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Definitely written using A.I, also he got knocked out by Barry saying hi to him, woke up a week later at stra labs and suddenly he's a "hero" now named velocity, despite him not having ANY plans or aspirations to become one. there are several plot holes throughout the story (which is another telltale of AI).
author-sama, don't give so many details about everything and just get to the point with things since at this rate more than 100 chapters will pass and we will only be at the beginning of the story and in the end because of so many details we will not understand even half of the things that are happening in the story
Very nice story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It was really interesting for a while.I thought maybe maybe just once someone was gonna do the right thing. Not join the stupid flash team. A team that has so many members that it's ridiculous. And it was pretty good for a while. He didn't join the flash team.He made money so that he could live a nice life and then he made gadgets. So maybe he could even make his own suit if he wanted to be a hero. Maybe he doesn't want to be a hero. Maybe he wants to make military hardware for fighting meta humans for the cops. but no, he immediately joins the Flash team the second they introduce themselves.
Definitely written using A.I, also he got knocked out by Barry saying hi to him, woke up a week later at stra labs and suddenly he's a "hero" now named velocity, despite him not having ANY plans or aspirations to become one. there are several plot holes throughout the story (which is another telltale of AI).
author-sama, don't give so many details about everything and just get to the point with things since at this rate more than 100 chapters will pass and we will only be at the beginning of the story and in the end because of so many details we will not understand even half of the things that are happening in the story
Very nice story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It was really interesting for a while.I thought maybe maybe just once someone was gonna do the right thing. Not join the stupid flash team. A team that has so many members that it's ridiculous. And it was pretty good for a while. He didn't join the flash team.He made money so that he could live a nice life and then he made gadgets. So maybe he could even make his own suit if he wanted to be a hero. Maybe he doesn't want to be a hero. Maybe he wants to make military hardware for fighting meta humans for the cops. but no, he immediately joins the Flash team the second they introduce themselves.