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this was by far the most amazing story for harry potter i have had the pleasure of reading and i promise is worth it in the long run i simply cant express just how much i love it!
Good story so far~ ~~ Harry potter isn't friends with the like of Ron and Hermione.
This is a really good Harry Potter story. My only gripe is that the updates aren’t frequent enough to justify the admitedly short chapters that this book has. Causing me to reas the chapters most quickly whick makes it hard at times to remember past events that’ve happened in the story. There isn’t enough depth in each chapter as they usually centre around a single event, sometimes taking two chapters to do so, making the story seem shallow despite its very good writing because of this.
This is a really great fanfic. Looking forward to new chapters. I recommend reading it!
this was by far the most amazing story for harry potter i have had the pleasure of reading and i promise is worth it in the long run i simply cant express just how much i love it!
Good story so far~ ~~ Harry potter isn't friends with the like of Ron and Hermione.
This is a really good Harry Potter story. My only gripe is that the updates aren’t frequent enough to justify the admitedly short chapters that this book has. Causing me to reas the chapters most quickly whick makes it hard at times to remember past events that’ve happened in the story. There isn’t enough depth in each chapter as they usually centre around a single event, sometimes taking two chapters to do so, making the story seem shallow despite its very good writing because of this.
This is a really great fanfic. Looking forward to new chapters. I recommend reading it!