Super Ninja

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nightingale24

even though your MC is pedophile i wanna ask something about a fight yo, why did enemy ninja attacked when there was nothing and why was attacking worth 4-5 jonin around 10 chunin and gazillion genin and why did base 2-3 month out of academy lee can handle 3-4 chunin even for a second and if enemy's count was so big so why didn't anyone died in MC's side and why did every chunin and joinin was killed by MC even guy's opponent were killed by MC, is our MC chinese..?? he knows any magic?? OMG #chinanumbawan PS you are pedophile

LV 1

nobody29web

this fic is perfect except for 2 things 1st. Ridiculous naming like "Zoro Mugiwara", 'Yuji Itadori', 'Zaraki Kuchki" and worst is MC "Suzuki Grandvitara" 2nd. Mc's desire to bone 12 year old Ten Ten and 11 year old Sakura, it would had been cool if MC is originally from naruto world but he is a SI and him trying to bone 11-12 year olds Man i don't think even Drake was this pedophile..

LV 3

JokesOnYou

Not overpowered just talented, Terrible naming sense for MC , Bland and boring character design. Really just annoyed it says overpowered when really he just more skilled than others not much to make this story stand out.

the mc is just unlikable in the most cringe way possible. the entire first chapter was totally unnecessary and only made the mc seem like a schizo. either this was written by a malfunctioning AI or a retard

LV 3

Keiou_Owlo

The story is very good and has a different way of approaching reincarnation. It's not 100% clear if he doesn't remember, if his memories about the world are deteriorating, or if he didn't watch the entire anime. But that doesn't diminish the quality of the story in any way. One of the best Naruto fics I've ever read. Congratulations.

LV 1

Akshay_Dere

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Akshay_Dere

Good writing. I felt very satisfied after reading such a fantastic Naruto fanfic after a Long time. Very good continue the good work.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

LV 15

kamran_ein

So far this is actually really good. The backround and development are great, Grammer I'd good and I found I couldn't stop reading until I read all the chapters in one sitting. This has the potential to be one of the more solid naruto fanfics I've seen on here if the author keeps this up. good work 👍

LV 4

Glebby_Boi

This so great Naruto ff! Definitely has the potential to be in the top 10. The characters feel real, the interactions are great, the story development is nice and the world-building and scenarios are more ‘real’. Can’t wait for more chapters!

LV 1

Erick_Espinoza

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

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Mili_Neer

Fanfic about the world of Naruto without a system. I can't believe my eyes. Thank you. Just thank you. And the story is not bad. The character is not an imba, he makes an effort. And he has no system. I repeat - there is no system.

LV 3

Remy_Young_0341

When it came to the smut, it was very odd, I dislike the way he handled killing, and his sentiment was very unrealistic, and unreasonable, the story was good at first; then devolved to complete degeneracy.

LV 4

MMEStudio

I read the first 8 chapters and iam really satisfied the beginning met all of my expectations I will renew my review at chapter 25