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Overall love it the idea of being a desperado in danmachi is great though I wish he would upload more chapters often then on Paterson for the people who actually love the book but can鈥檛 afford to pay the fees to read the updated chapters
I need more chapters!!!!! Please don't drop 馃槴 馃檹 馃槩 馃槶 馃槱 馃様 馃槴..I slowly die inside. 馃槩 hello darkness my old friend 馃幎 馃挃 I love the concept that he was given a second chance by shiroyasha from the little garden since they are stated to be close to omnipotent and can view trillions of worlds below the divine realm and the gods of other world are copies of the legends in little garden.
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the story is good but it has a major flaw and its the mc, author favor his own mc so much that its illogical....he put a sword to freyas "danmachi" neck and otahr did not kill him ? illogical to max anyone even thinking about harming freya and he vould go berserker in the middle of street and paint it red lol yet mc can stand there at lvl 3 acting like he is the coolst smurf in the world , lets not forget freya herself vould have killd him by the end of the day lol with so many dirty things she got on every god/godess she could easly do it, there is a reason why she is at the top lol and mc even told her he knew about her other personality lol and he still lives.. illogical again .. this is a story for those of you who like the mc to be the best,coolest and in every turn be in the center of attention and whenever he does something it will always turn out good nothing ever going against him and that peeps are this stories biggest flaw its so obviouse whats going to happend and its first class wish fulfillment
i havent read the novel yet but just because it has chivalry of a failed knight im leaving a 4 stars, not 5 stars cause i dont wanna be one of "those" guy. also please give kurogane his sister at the least
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I have never heard of a Chivalry of a Failed Knight fanfic on this app before, so automatic 5 stars for you
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Overall love it the idea of being a desperado in danmachi is great though I wish he would upload more chapters often then on Paterson for the people who actually love the book but can鈥檛 afford to pay the fees to read the updated chapters
I need more chapters!!!!! Please don't drop 馃槴 馃檹 馃槩 馃槶 馃槱 馃様 馃槴..I slowly die inside. 馃槩 hello darkness my old friend 馃幎 馃挃 I love the concept that he was given a second chance by shiroyasha from the little garden since they are stated to be close to omnipotent and can view trillions of worlds below the divine realm and the gods of other world are copies of the legends in little garden.
La historia me gusto, me agrado la explicaci贸n del porque fue reencarnado y la elecci贸n del mundo. Pero tiene varias deficiencias, el autor hizo que el protagonista no enfrentara consecuencias en varias situaciones en las que actu贸 de forma suicida. En mi opini贸n el mayor problema que encuentro en esta historia es que el protagonista se reencarnara sin recuerdos de estos mundos ficticios y aun asi pudiera relacionarse con los personajes principales, lo mas molesto es que se pierde el prop贸sito o encanto de leer un fanfiction sobre reencarnaci贸n, si el protagonista no sabe sobre este mundo, entonces no tiene sentido que lo utilices, podrias crear cualquiera y seria lo mismo.
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the story is good but it has a major flaw and its the mc, author favor his own mc so much that its illogical....he put a sword to freyas "danmachi" neck and otahr did not kill him ? illogical to max anyone even thinking about harming freya and he vould go berserker in the middle of street and paint it red lol yet mc can stand there at lvl 3 acting like he is the coolst smurf in the world , lets not forget freya herself vould have killd him by the end of the day lol with so many dirty things she got on every god/godess she could easly do it, there is a reason why she is at the top lol and mc even told her he knew about her other personality lol and he still lives.. illogical again .. this is a story for those of you who like the mc to be the best,coolest and in every turn be in the center of attention and whenever he does something it will always turn out good nothing ever going against him and that peeps are this stories biggest flaw its so obviouse whats going to happend and its first class wish fulfillment
i havent read the novel yet but just because it has chivalry of a failed knight im leaving a 4 stars, not 5 stars cause i dont wanna be one of "those" guy. also please give kurogane his sister at the least
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I have never heard of a Chivalry of a Failed Knight fanfic on this app before, so automatic 5 stars for you
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