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Giving a review for ten Chapters so far, this novel updates daily and two chapters if given power stones (vote), the novel is specifically based on action (power fantasy) and there are also room for romance. I'm not that good at writing but I hope you enjoy what you're reading or will be reading... Adios
At the moment i'm writing this the story have 30 chapters. A good story with an interesting plot. I can see inspiration of Solo Leveling but not to the point that it looks a cheap copy, the story is still original. The world is really interesting and i see a lot of potential to have really interesting and good developed characters. I also like how the story show us that the other characters also continues with their lives and adventures even if the story follows Cyrus. Maybe i felt the development and adaptation of Cyrus in the new world a little fast, but nothing annoying. I can see the author still don't have a writing style and you can see inexperience in it, but it's not a problem becauso you just need to keep writing. I already see a little of improvement. Basically, an interesting story with good potential. I will follow it.
First and foremost this needs to be longer. Second this needs a second season or something. But overall not a bad start to story
I barely give reviews but It seems I have to give a review for this story. I've read your story and think it is a great story. But I have to ask. What are the negative effects of the MC instant rebirth? Does he just die and get up as if nothing has happened. Does he lose his morality to a greater power? Anyways, I wanted to say I like this story. Please Author, continue to write this story. Oh, right! Let's chat on discord.
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I’d say the book is genuinely amazing as it kept my interest till this point. The author often engages with viewers and so far world building is going smoothly so i would recommend starting, finishing and giving power stones to this book😁
I would say that the story has good potential. Keep up the pace man. And pls make the MC a bit cold and I also have a question and that is that does his stats double every rebirth or it increases randomly
Giving a review for ten Chapters so far, this novel updates daily and two chapters if given power stones (vote), the novel is specifically based on action (power fantasy) and there are also room for romance. I'm not that good at writing but I hope you enjoy what you're reading or will be reading... Adios
At the moment i'm writing this the story have 30 chapters. A good story with an interesting plot. I can see inspiration of Solo Leveling but not to the point that it looks a cheap copy, the story is still original. The world is really interesting and i see a lot of potential to have really interesting and good developed characters. I also like how the story show us that the other characters also continues with their lives and adventures even if the story follows Cyrus. Maybe i felt the development and adaptation of Cyrus in the new world a little fast, but nothing annoying. I can see the author still don't have a writing style and you can see inexperience in it, but it's not a problem becauso you just need to keep writing. I already see a little of improvement. Basically, an interesting story with good potential. I will follow it.
First and foremost this needs to be longer. Second this needs a second season or something. But overall not a bad start to story
I barely give reviews but It seems I have to give a review for this story. I've read your story and think it is a great story. But I have to ask. What are the negative effects of the MC instant rebirth? Does he just die and get up as if nothing has happened. Does he lose his morality to a greater power? Anyways, I wanted to say I like this story. Please Author, continue to write this story. Oh, right! Let's chat on discord.
Reveal Spoiler I’d say the book is genuinely amazing as it kept my interest till this point. The author often engages with viewers and so far world building is going smoothly so i would recommend starting, finishing and giving power stones to this book😁
I would say that the story has good potential. Keep up the pace man. And pls make the MC a bit cold and I also have a question and that is that does his stats double every rebirth or it increases randomly