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XElenea

This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.

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XElenea

NEW PROJECT!!! --- If you like this fanfiction, you will definitely like our other fanfiction, so feel free to visit our profile to read our new fanfiction: [Fate/Magus Path] In Fuyuki City, as an average man, Roy lives a calm and stable life every day that even Kira Yoshikage would envy. Adhering to the principle of staying a step ahead of disaster and running fast enough to avoid trouble, he leads a safe life in this dangerous world. However, his life trajectory begins to deviate drastically after being drawn into the massive magical ritual of the Holy Grail War. The Avenger known as the King of the Cavern extends a hand to him, and the Magus of Flowers offers applause for his story; the excitement of the tale is just beginning to unfold. The King of Knights, the King of Heroes, the King of Conqueror... stories continue to develop as he encounters countless heroes and writes new chapters of his life. Since being ordinary can no longer be guaranteed, it's time to start writing his own story. "The ending of the story will be decided by me."

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Random_Read3r

Is there much to say? This is good. Absolute cinema🙌 The only problem? It's in histus atm, the author needs to step up their game! It's been six months since this was last translated 🥲

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Aoki_seino

Continue / Continue / Continue / Continue /

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Keyaruga_Tsuki

I heard their was a Harem. Someone please tell me.

1mth
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ORIGINofALL

Only gonna say one thing I didn't know it was possible to make a story like this which is a masterpiece even the world masterpiece can't describe just how good this story is and at chapter 62 this story is at jta peak and even the next chapter ita just perfect

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The_Alfa

so the novel is really fantastic with many relatable reference, jokes, and philosophy. But the harem ruined it. I myself don't really mind a harem in a story, but for this novel it ruined the story. in the first volume mc is had a principle, that he won't cheat or have any other woman beside Morgan, which lead to fantastic ending in volume 1. In volume 2 I get it, he's different person now but essentially still reindhard that's why he has a harem now, I get the point. But why when he got back to be reindhard now Morgan is fine with him have a harem? that's make the whole Arthoria thing to be meaningless, like that doesn't even make any sense. And volume 2 is really slow, although the ending is good, half of the volume is a filler. Him having a harem also doesn't have particular meaning like in volume 1. I'm really disappointed by this one

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i3bdul
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this honestly might be my favourite FF yet it's such a shame that the original author discontinued it i would have loved to read more of it.

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Rogiers_bro

This is an awesome fic I really like the world building and the interactions between characters by the way, it's a harem fic with quite a few women at the current chapter (131), but it doesn't focus on that, so even if you don't like harem, I would still recommend

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Lulamoon

I haven’t cried this much from a book in quite a while. Just read at least 63 chapters and you’ll see why.

3mth
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SarmelAC

excellent story, I hope it doesn't take too long to upload the next volume.

3mth
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Constantin_Valdor

where updates, the chapters?, where!!! WHERE!! WHEEERRRRRE!!!!!

4mth
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Kono_Dio_na

Stelle be like: What a rollercoaster ride! It's just... so peak... absolute cinema... Keep it coming!

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PerfectZero

The first volume was PEAK! But the story went down hill after that. Volume 2 has an interesting concept but it really doesn't fit the world of fate. Very good translation quality and fast updates.

6mth
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Shinomiya_Akira

Luar bisaaa...🔥🔥🔥...........................,..............,........................................................,.........................................................................................

6mth
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Daoist_Kaito

Everyone! I regret to tell out an unfortunate and saddening news, this might be in a hiatus until there are more chapters for xelenea to translate or continue where it left off (Le drifting off from the original novel) which I doubt. The blue line underlines the series title and the red line underlines the hiatus part

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UncleZhao

This is definitely the best fate fanfic I've come across. It's just unfortunate that there are only 3 chapters remaining from the original novel, which won't even amount to one chapter in this translated fanfic.

6mth
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InonameI

its good. I searched for the original but I only saw the mtl version called shape moon simulator. Why is the mtl story different from this? I thought this is just a translation but it seems there are some changes, like the greek simulation is his first life and many more.

6mth
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fbi_7027

Author cooking .........................

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Lord_Beliall

One of the best works on fate that I have read. The translation is quite good, easy to read. I didn’t like his initial relationship with Artoria a little, and then the abrupt transition to the harem without any problems, but this is not about the translator’s problems. Thank you.

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ZectKyrielight

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Redzeth
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As a translated work the quality slowly but surely picks up. I especially like the early narration sections where you can see the TL fully taking the reigns and doing all the work himself. First 60 or so chapters are hardcore solo waifu. Then when he lives through his 2nd simulation he suddenly becomes pro harem. Kinda sad to be honest since the true love at the start was kinda nice. Now he is just a sexual defiant most of the time. I enjoyed the first arc the most so far with his second arc in ancient greece feeling a bit lacking because his introduced fanfic characters had too minor a role and were just used for plot device that could be used by anyone else. In the end I can still say I recommend it, it’s an enjoyable read that is far above most fics out there right now. That being said, Im not sure if I’ll feel the same if the third arc goes even harder into the harem angle. After all, after a certain point there are just so many women that it becomes really fecking boring when he seduces his 40th concubine.

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Phearow

You could rename this to "Misadventures of a Poor Morgan Simp". It is amazing how the quality of the story is directly related to how relevant Morgan is at any specific time. That is to say, the less revelant she is the better, as soon as she pops up brain cells shut down.

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MilkLover

Very nice translation. Now, I've read till ch 20, and I read the 3rd last line of the synopsis. I really like Morgan, I can't believe you wrote such a spoiler in the synopsis.

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whatIMreading

What hooks you the most in this story will definitely be the protagonist, the epic moments of fighting stand out above everything else and seeing in the process action inspired by various franchises, quite good without a doubt.

7mth
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OshinoAi

It's a wonderful read! Well, at least for me, it is. The translator did a good job, keep up the good work!

7mth
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god_of_the_empty

Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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UncleZhao

I BET YOU'VE NEVER SEEN ACTION THIS GOOD BEFORE ---

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Superb1a

Wowww!! I have to say that first of all the translation is excellent, no weird names and gender pronouns are also used correctly(Shocking!!). Also, this is one of the best Fate Fanfcs I've ever read, the system isn't like the typical simaulator systems and the "cheats" are given in a resonable manner. Really like this and hope XElenea will keep translating. Though I did want to ask, how many chapters does the source have and is it completed?

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nostresspractice

Keep it up! I love this novel. Thank you for translating it! I really appreciate it. pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

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god_of_the_empty

Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo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XElenea

This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.

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XElenea

NEW PROJECT!!! --- If you like this fanfiction, you will definitely like our other fanfiction, so feel free to visit our profile to read our new fanfiction: [Fate/Magus Path] In Fuyuki City, as an average man, Roy lives a calm and stable life every day that even Kira Yoshikage would envy. Adhering to the principle of staying a step ahead of disaster and running fast enough to avoid trouble, he leads a safe life in this dangerous world. However, his life trajectory begins to deviate drastically after being drawn into the massive magical ritual of the Holy Grail War. The Avenger known as the King of the Cavern extends a hand to him, and the Magus of Flowers offers applause for his story; the excitement of the tale is just beginning to unfold. The King of Knights, the King of Heroes, the King of Conqueror... stories continue to develop as he encounters countless heroes and writes new chapters of his life. Since being ordinary can no longer be guaranteed, it's time to start writing his own story. "The ending of the story will be decided by me."

2mth
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Random_Read3r

Is there much to say? This is good. Absolute cinema🙌 The only problem? It's in histus atm, the author needs to step up their game! It's been six months since this was last translated 🥲

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Aoki_seino

Continue / Continue / Continue / Continue /

1mth
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Keyaruga_Tsuki

I heard their was a Harem. Someone please tell me.

1mth
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ORIGINofALL

Only gonna say one thing I didn't know it was possible to make a story like this which is a masterpiece even the world masterpiece can't describe just how good this story is and at chapter 62 this story is at jta peak and even the next chapter ita just perfect

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The_Alfa

so the novel is really fantastic with many relatable reference, jokes, and philosophy. But the harem ruined it. I myself don't really mind a harem in a story, but for this novel it ruined the story. in the first volume mc is had a principle, that he won't cheat or have any other woman beside Morgan, which lead to fantastic ending in volume 1. In volume 2 I get it, he's different person now but essentially still reindhard that's why he has a harem now, I get the point. But why when he got back to be reindhard now Morgan is fine with him have a harem? that's make the whole Arthoria thing to be meaningless, like that doesn't even make any sense. And volume 2 is really slow, although the ending is good, half of the volume is a filler. Him having a harem also doesn't have particular meaning like in volume 1. I'm really disappointed by this one

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i3bdul
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this honestly might be my favourite FF yet it's such a shame that the original author discontinued it i would have loved to read more of it.

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Rogiers_bro

This is an awesome fic I really like the world building and the interactions between characters by the way, it's a harem fic with quite a few women at the current chapter (131), but it doesn't focus on that, so even if you don't like harem, I would still recommend

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Lulamoon

I haven’t cried this much from a book in quite a while. Just read at least 63 chapters and you’ll see why.

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SarmelAC

excellent story, I hope it doesn't take too long to upload the next volume.

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Constantin_Valdor

where updates, the chapters?, where!!! WHERE!! WHEEERRRRRE!!!!!

4mth
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Kono_Dio_na

Stelle be like: What a rollercoaster ride! It's just... so peak... absolute cinema... Keep it coming!

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PerfectZero

The first volume was PEAK! But the story went down hill after that. Volume 2 has an interesting concept but it really doesn't fit the world of fate. Very good translation quality and fast updates.

6mth
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Shinomiya_Akira

Luar bisaaa...🔥🔥🔥...........................,..............,........................................................,.........................................................................................

6mth
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Daoist_Kaito

Everyone! I regret to tell out an unfortunate and saddening news, this might be in a hiatus until there are more chapters for xelenea to translate or continue where it left off (Le drifting off from the original novel) which I doubt. The blue line underlines the series title and the red line underlines the hiatus part

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UncleZhao

This is definitely the best fate fanfic I've come across. It's just unfortunate that there are only 3 chapters remaining from the original novel, which won't even amount to one chapter in this translated fanfic.

6mth
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InonameI

its good. I searched for the original but I only saw the mtl version called shape moon simulator. Why is the mtl story different from this? I thought this is just a translation but it seems there are some changes, like the greek simulation is his first life and many more.

6mth
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fbi_7027

Author cooking .........................

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Lord_Beliall

One of the best works on fate that I have read. The translation is quite good, easy to read. I didn’t like his initial relationship with Artoria a little, and then the abrupt transition to the harem without any problems, but this is not about the translator’s problems. Thank you.

6mth
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ZectKyrielight

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Redzeth
LV 13 Badge

As a translated work the quality slowly but surely picks up. I especially like the early narration sections where you can see the TL fully taking the reigns and doing all the work himself. First 60 or so chapters are hardcore solo waifu. Then when he lives through his 2nd simulation he suddenly becomes pro harem. Kinda sad to be honest since the true love at the start was kinda nice. Now he is just a sexual defiant most of the time. I enjoyed the first arc the most so far with his second arc in ancient greece feeling a bit lacking because his introduced fanfic characters had too minor a role and were just used for plot device that could be used by anyone else. In the end I can still say I recommend it, it’s an enjoyable read that is far above most fics out there right now. That being said, Im not sure if I’ll feel the same if the third arc goes even harder into the harem angle. After all, after a certain point there are just so many women that it becomes really fecking boring when he seduces his 40th concubine.

7mth
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Phearow

You could rename this to "Misadventures of a Poor Morgan Simp". It is amazing how the quality of the story is directly related to how relevant Morgan is at any specific time. That is to say, the less revelant she is the better, as soon as she pops up brain cells shut down.

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MilkLover

Very nice translation. Now, I've read till ch 20, and I read the 3rd last line of the synopsis. I really like Morgan, I can't believe you wrote such a spoiler in the synopsis.

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whatIMreading

What hooks you the most in this story will definitely be the protagonist, the epic moments of fighting stand out above everything else and seeing in the process action inspired by various franchises, quite good without a doubt.

7mth
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OshinoAi

It's a wonderful read! Well, at least for me, it is. The translator did a good job, keep up the good work!

7mth
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god_of_the_empty

Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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UncleZhao

I BET YOU'VE NEVER SEEN ACTION THIS GOOD BEFORE ---

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Superb1a

Wowww!! I have to say that first of all the translation is excellent, no weird names and gender pronouns are also used correctly(Shocking!!). Also, this is one of the best Fate Fanfcs I've ever read, the system isn't like the typical simaulator systems and the "cheats" are given in a resonable manner. Really like this and hope XElenea will keep translating. Though I did want to ask, how many chapters does the source have and is it completed?

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nostresspractice

Keep it up! I love this novel. Thank you for translating it! I really appreciate it. pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

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