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Rinne Sharingan was heavily nerfed. Mcβs Cursed Technique was not explored. Could have added more fights with cursed spirits. Mc was also acting stupidly in some situations. He could have been more cunning in his plans instead of outright hostility
If you have a cuck fetish this is for you. In the vary first 18+ scene the mc has a bath with Shoko his cousin and washes her and makes her aroused only to stop at the end then he was listening to her and could hear her mast*rbating while calling "Gojo's" name.
La historia en mi opiniΓ³n es buena y entretenida, porfavor no lo abandonesπ, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------
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I hope the next part comes out soon because the past chapters have been great so I can wait for the next part
Absolutely love the story. Looking forward to when the mc grows up more. I thinks its really cool that toji is his teacher. Keep up the great work author. Also please try to keep Gojo alive.
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The fic is pretty funny, and I always liked an OP mc. I have a lot of trouble telling who is doing the talking because sometimes there are large stretches of dialogue without any indication of who is speaking. MC wants a harem of beauties but is going about it in a kind of pathetic way. Considering heβs a child you canβt ask for much but forcing a woman who sees you as her brother to stay with you by using your authority is a little pitiful. Iβm sure itβll get better once heβs not a child but for now he has to act like a young master to get Shoko. Heβs a little torture happy but Iβm sure MC will learn to get what he wants without going nuclear every time anybody doesnβt obey him immediately. He needs more charisma and vision. Needs a goal besides chasing tail.
The Rinne Sharingan is the strongest doujutsu ever presented in Naruto, and so powerful that it can destroy dimensions, it can use all the standard powers of the Rinnegan too, but in this fanfic the MC thinks that it won't get stronger depending on the Rinne Sharingan, just the MSE is already more powerful than the six eyes
I haven't even read a chapter till now but giving 5 stars because of the Mommy cover art of Maki! Wow! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The Rinne Sharingan is the strongest doujutsu ever presented in Naruto, and so powerful that it can destroy dimensions, it can use all the standard powers of the Rinnegan too, but in this fanfic the MC thinks that it won't get stronger depending on the Rinne Sharingan, just the MSE is already more powerful than the six eyes
the mc goal is get beauties , but realistically non of the women or girls in jjk will give your MC time of day no matter how pretty or how much of a sweet talker , most of them will snub u and continue with their day, the only female that will give u a time of day is mai or the witch girl , but i am sure the author doesnt care about them
10/10 I feel like my flames are lit by this story, an evil fire is trying to take over my sanity. we want snu snu ββ‘βββ‘β ββ‘β‘ββ‘β βββ‘β βββ‘β€ββ€β ββ€ββ‘β‘ββ‘ββββββββ
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ΠΠΎΠΊΠ° ΠΎΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠ½ΠΎ, Π½Π°Π΄Π΅ΡΡΡ Π½Π° Utahime ΠΈ Kasumi//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
(This isn't a shameless review) This is the best JJK fanfic you will ever read, if you have questions you can ask them here.
Rinne Sharingan was heavily nerfed. Mcβs Cursed Technique was not explored. Could have added more fights with cursed spirits. Mc was also acting stupidly in some situations. He could have been more cunning in his plans instead of outright hostility
If you have a cuck fetish this is for you. In the vary first 18+ scene the mc has a bath with Shoko his cousin and washes her and makes her aroused only to stop at the end then he was listening to her and could hear her mast*rbating while calling "Gojo's" name.
La historia en mi opiniΓ³n es buena y entretenida, porfavor no lo abandonesπ, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I hope the next part comes out soon because the past chapters have been great so I can wait for the next part
Absolutely love the story. Looking forward to when the mc grows up more. I thinks its really cool that toji is his teacher. Keep up the great work author. Also please try to keep Gojo alive.
Reveal Spoiler The fic is pretty funny, and I always liked an OP mc. I have a lot of trouble telling who is doing the talking because sometimes there are large stretches of dialogue without any indication of who is speaking. MC wants a harem of beauties but is going about it in a kind of pathetic way. Considering heβs a child you canβt ask for much but forcing a woman who sees you as her brother to stay with you by using your authority is a little pitiful. Iβm sure itβll get better once heβs not a child but for now he has to act like a young master to get Shoko. Heβs a little torture happy but Iβm sure MC will learn to get what he wants without going nuclear every time anybody doesnβt obey him immediately. He needs more charisma and vision. Needs a goal besides chasing tail.
The Rinne Sharingan is the strongest doujutsu ever presented in Naruto, and so powerful that it can destroy dimensions, it can use all the standard powers of the Rinnegan too, but in this fanfic the MC thinks that it won't get stronger depending on the Rinne Sharingan, just the MSE is already more powerful than the six eyes
I haven't even read a chapter till now but giving 5 stars because of the Mommy cover art of Maki! Wow! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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bad....[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
Reveal Spoiler The Rinne Sharingan is the strongest doujutsu ever presented in Naruto, and so powerful that it can destroy dimensions, it can use all the standard powers of the Rinnegan too, but in this fanfic the MC thinks that it won't get stronger depending on the Rinne Sharingan, just the MSE is already more powerful than the six eyes
the mc goal is get beauties , but realistically non of the women or girls in jjk will give your MC time of day no matter how pretty or how much of a sweet talker , most of them will snub u and continue with their day, the only female that will give u a time of day is mai or the witch girl , but i am sure the author doesnt care about them
10/10 I feel like my flames are lit by this story, an evil fire is trying to take over my sanity. we want snu snu ββ‘βββ‘β ββ‘β‘ββ‘β βββ‘β βββ‘β€ββ€β ββ€ββ‘β‘ββ‘ββββββββ
this history has potential , continue [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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ΠΠΎΠΊΠ° ΠΎΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠ½ΠΎ, Π½Π°Π΄Π΅ΡΡΡ Π½Π° Utahime ΠΈ Kasumi//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
(This isn't a shameless review) This is the best JJK fanfic you will ever read, if you have questions you can ask them here.