parte en la que no se mencionΓ³ la plΓ‘tica que tuvo con PenΓ©lope
This is a very good story but the chapters are to short for me to get sucked in. Is it the Authors original work or a translation?
Nothing changes 74 chapters for nothing. In another story, he solved everything in almost 30 episodes. Why are you dragging it out so much? Harry Potter was too aggressive with the four children. Honestly, in the original story, I would put all the teachers in Azkaban because none of them are sane. Dumbledore is irritating in every way. Even more so here.
ill admit its not the best hp ff ive ever read but its up there i have a few problems with how harry is basically young mastering his way through some things but its fine i understand why he is so thats not a huge issue main issue is the grammar dont get me wrong its not terrible but its definitely not the best it can be i havent noticed many spelling errors just a few words forgotten to be put in to make the sentence make sence all in all its pretty good its a little slow and yet weirdly fast paced in the end i rate this a 4.6 out of 5
At ch25 This is another one of those multiple inheritance lordship story so far it's not that great but I'll keep in going for coz nothing else to read really. Not that great coz he has hollows multi lordship that's all.
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best HP FF i have read so far hope the author keep's up and does not drop I'm on c 46 and have to say the Mc is not a wimp like most ff's. to the Author is this going to be a Harlem because of all the houses he has ? if so please don't make the mc or females brain dead in romance
This is a unique twist. Story and Character development is quite good. Frequent updates makes the short chapter issue negligeable. Overall this HP FF is quite an enjoyable read with a fantastic plot. ππ» Kudos to the author. ππ»
ΠΠ°ΠΌΠ΅ΡΠ°ΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠ½ΡΠΉ ΠΈ ΠΈΠ½ΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΡΠ½ΡΠΉ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ, ΠΊΠ°ΠΆΠ΄ΡΠΉ Π΄Π΅Π½Ρ ΠΆΠ΄Ρ Π½ΠΎΠ²ΡΡ Π³Π»Π°Π²Ρ... ΠΠ°ΠΊ Π³ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΡΡΡ Ρ Π½Π°Ρ Π² Π ΠΎΡΡΠΈΠΈ Π²ΠΊΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠ²Π°ΡΠΎ , Π½ΠΎ ΠΌΠ°Π»ΠΎΠ²Π°ΡΠΎ!!! Π’Π°ΠΊ ΡΡΠΎ ΠΎΠΏΡΡΡ Π² ΠΎΠΆΠΈΠ΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠΈ Π½ΠΎΠ²ΡΠΉ Π³Π»Π°Π²Ρ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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This is currently my favorite HP fanfiction I have found. so far it look like it's going to be very involved in the Wizarding world politics which I haven't seen done.
The setting is good, the back story of peveralls was short and sweet. Looking forward to the next part of the story
The story starts from a somewhat dubious but interesting premise, and develops in a very satisfying way, with Harry no longer being a guided and stupid character to taking on the real protagonist in the magical world, maintaining the necessary caution to survive and discover who They are his enemies and who he can trust.
Author here.. I have had some comments about short chapters and few comments even calling my writing trash.. as it appeared to them that I have forcefully placed monologue in chapter. I want to clarify: 1. Every chapter I post will be around 1k words. I am not a professional writer and I do it for fun and enjoyment. 2. I tend to let the story progress at a moderate pace. I don't fill up with monologues. If wanted this check the auxiliary chapter.. I could have literally used that much information to add atleast 3 chapters... used those knowledge to fulfill conversation.. I could have had a goblin recite all that information. 3. This is the style I will be following.
i liked this fic quite a lot o autor desenvolve um plot de heranΓ§a de famΓlias bem interessante nΓ£o Γ© como se o tema fosse algo novo mais quando Γ© bem feito merece o destaque
keep up the good work Mr. author, this story is great, and PLS don't drop it!!!
I think this story is quite good, but to really rate this story, it's actually to soon. I think it has good potential. now we just need to see how it goes
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HP fanfiction in which harry gets multiple lordships usually stupid and doing it with two ideas, first, it is about money the MC is reach and has high political standing and it is childishly boring. Second, to create harams legally for the MC which is also stupid since the MC can easily have multiple children with one woman and preserve multiple bloodlines. frankly when MC gains multiple lordships I stop reading since it becomes waste of time.
First things first, I applaud your work, I love the honey you are giving to the characters who truly deserve it, since I started to see this work it caught me, I hope you continue like this so I can enjoy your work.
onc off the best fan fiction , i like the character, that's not bowling to people's opinions and needs. good job.
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A lil bit of a spoiler but harry is basically thanos reincarnated with how the way he collected 5 lordship rings and 2 pending if the author should head in that direction which i really hope they do. anyways the story is amazing a lil slow paced in the beginning but it gets soooo much better and its a amzing read. im glad we get a confident harry who doesnt hide his power like a bunch of others in different fics we dont get those annoying excuses other authors try to shove down our throats. it may be the inner Jiraiya in me but i hope he gets 1 girl for every lordship my boyy has. again i highly recommend this fic and sincerely hope the author does not drop this.π«Άπ½
Great Story.....! looking forward to see what happens next.. keep updating [img=recommend][img=recommend]
nostalgic cringe. it's toned down from early hp fanfic cringe. i remember wbwl fanfic drinking games about all the bad tropes. at least his name isn't Hadrian.
Very good my only complaint is that the chapters are too short for me. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Iβll admit, this does not follow cannon, but who cares. I find myself cheering the op every chapter.
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Es una buena idea la dΓ© ir revelando las actividades de Dumbledore Pero espero que no dejen la historia a medias como por ejemplo la parte en la que no se mencionΓ³ la plΓ‘tica que tuvo con PenΓ©lope
This is a very good story but the chapters are to short for me to get sucked in. Is it the Authors original work or a translation?
Nothing changes 74 chapters for nothing. In another story, he solved everything in almost 30 episodes. Why are you dragging it out so much? Harry Potter was too aggressive with the four children. Honestly, in the original story, I would put all the teachers in Azkaban because none of them are sane. Dumbledore is irritating in every way. Even more so here.
ill admit its not the best hp ff ive ever read but its up there i have a few problems with how harry is basically young mastering his way through some things but its fine i understand why he is so thats not a huge issue main issue is the grammar dont get me wrong its not terrible but its definitely not the best it can be i havent noticed many spelling errors just a few words forgotten to be put in to make the sentence make sence all in all its pretty good its a little slow and yet weirdly fast paced in the end i rate this a 4.6 out of 5
At ch25 This is another one of those multiple inheritance lordship story so far it's not that great but I'll keep in going for coz nothing else to read really. Not that great coz he has hollows multi lordship that's all.
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best HP FF i have read so far hope the author keep's up and does not drop I'm on c 46 and have to say the Mc is not a wimp like most ff's. to the Author is this going to be a Harlem because of all the houses he has ? if so please don't make the mc or females brain dead in romance
This is a unique twist. Story and Character development is quite good. Frequent updates makes the short chapter issue negligeable. Overall this HP FF is quite an enjoyable read with a fantastic plot. ππ» Kudos to the author. ππ»
ΠΠ°ΠΌΠ΅ΡΠ°ΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠ½ΡΠΉ ΠΈ ΠΈΠ½ΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΡΠ½ΡΠΉ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ, ΠΊΠ°ΠΆΠ΄ΡΠΉ Π΄Π΅Π½Ρ ΠΆΠ΄Ρ Π½ΠΎΠ²ΡΡ Π³Π»Π°Π²Ρ... ΠΠ°ΠΊ Π³ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΡΡΡ Ρ Π½Π°Ρ Π² Π ΠΎΡΡΠΈΠΈ Π²ΠΊΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠ²Π°ΡΠΎ , Π½ΠΎ ΠΌΠ°Π»ΠΎΠ²Π°ΡΠΎ!!! Π’Π°ΠΊ ΡΡΠΎ ΠΎΠΏΡΡΡ Π² ΠΎΠΆΠΈΠ΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠΈ Π½ΠΎΠ²ΡΠΉ Π³Π»Π°Π²Ρ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reveal Spoiler This is currently my favorite HP fanfiction I have found. so far it look like it's going to be very involved in the Wizarding world politics which I haven't seen done.
The setting is good, the back story of peveralls was short and sweet. Looking forward to the next part of the story
The story starts from a somewhat dubious but interesting premise, and develops in a very satisfying way, with Harry no longer being a guided and stupid character to taking on the real protagonist in the magical world, maintaining the necessary caution to survive and discover who They are his enemies and who he can trust.
Author here.. I have had some comments about short chapters and few comments even calling my writing trash.. as it appeared to them that I have forcefully placed monologue in chapter. I want to clarify: 1. Every chapter I post will be around 1k words. I am not a professional writer and I do it for fun and enjoyment. 2. I tend to let the story progress at a moderate pace. I don't fill up with monologues. If wanted this check the auxiliary chapter.. I could have literally used that much information to add atleast 3 chapters... used those knowledge to fulfill conversation.. I could have had a goblin recite all that information. 3. This is the style I will be following.
i liked this fic quite a lot o autor desenvolve um plot de heranΓ§a de famΓlias bem interessante nΓ£o Γ© como se o tema fosse algo novo mais quando Γ© bem feito merece o destaque
keep up the good work Mr. author, this story is great, and PLS don't drop it!!!
I think this story is quite good, but to really rate this story, it's actually to soon. I think it has good potential. now we just need to see how it goes
πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!πππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈNICE NICE!
HP fanfiction in which harry gets multiple lordships usually stupid and doing it with two ideas, first, it is about money the MC is reach and has high political standing and it is childishly boring. Second, to create harams legally for the MC which is also stupid since the MC can easily have multiple children with one woman and preserve multiple bloodlines. frankly when MC gains multiple lordships I stop reading since it becomes waste of time.