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Good starting, I will read it in my free time. Not boring, but try to write open sentences, so this will help it make it more interesting, and, etc.
-I thought about writing a proper review. Last one was just me requesting for honest reviews.-This novel is basically a mix of fantasy, historical, action, and mystery genres.-There are 2 main characters. Male lead, Jaden and Female lead, Aliana.-It's not a story with an absurdly OP MC or the plot armor coming in cliché. -Actually, people who enjoy series where one mystery ends and another one starts from it's ending, will most likely come to enjoy this story.-I like developing characters step-by-step, so the story development will be at a slow pace. More like, medium pace with not much time skips.-I might be lacking skills here and there, but I will try to keep you (readers) entertained.
Shameless author review- I'm writing this story thinking you readers will enjoy it. I hope you honestly enjoy it. Please give honest reviews. I want to use it as experience to improve.
awesome in my opinion , everything about the story is amazing and I personally LOVE the details xd
Good starting, I will read it in my free time. Not boring, but try to write open sentences, so this will help it make it more interesting, and, etc.
-I thought about writing a proper review. Last one was just me requesting for honest reviews.-This novel is basically a mix of fantasy, historical, action, and mystery genres.-There are 2 main characters. Male lead, Jaden and Female lead, Aliana.-It's not a story with an absurdly OP MC or the plot armor coming in cliché. -Actually, people who enjoy series where one mystery ends and another one starts from it's ending, will most likely come to enjoy this story.-I like developing characters step-by-step, so the story development will be at a slow pace. More like, medium pace with not much time skips.-I might be lacking skills here and there, but I will try to keep you (readers) entertained.
Shameless author review- I'm writing this story thinking you readers will enjoy it. I hope you honestly enjoy it. Please give honest reviews. I want to use it as experience to improve.
awesome in my opinion , everything about the story is amazing and I personally LOVE the details xd