Reviews of Persona: The Phantom Masquerade. by BonVoyage - Webnovel

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XxNeonWolf09xX

Haven’t used this app for very long but this story already makes downloading it worth it.

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1mth
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Pinguimxxcc

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Lonerbomber

I have alway been a fan of persona franchise Love the twist u add in the world it feel close to the actual story yet have slight differ on the color

5mth
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Pixham

I played Persona 5 and somehow decided to find a fanfic about this universe. And what was my surprise when I found such a gem, thank you very much to the author for all the positive emotions after reading, I'm waiting for the continuation

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Cigarrillo_Andante

This fic is one of the best I've ever read, it has extremly good quality of writing, it brings changes to an already quite well made history as it is of Persona 5, and the character interactions feels real for each of them, another thing I love is that the author is bringing different outcomes to a few characters that I've always hated how it ended, and made the MC have an actual impact in the world, in general this fic is one of the best you could try in ALL aspects I can think of. Lately is has been having a little trouble with the updating, but generally it is pretty frequent compsring it to most of other fics there are, 100% recommended.

7mth
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DaoistkEc4gg

Honestly this story is amazing not only is the plot good and release consistent but it's also enjoyable and funny at times.

8mth
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AJaxxjaA

The update is slow (js joking btw) pls update and can i be ur beta readers is there a link on discord? 5 star better the the prev fanfic betta

9mth
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Sin_of_sloth

simply one of the best fics i have ever had the pleasure of reading.

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Jobloss344

One of the best fics I read in a good while it has a freshness to it like the author really cares. Fallows the original with a lot of twists and clearly not scared to do there own spin on things and not to follow canon with miner changes as Radom oc from other series like many fics do.

9mth
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mad101
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personally I just wanted to throw my own two cents into this love the story I love the twist on the main character and his persona personally whenever I read a story I think they need to take a note from persona when it comes to character development and this I can say you done perfectly[img=update]

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Noe11
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Best Persona fanfic I've read. Though there are times where it's confusing whether the MC actually knows the entire plot of Royal or not because he keeps forgetting who some people are when they met but then once they joined MC already knows what they can do. Aside from that, I love the approach to the story on this. The romance is being built up instead of instant. There are believable reasons as to how the metaverse affects people and all the mini loopholes you can exploit from the games like healing all your injuries and body defects with Diarahan and also spending more times with your confidants since you're not limited to 2 actions per day. My one critic is the fact that the author doesn't follow the canon order of meeting confidants and the villains which bugs me because there are reasons why they need to be beaten and also recruited in order but I digress. Keep up the good work and kepp updating this wonderful story please!

9mth
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Csgod
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____________________________________________________________________This is one of the best stories I have ever read. ____________________________________________________________________

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WizzyTheWizard

Absolutely love this, I'm a huge fan of Persona 5 and it really gives similar vibes in the execution. Wasn't really expecting much since I somehow entered a 5 fic streak of fics that have potential but fail in either dialogue or translation but I was really surprised. It's actually making me want to read a P5xBNHA crossover fic that I found awhile back.

9mth
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SirDemiLich

First off, this is an outstanding persona fan fiction. Before finding this, I was tempted to write one myself, but this is better than anything I could put out. I am only on chapter 16, but It has a very interesting take on Joker, and the plot follows just closely enough to the original that you can see a more in depth look at cannon events, but not feel like it’s just a copy and paste of the persona 5 story. Now onto my complains, of which there are a few. First off, the pacing is breakneck, it is incredibly fast, the entire first 3 hours of the game is condensed into 5 chapters, and that speed leads to my next complaints, which is the characters. They are faithful to the original in terms of personality, but it feels like they good from just introducing their names, to suddenly being best friends. Ann and Ryuji are barely introduced, than are immediately shown the palace, and then by the next chapter they are all hanging out at the gun shop. It just has a very weird feeling, because they had barely had a conversation, and now are acting all buddy buddy. Aside from that though, this is a really good fanfic, 9/10 would recommend, just gotta get used to the whiplash from the pacing, I might leave a comment if it gets better.

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ScarletWolf_10_0240

Best book of this piece of media, props to the author for not only using this amazing world, but because his changes and ways of telling the story are just really interesting and fun to read.

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Giga_Weeb

Every now and then a fic comes along that takes from the source material, respects it, and makes it's own completely original standing next to the original. rarely but it happens. 6/5 stars easy.

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PsyLoRD

I finished the entire novel in 1day, that already should show you what I think about it. maybe a bit slow (for my taste) but that's a personal opinion.

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D_J_0151

I'm really enjoying this novel, the pace is excellent, I hope it doesn't end up abandoned like other novels that I liked, great work, author.

10mth
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Sunnnny
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A hidden gem. I found this being recommended to me; knowing that it’s a persona fic and how rare they are, it was only right that I took a gander. I’m glad to say that it’s exactly what I hoped for and then some. The only thing I wish for are more chapters; even then, the author seems to keep a good update schedule.

11mth
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Kono_Timoda

Been waiting for a persona fanfic and now its here. To my surprise it's not an op wishfulfilment/copy of the OG persona. The author is making his own story and from what can see the dialogues are well developed and natural to read. I don't have any issues picturing the characters and the immersion in it is great. Can't wait to see how the author changes the persona world and makes his own version of the game.

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Pinguimxxcc

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Chaar
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This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read, and I’ve read a lot. This is prob top 10.

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Danie123

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cafreine

it's very rare to find persona fic, and very good one too.. are these fic only include P5R? or maybe you can add some character from P3 and P4?

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1yr
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Pinguimxxcc

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RuberDF

So fa so good, the MC has an interesting twist in his personality and doesn’t have the usually “webnovel self insert” archetype where” HE MUST have all the girls NOW! and there is nothing else he must concentrate on!” Type and instead goes into Persona world with a little bit of hesitation and caution. I like the approach he had so far with the cast and the author isn’t copy paste the game plot into the story so I’m expecting great content in the future. Now, if only would the author consider romancing the demon Angel… xD

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ZCOOL_999

hasta ahora no he leido demasiado solo los primeros 10 capitulos pero con eso puedo decir que la historia wsta muy buena, me gusta su desarrollo y direccion. muy buen trabajo

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Sin_of_sloth

love it. It's different from other persona fics in its premise and has a really unique MC that I'm excited to see more of. Overall, I can't wait for more.

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Tchao707

Very interesting it is a very different take from other Persona 5 royal fanfic and the MC is very different from the original and very unique can wait to see what comes next and look forward to where the author takes the story.

1yr
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XxNeonWolf09xX

Haven’t used this app for very long but this story already makes downloading it worth it.

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1mth
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Pinguimxxcc

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Lonerbomber

I have alway been a fan of persona franchise Love the twist u add in the world it feel close to the actual story yet have slight differ on the color

5mth
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Pixham

I played Persona 5 and somehow decided to find a fanfic about this universe. And what was my surprise when I found such a gem, thank you very much to the author for all the positive emotions after reading, I'm waiting for the continuation

6mth
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Cigarrillo_Andante

This fic is one of the best I've ever read, it has extremly good quality of writing, it brings changes to an already quite well made history as it is of Persona 5, and the character interactions feels real for each of them, another thing I love is that the author is bringing different outcomes to a few characters that I've always hated how it ended, and made the MC have an actual impact in the world, in general this fic is one of the best you could try in ALL aspects I can think of. Lately is has been having a little trouble with the updating, but generally it is pretty frequent compsring it to most of other fics there are, 100% recommended.

7mth
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DaoistkEc4gg

Honestly this story is amazing not only is the plot good and release consistent but it's also enjoyable and funny at times.

8mth
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AJaxxjaA

The update is slow (js joking btw) pls update and can i be ur beta readers is there a link on discord? 5 star better the the prev fanfic betta

9mth
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Sin_of_sloth

simply one of the best fics i have ever had the pleasure of reading.

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9mth
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Jobloss344

One of the best fics I read in a good while it has a freshness to it like the author really cares. Fallows the original with a lot of twists and clearly not scared to do there own spin on things and not to follow canon with miner changes as Radom oc from other series like many fics do.

9mth
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mad101
LV 15 Badge

personally I just wanted to throw my own two cents into this love the story I love the twist on the main character and his persona personally whenever I read a story I think they need to take a note from persona when it comes to character development and this I can say you done perfectly[img=update]

9mth
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Noe11
LV 3 Badge

Best Persona fanfic I've read. Though there are times where it's confusing whether the MC actually knows the entire plot of Royal or not because he keeps forgetting who some people are when they met but then once they joined MC already knows what they can do. Aside from that, I love the approach to the story on this. The romance is being built up instead of instant. There are believable reasons as to how the metaverse affects people and all the mini loopholes you can exploit from the games like healing all your injuries and body defects with Diarahan and also spending more times with your confidants since you're not limited to 2 actions per day. My one critic is the fact that the author doesn't follow the canon order of meeting confidants and the villains which bugs me because there are reasons why they need to be beaten and also recruited in order but I digress. Keep up the good work and kepp updating this wonderful story please!

9mth
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Csgod
LV 1 Badge

____________________________________________________________________This is one of the best stories I have ever read. ____________________________________________________________________

9mth
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WizzyTheWizard

Absolutely love this, I'm a huge fan of Persona 5 and it really gives similar vibes in the execution. Wasn't really expecting much since I somehow entered a 5 fic streak of fics that have potential but fail in either dialogue or translation but I was really surprised. It's actually making me want to read a P5xBNHA crossover fic that I found awhile back.

9mth
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SirDemiLich

First off, this is an outstanding persona fan fiction. Before finding this, I was tempted to write one myself, but this is better than anything I could put out. I am only on chapter 16, but It has a very interesting take on Joker, and the plot follows just closely enough to the original that you can see a more in depth look at cannon events, but not feel like it’s just a copy and paste of the persona 5 story. Now onto my complains, of which there are a few. First off, the pacing is breakneck, it is incredibly fast, the entire first 3 hours of the game is condensed into 5 chapters, and that speed leads to my next complaints, which is the characters. They are faithful to the original in terms of personality, but it feels like they good from just introducing their names, to suddenly being best friends. Ann and Ryuji are barely introduced, than are immediately shown the palace, and then by the next chapter they are all hanging out at the gun shop. It just has a very weird feeling, because they had barely had a conversation, and now are acting all buddy buddy. Aside from that though, this is a really good fanfic, 9/10 would recommend, just gotta get used to the whiplash from the pacing, I might leave a comment if it gets better.

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ScarletWolf_10_0240

Best book of this piece of media, props to the author for not only using this amazing world, but because his changes and ways of telling the story are just really interesting and fun to read.

10mth
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Giga_Weeb

Every now and then a fic comes along that takes from the source material, respects it, and makes it's own completely original standing next to the original. rarely but it happens. 6/5 stars easy.

10mth
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PsyLoRD

I finished the entire novel in 1day, that already should show you what I think about it. maybe a bit slow (for my taste) but that's a personal opinion.

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D_J_0151

I'm really enjoying this novel, the pace is excellent, I hope it doesn't end up abandoned like other novels that I liked, great work, author.

10mth
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Sunnnny
LV 13 Badge

A hidden gem. I found this being recommended to me; knowing that it’s a persona fic and how rare they are, it was only right that I took a gander. I’m glad to say that it’s exactly what I hoped for and then some. The only thing I wish for are more chapters; even then, the author seems to keep a good update schedule.

11mth
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Kono_Timoda

Been waiting for a persona fanfic and now its here. To my surprise it's not an op wishfulfilment/copy of the OG persona. The author is making his own story and from what can see the dialogues are well developed and natural to read. I don't have any issues picturing the characters and the immersion in it is great. Can't wait to see how the author changes the persona world and makes his own version of the game.

11mth
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Pinguimxxcc

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Chaar
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This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read, and I’ve read a lot. This is prob top 10.

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Danie123

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12mth
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cafreine

it's very rare to find persona fic, and very good one too.. are these fic only include P5R? or maybe you can add some character from P3 and P4?

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1yr
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Pinguimxxcc

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RuberDF

So fa so good, the MC has an interesting twist in his personality and doesn’t have the usually “webnovel self insert” archetype where” HE MUST have all the girls NOW! and there is nothing else he must concentrate on!” Type and instead goes into Persona world with a little bit of hesitation and caution. I like the approach he had so far with the cast and the author isn’t copy paste the game plot into the story so I’m expecting great content in the future. Now, if only would the author consider romancing the demon Angel… xD

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1yr
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ZCOOL_999

hasta ahora no he leido demasiado solo los primeros 10 capitulos pero con eso puedo decir que la historia wsta muy buena, me gusta su desarrollo y direccion. muy buen trabajo

1yr
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Sin_of_sloth

love it. It's different from other persona fics in its premise and has a really unique MC that I'm excited to see more of. Overall, I can't wait for more.

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1yr
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Tchao707

Very interesting it is a very different take from other Persona 5 royal fanfic and the MC is very different from the original and very unique can wait to see what comes next and look forward to where the author takes the story.

1yr
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