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this novel is pretty interesting so far. but i am really getting quite frustrated at ares arc(idk what it was called but i was around 240 chapters maybe). Author-san this is honest review and I am not liking whatever is going on right now. It might be important in some aspects as we have to improve chemistry with mc which 2nd heroine but it feels so dragged right now. It felt almost like arc 4 of Re: zero anime. I hope more interesting elements are coming soon. Also a question! Was luna's dad like abusing her and sexually harassing her at young age????? Or was he selling her some nude pics. idk the statement was too vague for my small brain to understand
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Mc is incredibly frustrating. He just ignores a woman trying to control his mind and make him her slave MULTIPLE times. Then he lets himself get dragged around instead of going to save his beloved. From ch 31 it takes another 15 chs before he even arrives at the island where she is being kept. I’ll come back with an updated review if I pick this up again as I can see the potential.
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I was honestly expecting a power drive action, romance and ascension type of stuff with overpowered tag...but it was somewhat that till around 150 chapters but when the ceo and school drama started I lost interest. Also when I read the latest chapter it was still somewhat stuck around mortal drama...it was good till it seemed like author lost his will to write. Probably will read after it gets completed... Still...good work author!
This novel made me certain that I have a voice in my head whenever I am reading. I don’t know if it’s a hobbit or a writing style of the author but Istg, he uses exclamation marks a log, like, a LOT I get that it probably doesn’t bother some people but man, my voice suddenly rising higher bothers me quite a bit, I don’t know if it gets better in recent chapters but I hope it does because the premise is pretty promising. Apart from the exclamation marks, the grammar is pretty good, the premise is interesting and I can see potential in this series.
please keep updating this novel.Hate to such a masterpiece being dropped.The concept is not new but u definitely made it better.The fight scenes are peak.Hope to see it being constantly updated ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
A refreshing read amidst a series of disappointing ones. From writing quality to world building, everything has been good so far. Especially the Fight scenes, it's one of those novels where you can actually imagine the fight sequence as you read on. This novel is a Hidden gem.
Author you have a great story, But I think you needed to expand the character more. Like the grandfather(James), Erit, Mark, and some others They needed some dev before the anima queen arc(the queen arc)
Good. Good. Good. Good.😊 It's a harem, but doesn't seem rushed or forced. I think there are two wives and they each get their own arc, character development and backstory. I like it.
Awesome book. I have no idea why it's not more popular. Make sure you read the author notes 😂
System? ✔️ Monsters? ✔️ Yandere waifu? ✔️ Superheros? ✔️ Smut? ✔️ DIVE straight into this, the world building and characters are great, especially KING and QUEEN. The novel itself is awesome, but ch 179 was truly peak. Instant revenge for idiots playing stupid games, and what sweet revenge it was.
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Loved the book so far! Idk how this book is so under viewed and under rated. I hope you keep writing it :)
Your story is very good but unfortunately I don't have the money to continue reading it🤣...................................Why does it take 140 words to comment🐸
Okay I like it picaso mhm ..............................................,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,. . .,.,.,,..,,.
Good story. I really love fist fights so it's refreshing to see a main character that uses his fists rather than a sword or flashy magic. I'll stick with you till the story ends! Thanks for not making it a harem, I hate those.
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Hello everyone and thank you for picking up my new story for your reading pleasure! This story will be a mix of romance, a lotta action, and system levelling. There will be boss fights, face slapping and complete domination! If you have any questions about the story then please don't hesitate to ask in the comment section below! I promise I don't bite... unless you want me to. P.S. I'm giving myself five stars just because. If you think I deserve it, then please leave a review!
Huge fan of this work. The fight scenes are some of the best on the platform. The characters are well developed and well written, including main, supporting, side, and antagonist characters. I e really felt the loss of almost every named character even when they are only around briefly. Story is also awesome and while the full mystery driving the story isn’t unveiled yet, I am still very impressed with how well done everything has been. MC is very cool, and I’ve never had to roll my eyes at his thoughts or actions. Even when he’s made a mistake it feels authentic to him. Finally, romance well done. Love slice of life moments showing happy times, it’s very gratifying to gain moments of joy after achieving difficult victories. Only complaint is I’d like more spicy scenes - usually not something I’m looking for in a work that’s not focused on that. However, the writer is good at these scenes, they understand power dynamics well, and could lean into more extreme and kinky aspects really well. I care about the romance and the kink and intensity makes sense for the romance that has developed so very well. Strong recommend to read it!
this novel is pretty interesting so far. but i am really getting quite frustrated at ares arc(idk what it was called but i was around 240 chapters maybe). Author-san this is honest review and I am not liking whatever is going on right now. It might be important in some aspects as we have to improve chemistry with mc which 2nd heroine but it feels so dragged right now. It felt almost like arc 4 of Re: zero anime. I hope more interesting elements are coming soon. Also a question! Was luna's dad like abusing her and sexually harassing her at young age????? Or was he selling her some nude pics. idk the statement was too vague for my small brain to understand
Reveal Spoiler Mc is incredibly frustrating. He just ignores a woman trying to control his mind and make him her slave MULTIPLE times. Then he lets himself get dragged around instead of going to save his beloved. From ch 31 it takes another 15 chs before he even arrives at the island where she is being kept. I’ll come back with an updated review if I pick this up again as I can see the potential.
Reveal Spoiler I was honestly expecting a power drive action, romance and ascension type of stuff with overpowered tag...but it was somewhat that till around 150 chapters but when the ceo and school drama started I lost interest. Also when I read the latest chapter it was still somewhat stuck around mortal drama...it was good till it seemed like author lost his will to write. Probably will read after it gets completed... Still...good work author!
This novel made me certain that I have a voice in my head whenever I am reading. I don’t know if it’s a hobbit or a writing style of the author but Istg, he uses exclamation marks a log, like, a LOT I get that it probably doesn’t bother some people but man, my voice suddenly rising higher bothers me quite a bit, I don’t know if it gets better in recent chapters but I hope it does because the premise is pretty promising. Apart from the exclamation marks, the grammar is pretty good, the premise is interesting and I can see potential in this series.
please keep updating this novel.Hate to such a masterpiece being dropped.The concept is not new but u definitely made it better.The fight scenes are peak.Hope to see it being constantly updated ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
A refreshing read amidst a series of disappointing ones. From writing quality to world building, everything has been good so far. Especially the Fight scenes, it's one of those novels where you can actually imagine the fight sequence as you read on. This novel is a Hidden gem.
Author you have a great story, But I think you needed to expand the character more. Like the grandfather(James), Erit, Mark, and some others They needed some dev before the anima queen arc(the queen arc)
Good. Good. Good. Good.😊 It's a harem, but doesn't seem rushed or forced. I think there are two wives and they each get their own arc, character development and backstory. I like it.
Awesome book. I have no idea why it's not more popular. Make sure you read the author notes 😂
System? ✔️ Monsters? ✔️ Yandere waifu? ✔️ Superheros? ✔️ Smut? ✔️ DIVE straight into this, the world building and characters are great, especially KING and QUEEN. The novel itself is awesome, but ch 179 was truly peak. Instant revenge for idiots playing stupid games, and what sweet revenge it was.
Reveal Spoiler Loved the book so far! Idk how this book is so under viewed and under rated. I hope you keep writing it :)
Your story is very good but unfortunately I don't have the money to continue reading it🤣...................................Why does it take 140 words to comment🐸
Okay I like it picaso mhm ..............................................,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,. . .,.,.,,..,,.
Good story. I really love fist fights so it's refreshing to see a main character that uses his fists rather than a sword or flashy magic. I'll stick with you till the story ends! Thanks for not making it a harem, I hate those.
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Hello everyone and thank you for picking up my new story for your reading pleasure! This story will be a mix of romance, a lotta action, and system levelling. There will be boss fights, face slapping and complete domination! If you have any questions about the story then please don't hesitate to ask in the comment section below! I promise I don't bite... unless you want me to. P.S. I'm giving myself five stars just because. If you think I deserve it, then please leave a review!
Huge fan of this work. The fight scenes are some of the best on the platform. The characters are well developed and well written, including main, supporting, side, and antagonist characters. I e really felt the loss of almost every named character even when they are only around briefly. Story is also awesome and while the full mystery driving the story isn’t unveiled yet, I am still very impressed with how well done everything has been. MC is very cool, and I’ve never had to roll my eyes at his thoughts or actions. Even when he’s made a mistake it feels authentic to him. Finally, romance well done. Love slice of life moments showing happy times, it’s very gratifying to gain moments of joy after achieving difficult victories. Only complaint is I’d like more spicy scenes - usually not something I’m looking for in a work that’s not focused on that. However, the writer is good at these scenes, they understand power dynamics well, and could lean into more extreme and kinky aspects really well. I care about the romance and the kink and intensity makes sense for the romance that has developed so very well. Strong recommend to read it!