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I have doubts, is the story yours or are you pirating? and this protagonist looks like a simp who tries to impress a woman while she wags her tail at another man, and what's worse, he is defeated when he confronts this man, I will give 4 stars for my humor
this is one of the best original novels I have ever read, and the best part is you're posting it as a fanfic do others could read it for free, I hope you continue your work and don't drop this novel.
It's a great story so far..............................................................................................................................................................................
great story has good potential I don't know how it's going to be waiting for future chapters .
the development you are going with the story is already quite interesting enough but you're making the novel free too now that's what i call a deal. also thanks for the novel my great lordđź‘Ź
I have doubts, is the story yours or are you pirating? and this protagonist looks like a simp who tries to impress a woman while she wags her tail at another man, and what's worse, he is defeated when he confronts this man, I will give 4 stars for my humor
this is one of the best original novels I have ever read, and the best part is you're posting it as a fanfic do others could read it for free, I hope you continue your work and don't drop this novel.
It's a great story so far..............................................................................................................................................................................
great story has good potential I don't know how it's going to be waiting for future chapters .
the development you are going with the story is already quite interesting enough but you're making the novel free too now that's what i call a deal. also thanks for the novel my great lordđź‘Ź