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One of the best novels I have read so far and i just saw it never had a proper review explaining everything so here I am doing the grueling task xD... --- Writing Quality (10/10) The writing quality in this novel is exceptional, with a bit of mystery blending in. The novel is immersive making the reading experience smooth and enjoyable. The author demonstrates the skill of a veteran writer even though this is his 2nd novel. The pacing is natural, and it has me completely hooked. I would even compare it some of the most famous and read novels present in wn. --- World-Building (10/10) The novel starts in Earth and then comes to a world or if that's what you would call it as it is 5 massive pieces of flat land which are 5 different empires all with different composition, geography and many other things, being held up by massive roots whose origins or end point isn't revealed still at the point.. There are illustration of the world in the discord and also posted in the relevant chaps so you can check there for a clear image.. Anyway there are some gods and higher beings introduced who are playing a dangerous game with many things on the line.. --- Power System (9/10) The power system here is a unique system by upgrading some present power systems and also adding some new pieces. Aether the protagonist, possesses a broken bloodline that even the Gods and higher beings fears and also has a log/system who's origins are revealed in parts as we go on with the story. And i would say this here the mc is as op as one can get that no one in the world can fight him and the gods and their people has to come to fight the mc. There are also some gods who are in support of him.. --- Character Development (10/10) Aether is one of the best MC I have ever read, he is smart and also knows how to use his head. And if someone only reads novels for wish fulfilment and likes mc's who never faces a little bit of difficulty this definitely not for them because there will be ups and downs, highs and lows that the MC will go through. The MC starts of as a slave and is treated a bit poorly for the starting chaps but you can already see himself picking himself up from around 40 chaps and he also b*ats the sh*t out of the boy who is his master and all other who treated him badly in 100-110 chaps(remember he beats his master even though he is under his slave mark.. It should tell you how much OP he is to break even the universal laws and contracts built by gods)... And he has also already taken his revenge on the main culprit behind his slavery... And I also want to say that if he was really a slave and could be pushed around, this novel won't have this many supporters who gives ps and gt.. No reader's will waste their coins, GT and PS on a novel who's mc is just a slave and nothing more.. --- Romance (10/10) Reading the title one might think this is a sm*t novel and that he will pick up FLs left and right but it isn't like that.. The way author potrays the romance is just... Just fantastic... Every single FL present is relevant to the story and plot and there have been only 6-7 r18 scenes until latest chap so you can understand how much detail is put into every relationship. --- Update Stability (10/10) The author has great updating schedule with sometimes even releasing 2 chaps a day, hope he makes it 10 chaps a day lol.. Jokes aside he has great updating schedule and doesn't miss out a day on updates and he also gives bonuses when certain requirements are fulfilled.. --- Overall Impression (9.5/10) So to sum it up this novel is a complete gem of a novel you don't want to miss out on.. P. S. :- I forgot to mention this but there are no plot holes in the novel which are prone to some op mc novels.. And if you have reached the end of this review I hope you will definitely give this novel a try and help us in making it even more popular than it already is... And if you read it and also come to like it do share it with your known novel enthusiasts and friends This is definitely a must-read for fans of reincarnation, fantasy, sword&magic and mystery stories. So give it a chance guys I am certain you definitely like it.. If you have any questions regarding the novel you can ask them.. I will try to ans them to the best of my ability... or you can also ask the author in the comments or in discord I have never seen him not reply to a question from any of his readers.. Thanks for reading this lengthy review lol ---
🎉 Hey everyone! 🎉 It’s been ONE WHOLE YEAR since my novel was released, and wow, what a ride it’s been! I just wanted to come here and share my honest thoughts with you all—though I’ll admit, it might be a tiny bit biased 😉. Cough, Cough Anyway, Now, I’m not the greatest at making first impressions (let’s be real here 😅), and yes, the beginning of my novel can feel a little slow. It might even seem a bit boring at first, but trust me, don’t close it just yet!! 🚫 Once you get past that slow start, the thrills, twists, and curiosity will kick in HARD! 😱🔥 My novel is a slow burn, but that’s what makes it exciting! (Lots of emotions to be honest) Sure, it’s a bit like waiting for a spark to turn into a full-on blaze, but trust me—the payoff is so worth it! 🙌 I’ve seen reviews saying the MC starts off as a "slave" and a "pushover," and, well... yes, he kinda does... 😬 BUT WAIT—don’t close the book just yet! By chapter 100, things get WILD, and you’ll see how much he evolves into something so much more! He’s not a pushover—he’s a character on the rise, and you’re going to LOVE the transformation! 😏💥 Yes, there are a few sad moments, but don’t worry—I’m an author who loves my characters, and I would NEVER leave them in constant despair! 🌈 The sad moments are just temporary and trust me, it all turns around for the better! 💖 And let’s talk about the female leads! 😍❤️ ... all I can say... They’re incredible, and I’m sure you’re going to fall in love with them, even if it takes a little time! (But let’s be real, you’ll love them soon enough 😉). They’re complex, strong, and definitely bring the heat! 🔥🔥 Oh, and did I mention? There are YANDERES!!! 😈💘 Get ready for some seriously intense, crazy moments that’ll keep you on the edge of your seat! Buckle up, because the drama is REAL! 🚨💣 Thank you all for sticking with me on this journey! 🚀 I can’t wait to see where we go next—you won’t want to miss what’s coming! So grab your phone/laptop/whatever 😋, sit back, and enjoy the ride with me! 🙌✨
don't drop until you read chapter 85 . it's fucking worth it characters feels alive . mc is now my spirit animal .
Author first of all ,good novel, great even but since I'm still I can't comment on the future development but for now it's really frustrating to read man. It seems like everyone and their dog can just take a piss at him so please just give me reassurance that all this will be paid back in full in the future.
It's a really good book, but quick question: Does Aether hate the archpriestess now?
hehe nice work dear author! I am at ch 146, where you asked whether you should include R18 or not. My answer is YES please, it would be super weird if MC doesn't sleep with the people who he has seduced. Since my suggestion is a little late, do tell whether it's R18 or not? (expecting an answer) If it's not then please include it.
Author does Aether go to his planet or timeline to extract revengers ? If not can you please make that arc it would be interesting . By the way one of the best reincarnation novels I have ever read . Keep doing the great work author .
This really is a good novel, when I first started reading this sometimes I wondered why the girls were falling for him really fast (like imagination stuff) but as we go along the story we understand the reason why, it is all interlinked with good reasoning. Really a good novel, The only thing that needs to be improved is power level accross (SPOILERS AHEAD: CAUTION) The world for example like him pissing off alaric (arcane king ) and alaric getting frightened sensing his aura even though they have huge power level difference and why kai is not taking care of his aether Even though his whole fate depends on him cause if aether dies his soul will damage and he will lose his arcane king status only these things needs to be improved
this novel has variety of emotions and beautiful occasions and actions but author please let his family face the Consequences of what thy done to him please don't let them this easy
muy buena la verdad pero frustra las cosas que le pasan al protagonista a pesar de eso engancha muy bien la historia aunque un poco lenta
the most underrated novel on web novel.people are not reading because MC is a slave or whatnot but the after 500 chapter MC just dog walk and entire empire. Read this novel if you like op MC , seggs , oyakadon and Taboo love.
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I am on chapter 598 and so far I am enjoying it I like the romance so its 5/5 the power syster is ok but the romance 5/5 so idc about the power system
One of the most underrated novels in this app, I know it has a tough beggining with Aether suffering as a slave bla bla bla… But if you can please give this book a chance and don’t judge it just for its firs chapters and keep reading, I assure you that you won’t regret reading it. So if you have some coins there unused and do not know on what you should use them then please try them on this book, I am telling you the author knows what he is doing with the story and also try reading the comments too so you can guide a little bit on how the story is progressing and if you have questions always leave a comment, author usually answers really quick. In conclusion, read the story I know sometimes it will give you this urge to quit the reading for the MC’s suffering as a slave and for a lot more things but it is all part of the story and part of his character’s development, and in my opinion from what I have seen till now, I can see that he has changed a lot since the beginning thank you for taking your time reading my review, and I hope you enjoy this book as much as I am enjoying it.
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Review From Chapter 119: Honestly, this novels development shocked me. I was quite annoyed at the first 20-25 chapters because pretty much nothing of significance happened. I kept reading primarily because I saw some comments saying it gets way better and they were 100% right. I would say it really starts to take off around chapter 50 when the forrest situation happens and it just gets better and better from the on. I can say I definitely recommend giving this novel a try.
This story has some of the best writing that I have seen on all of Webnovel. You can really immerse yourself in the story. I've made it to chapter 85, but this story is really depressing. There basically hasn't been one good thing that's happened to the main character. I feel like the author is really good at making the MC miserable. It's not a bad thing it just kinda made me depressed. I might come back to this at a later date after.
I would say a perfect 5 star is enough for this novel. And I am not going to say that anyone should or shouldn't read this novel as everyone as their own preference.
Hallo thia novel story is too good Yes , it's my favourite novel too🥰💖 I wanted to ask you when he able revenge on that Duke's (disgusted) family 😅😅🤧 kai and on his father because they put on him slave coller and abuse him..😤
first and most importantly: It's an amazing work, author. you have out-done yourself. great work 👏🏽. and pls take care of yourself for us and for yourself. and i hope you are doing well too. this became one of my fav novels. I have been reading it for almost a week to catch up up-to-date. twist and turn along with suspense and mystery brewing is very intriguing. And especially the character development and well written characters were fun to read their interactions. you know the characters are written well when they make you feel frustrated, happy, sad, angry and irritated. in the beginning it was unbearable to read but as i read the mc begining more intriguing and before I know it. it grew on me. 🤧🤧 your writing style is really amazing. 100% recommended to anyone who is looking for something to read.
It is an amazing book, really fantastic story I just really like the way everything is portrayed and wow hah I really like this book A LOT.
maaf kalau ulasannya kurang berkenan.cerita dari awal sudah bagus.tapi semakin kesini cara tokoh utama bertambah kuat terlalu cepat menurutku lho.terus yang paling saya tidak setujui adalah sifat karakter utama semakin kesini semakin mesum.saya lebih suka karakter yang lebih menjaga perilaku mesum sesedikit mungkin. sekali lagi, ceritanya bagus tapi saya mulai tidak menyukai sifat karakternya.saya suka sifat awalnya tapi setelah menjadi sifat tukang cabul itu jadi menurunkan nilai karakternya.MAAF.
I rate it 5 out of 5 because I enjoy it a lot....................................................................................................................
this novel got me addicted it's so good a shame I have to wait a day to read 4 chapters >->
Hey author i love this book a lot and your first novel is even better if possible can u tell us when will u start updating your first novel
Sir What about My yandere wives are transcendents, You even deleated its remastered version, and it was in a pretty good flow at that?? kind explain us about this issue
Hello Guys, This is my second novel... My first novel is 'My Yandere Wives Are Transcendents'. Mind giving a read to both of them. That's all....
One of the best novels I have read so far and i just saw it never had a proper review explaining everything so here I am doing the grueling task xD... --- Writing Quality (10/10) The writing quality in this novel is exceptional, with a bit of mystery blending in. The novel is immersive making the reading experience smooth and enjoyable. The author demonstrates the skill of a veteran writer even though this is his 2nd novel. The pacing is natural, and it has me completely hooked. I would even compare it some of the most famous and read novels present in wn. --- World-Building (10/10) The novel starts in Earth and then comes to a world or if that's what you would call it as it is 5 massive pieces of flat land which are 5 different empires all with different composition, geography and many other things, being held up by massive roots whose origins or end point isn't revealed still at the point.. There are illustration of the world in the discord and also posted in the relevant chaps so you can check there for a clear image.. Anyway there are some gods and higher beings introduced who are playing a dangerous game with many things on the line.. --- Power System (9/10) The power system here is a unique system by upgrading some present power systems and also adding some new pieces. Aether the protagonist, possesses a broken bloodline that even the Gods and higher beings fears and also has a log/system who's origins are revealed in parts as we go on with the story. And i would say this here the mc is as op as one can get that no one in the world can fight him and the gods and their people has to come to fight the mc. There are also some gods who are in support of him.. --- Character Development (10/10) Aether is one of the best MC I have ever read, he is smart and also knows how to use his head. And if someone only reads novels for wish fulfilment and likes mc's who never faces a little bit of difficulty this definitely not for them because there will be ups and downs, highs and lows that the MC will go through. The MC starts of as a slave and is treated a bit poorly for the starting chaps but you can already see himself picking himself up from around 40 chaps and he also b*ats the sh*t out of the boy who is his master and all other who treated him badly in 100-110 chaps(remember he beats his master even though he is under his slave mark.. It should tell you how much OP he is to break even the universal laws and contracts built by gods)... And he has also already taken his revenge on the main culprit behind his slavery... And I also want to say that if he was really a slave and could be pushed around, this novel won't have this many supporters who gives ps and gt.. No reader's will waste their coins, GT and PS on a novel who's mc is just a slave and nothing more.. --- Romance (10/10) Reading the title one might think this is a sm*t novel and that he will pick up FLs left and right but it isn't like that.. The way author potrays the romance is just... Just fantastic... Every single FL present is relevant to the story and plot and there have been only 6-7 r18 scenes until latest chap so you can understand how much detail is put into every relationship. --- Update Stability (10/10) The author has great updating schedule with sometimes even releasing 2 chaps a day, hope he makes it 10 chaps a day lol.. Jokes aside he has great updating schedule and doesn't miss out a day on updates and he also gives bonuses when certain requirements are fulfilled.. --- Overall Impression (9.5/10) So to sum it up this novel is a complete gem of a novel you don't want to miss out on.. P. S. :- I forgot to mention this but there are no plot holes in the novel which are prone to some op mc novels.. And if you have reached the end of this review I hope you will definitely give this novel a try and help us in making it even more popular than it already is... And if you read it and also come to like it do share it with your known novel enthusiasts and friends This is definitely a must-read for fans of reincarnation, fantasy, sword&magic and mystery stories. So give it a chance guys I am certain you definitely like it.. If you have any questions regarding the novel you can ask them.. I will try to ans them to the best of my ability... or you can also ask the author in the comments or in discord I have never seen him not reply to a question from any of his readers.. Thanks for reading this lengthy review lol ---
🎉 Hey everyone! 🎉 It’s been ONE WHOLE YEAR since my novel was released, and wow, what a ride it’s been! I just wanted to come here and share my honest thoughts with you all—though I’ll admit, it might be a tiny bit biased 😉. Cough, Cough Anyway, Now, I’m not the greatest at making first impressions (let’s be real here 😅), and yes, the beginning of my novel can feel a little slow. It might even seem a bit boring at first, but trust me, don’t close it just yet!! 🚫 Once you get past that slow start, the thrills, twists, and curiosity will kick in HARD! 😱🔥 My novel is a slow burn, but that’s what makes it exciting! (Lots of emotions to be honest) Sure, it’s a bit like waiting for a spark to turn into a full-on blaze, but trust me—the payoff is so worth it! 🙌 I’ve seen reviews saying the MC starts off as a "slave" and a "pushover," and, well... yes, he kinda does... 😬 BUT WAIT—don’t close the book just yet! By chapter 100, things get WILD, and you’ll see how much he evolves into something so much more! He’s not a pushover—he’s a character on the rise, and you’re going to LOVE the transformation! 😏💥 Yes, there are a few sad moments, but don’t worry—I’m an author who loves my characters, and I would NEVER leave them in constant despair! 🌈 The sad moments are just temporary and trust me, it all turns around for the better! 💖 And let’s talk about the female leads! 😍❤️ ... all I can say... They’re incredible, and I’m sure you’re going to fall in love with them, even if it takes a little time! (But let’s be real, you’ll love them soon enough 😉). They’re complex, strong, and definitely bring the heat! 🔥🔥 Oh, and did I mention? There are YANDERES!!! 😈💘 Get ready for some seriously intense, crazy moments that’ll keep you on the edge of your seat! Buckle up, because the drama is REAL! 🚨💣 Thank you all for sticking with me on this journey! 🚀 I can’t wait to see where we go next—you won’t want to miss what’s coming! So grab your phone/laptop/whatever 😋, sit back, and enjoy the ride with me! 🙌✨
don't drop until you read chapter 85 . it's fucking worth it characters feels alive . mc is now my spirit animal .
Author first of all ,good novel, great even but since I'm still I can't comment on the future development but for now it's really frustrating to read man. It seems like everyone and their dog can just take a piss at him so please just give me reassurance that all this will be paid back in full in the future.
It's a really good book, but quick question: Does Aether hate the archpriestess now?
hehe nice work dear author! I am at ch 146, where you asked whether you should include R18 or not. My answer is YES please, it would be super weird if MC doesn't sleep with the people who he has seduced. Since my suggestion is a little late, do tell whether it's R18 or not? (expecting an answer) If it's not then please include it.
Author does Aether go to his planet or timeline to extract revengers ? If not can you please make that arc it would be interesting . By the way one of the best reincarnation novels I have ever read . Keep doing the great work author .
This really is a good novel, when I first started reading this sometimes I wondered why the girls were falling for him really fast (like imagination stuff) but as we go along the story we understand the reason why, it is all interlinked with good reasoning. Really a good novel, The only thing that needs to be improved is power level accross (SPOILERS AHEAD: CAUTION) The world for example like him pissing off alaric (arcane king ) and alaric getting frightened sensing his aura even though they have huge power level difference and why kai is not taking care of his aether Even though his whole fate depends on him cause if aether dies his soul will damage and he will lose his arcane king status only these things needs to be improved
this novel has variety of emotions and beautiful occasions and actions but author please let his family face the Consequences of what thy done to him please don't let them this easy
muy buena la verdad pero frustra las cosas que le pasan al protagonista a pesar de eso engancha muy bien la historia aunque un poco lenta
the most underrated novel on web novel.people are not reading because MC is a slave or whatnot but the after 500 chapter MC just dog walk and entire empire. Read this novel if you like op MC , seggs , oyakadon and Taboo love.
Reveal Spoiler I am on chapter 598 and so far I am enjoying it I like the romance so its 5/5 the power syster is ok but the romance 5/5 so idc about the power system
One of the most underrated novels in this app, I know it has a tough beggining with Aether suffering as a slave bla bla bla… But if you can please give this book a chance and don’t judge it just for its firs chapters and keep reading, I assure you that you won’t regret reading it. So if you have some coins there unused and do not know on what you should use them then please try them on this book, I am telling you the author knows what he is doing with the story and also try reading the comments too so you can guide a little bit on how the story is progressing and if you have questions always leave a comment, author usually answers really quick. In conclusion, read the story I know sometimes it will give you this urge to quit the reading for the MC’s suffering as a slave and for a lot more things but it is all part of the story and part of his character’s development, and in my opinion from what I have seen till now, I can see that he has changed a lot since the beginning thank you for taking your time reading my review, and I hope you enjoy this book as much as I am enjoying it.
Reveal Spoiler Review From Chapter 119: Honestly, this novels development shocked me. I was quite annoyed at the first 20-25 chapters because pretty much nothing of significance happened. I kept reading primarily because I saw some comments saying it gets way better and they were 100% right. I would say it really starts to take off around chapter 50 when the forrest situation happens and it just gets better and better from the on. I can say I definitely recommend giving this novel a try.
This story has some of the best writing that I have seen on all of Webnovel. You can really immerse yourself in the story. I've made it to chapter 85, but this story is really depressing. There basically hasn't been one good thing that's happened to the main character. I feel like the author is really good at making the MC miserable. It's not a bad thing it just kinda made me depressed. I might come back to this at a later date after.
I would say a perfect 5 star is enough for this novel. And I am not going to say that anyone should or shouldn't read this novel as everyone as their own preference.
Hallo thia novel story is too good Yes , it's my favourite novel too🥰💖 I wanted to ask you when he able revenge on that Duke's (disgusted) family 😅😅🤧 kai and on his father because they put on him slave coller and abuse him..😤
first and most importantly: It's an amazing work, author. you have out-done yourself. great work 👏🏽. and pls take care of yourself for us and for yourself. and i hope you are doing well too. this became one of my fav novels. I have been reading it for almost a week to catch up up-to-date. twist and turn along with suspense and mystery brewing is very intriguing. And especially the character development and well written characters were fun to read their interactions. you know the characters are written well when they make you feel frustrated, happy, sad, angry and irritated. in the beginning it was unbearable to read but as i read the mc begining more intriguing and before I know it. it grew on me. 🤧🤧 your writing style is really amazing. 100% recommended to anyone who is looking for something to read.
It is an amazing book, really fantastic story I just really like the way everything is portrayed and wow hah I really like this book A LOT.
maaf kalau ulasannya kurang berkenan.cerita dari awal sudah bagus.tapi semakin kesini cara tokoh utama bertambah kuat terlalu cepat menurutku lho.terus yang paling saya tidak setujui adalah sifat karakter utama semakin kesini semakin mesum.saya lebih suka karakter yang lebih menjaga perilaku mesum sesedikit mungkin. sekali lagi, ceritanya bagus tapi saya mulai tidak menyukai sifat karakternya.saya suka sifat awalnya tapi setelah menjadi sifat tukang cabul itu jadi menurunkan nilai karakternya.MAAF.
I rate it 5 out of 5 because I enjoy it a lot....................................................................................................................
this novel got me addicted it's so good a shame I have to wait a day to read 4 chapters >->
Hey author i love this book a lot and your first novel is even better if possible can u tell us when will u start updating your first novel
Sir What about My yandere wives are transcendents, You even deleated its remastered version, and it was in a pretty good flow at that?? kind explain us about this issue
Hello Guys, This is my second novel... My first novel is 'My Yandere Wives Are Transcendents'. Mind giving a read to both of them. That's all....