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Overall a nice story and I saw no grammar mistakes I think, but ye if ya like Honkai impact ya gonna like to read this tho prob gonna have to wait for more chapters till we get to the actual nitty gritty of the story.
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The title may sound confusing but it'll be a happy ending. Enjoy the read and give me comments on grammer and spelling mistakes
Overall a nice story and I saw no grammar mistakes I think, but ye if ya like Honkai impact ya gonna like to read this tho prob gonna have to wait for more chapters till we get to the actual nitty gritty of the story.
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The title may sound confusing but it'll be a happy ending. Enjoy the read and give me comments on grammer and spelling mistakes