Shining God in Danmachi

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Cozmooo

Well, as is customary, I come to leave my own 5 stars. This work is a personal project. I've read many novels, and after reading so much, I thought, I can do one too. With that idea, I embark on this journey, my first novel and my first experience. So I hope you'll be patient with me. I accept suggestions and advice. I hope you like the work!

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Hugo_Adam

Man sad, man scroll, man see no harem tag, man happy .

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NunuXD

Can't keep reading... The Mc is just a Simp for Riviera. He lives million or bilions of years as a god and is still a Simp for a 2d anime girl that he saw on his past life? In one moment he is acting like he is the stronger being in the world, in the other moment he is an Otaku that can't stop think about an elf he saw in an anime millions of years ago lol. And not only this, but why the author made the MC so powerful and respected in the godly world, but it the human world he is just acting like a poor guy. Where is the proud he had? Bro have the power to destroy the world of he wants, he acted like that in the godly world, but in the mortal world he just ignore that and became a poor guy that has to be humble to a king that hate him? This is definetly not a novel for me

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LeafPanda

This story has a strong potential!! Keep this up as I believe more people are gonna read this. Especially the idea of this story is very unique compared to others!!

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MARLENE_ANGEL

TRUTH THIS NOVEL IS EPIC AND FUN TO READ NO BS WHEN YOU READ YOU HAVE FUN BECAUSE IT HAS A STORY TO TELL YOU.I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THE CHARACTERS IT WAS FUN AND THE PLOT STORY IS DONE RIGHT WITH A LOT OF POTENTIAL FOR A BIGGER UNIVERSE ..SO I HOPE IN THE FUTURE THIS STORY GOES BIG BECAUSE IT HAS THAT ELEMENT. I LOVE THIS NOVEL SO YOU WILL TOO.

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Akros_Zero

I would be very blunt about this fiction. It's interesting and good all said but Mc is a trash. He is supposedly million years old and has a god like mindset, which I see none in him. Secondly, he whines like a child, and acts submissive in front of Riveria. I get it you wanna make a Mc that doesn't acts like he his on high, but realize what the heck you have made. You say he sees her as wife so he acts like that, but actually that's totally wrong. They aren't hudband and wife and secondly making romance so slow, not to mention. Riveria blames him for everything, like it's his kistake they aren't getting members, etc. In the end he have become a outlet for her frustration, the character development and world background both suck. Otherwise it's good, and well since the main part of it sucks anyway, I don't know what you should expect. You can try to make a rewrite considering you have a very low number of chaps. You will need to plan for the lore, plot and things more. Lastly, you gotta focus on Mc's personality. He should have been a bit of aloof, cold yet kind personality as a God of light. Riveria should have developed a crush on him, and he as well. That's how romance have progressed. I will be blunt, this isn't quite good. but you can try to make it better for your future readers. Anyway I will be leaving. -Akros peace out...

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_DEKIM_

The first chapters were perfect, but then the problems started. So far there are two problems in my opinion. The first problem is the little voice in the protagonist's head. Second problem and rudeus in the family.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

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hunter2kid

I like the way this story is going the main character is OP but not to the point where it ruins the story.

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VirginYoungMaster

This young master is very handsome. Bow down to me mortal!

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PathSeeker_

Amazing story keep up the good work.

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milkuuuu

One of the few good non-harem fanfics left in this platform, keep up the work author!

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Anshuman_Nirwan_0743

It is very good fanfiction,one of the best danmachi ff, just dont drop it

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jonathan_santosmtz

Rivera es la mejor y gran fanfic 😔👍👍 💚 ,. .. ......................................................... .......................................... .......................................... .............. ..............

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DemonVenerable69

so good so far, this is the first i read a fic where the mc is an op god in danmachi and travels to different world to recruit familia members, in all its a unique story with a good potential

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Itachi_Uchiha000

I really love it as this story has good story development. I've seen so many cliches, but this one is new. Which makes it more mesmerizing for me as I continued reading it. You got this author!!

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Fkhri_Maulana

I like this book .................actually that's all I want to say, but web novels don't allow comments with a small number of words, so let's mention the good points, the number of words for 1 chapter of this book is very long 2000-5000 words, multiverse novel, characters written appropriately like the original, cultured MC, then a comedian who I think is quite funny....

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Flint_dad

MORE LIGHT PLEASE! so How is going your DAY?

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Hamid_Djafri

Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on

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jonathan_santosmtz

Me gustó, además la protagonista femenina es rivera 💚💚 ............................................................................,.........................................,...................