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Perhaps the female lead is supposed to be lively but she just comes off as a foolish child
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I’m not sure how to evaluate this story so far. Writing is smooth, grammar good but the storyline doesn’t make sense. (Part of pulling out arrow near heart before finding the right herbs to stop blood loss, then doing chest compression). Soldiers coming were in imperial armour, wouldn’t it make sense to seek their help? So read with a very broad mind ya.
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Perhaps the female lead is supposed to be lively but she just comes off as a foolish child
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I’m not sure how to evaluate this story so far. Writing is smooth, grammar good but the storyline doesn’t make sense. (Part of pulling out arrow near heart before finding the right herbs to stop blood loss, then doing chest compression). Soldiers coming were in imperial armour, wouldn’t it make sense to seek their help? So read with a very broad mind ya.