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I like your storytelling it's very interesting to listen to and Great job
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I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this!
i love this story and hope you continue to make it. please don't drop it.
I am going to ignore World background due to this being a Fanfic. There are numerous grammatical errors throughout the fic, and the pacing is far too quick to establish any characterization. This leads to the ficfeeling like it was written by a middle schooler.
Its above average marvel fic. Be warned, its slow paced and mc have nocheat except vibration superpower which is not anything fancy. Alot of chapter or sliceoflife type developement and the world seem to be a mix og mcu and comic with mutants around.
The story overall is pretty interesting, just the idea of a fem mc in Mcu instead of a h*rny or heartless male mc is pretty refreshing. Although the Mc could use some work her personality is kinda hard to stomach, the mc is a gender-bend chinese man, and the first few chapters emphasize how much weaker women are and other stuff like most women having a bad sense of direction, until she gets the quake power up + enhanced physical capabilities, and I don't know if anyone else noticed, but there seems to be a few racist implications that gets brushed off as humor, and brain deadening stuff like being able to be as good as a surgeon with only first-aid knowledge and novel info, we know how unreliable that stuff is. But that's not the publisher fault tho they are obviously working hard to translate this into something readable. Don't get me wrong the story IS good as long as you don't use your brain and argue with the inconsistencies and dumb knowledge, and the Mc's hardly palatable personality.
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Your translation is incredible compared to the mtl version, I wish you luck and I hope you don't give up.......................... ..............................................................
one of the best and the most unique marvel fanfaction im looking forward to reading more chapter
Can anyone recommend novels similar to this? with a female protagonist. ............................................................................................................................
Yo, I've never seen a Marvel fanfic about Daisy/Quake before it's always the other mainstream heroes that are self inserted or something! Automatic 5 stars for that. Please don't drop!
I quite like this story it was translated for 18-19 chapters when I first read it but was not continued hope you fine tune this
One of the best Fanfics I've ever read, don't leave it halfway brother, someone had already translated it up to chapter 109 and left it there 5 months ago, the translation is of quality, you can use what I left and continue from there
where can I find the original? ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
one of the best Chinese fanfics, it has no prejudice and nationalism. It has a great story and it's even sad to see the cyclops, NTR, crazy, I like the female protagonists and I like what the protagonist becomes.
the story is great, the development of Daisy was great not too fast or slow and her proactive approach to some problems is great. still waiting to know which power structure she got from eternal genes. blending of xmen and mcu is much appreciated
I like your storytelling it's very interesting to listen to and Great job
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Reveal Spoiler I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this! I'm really enjoying this!
i love this story and hope you continue to make it. please don't drop it.
I am going to ignore World background due to this being a Fanfic. There are numerous grammatical errors throughout the fic, and the pacing is far too quick to establish any characterization. This leads to the ficfeeling like it was written by a middle schooler.
Its above average marvel fic. Be warned, its slow paced and mc have nocheat except vibration superpower which is not anything fancy. Alot of chapter or sliceoflife type developement and the world seem to be a mix og mcu and comic with mutants around.
The story overall is pretty interesting, just the idea of a fem mc in Mcu instead of a h*rny or heartless male mc is pretty refreshing. Although the Mc could use some work her personality is kinda hard to stomach, the mc is a gender-bend chinese man, and the first few chapters emphasize how much weaker women are and other stuff like most women having a bad sense of direction, until she gets the quake power up + enhanced physical capabilities, and I don't know if anyone else noticed, but there seems to be a few racist implications that gets brushed off as humor, and brain deadening stuff like being able to be as good as a surgeon with only first-aid knowledge and novel info, we know how unreliable that stuff is. But that's not the publisher fault tho they are obviously working hard to translate this into something readable. Don't get me wrong the story IS good as long as you don't use your brain and argue with the inconsistencies and dumb knowledge, and the Mc's hardly palatable personality.
Reveal Spoiler Your translation is incredible compared to the mtl version, I wish you luck and I hope you don't give up.......................... ..............................................................
one of the best and the most unique marvel fanfaction im looking forward to reading more chapter
Can anyone recommend novels similar to this? with a female protagonist. ............................................................................................................................
Yo, I've never seen a Marvel fanfic about Daisy/Quake before it's always the other mainstream heroes that are self inserted or something! Automatic 5 stars for that. Please don't drop!
I quite like this story it was translated for 18-19 chapters when I first read it but was not continued hope you fine tune this
One of the best Fanfics I've ever read, don't leave it halfway brother, someone had already translated it up to chapter 109 and left it there 5 months ago, the translation is of quality, you can use what I left and continue from there
where can I find the original? ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
one of the best Chinese fanfics, it has no prejudice and nationalism. It has a great story and it's even sad to see the cyclops, NTR, crazy, I like the female protagonists and I like what the protagonist becomes.
the story is great, the development of Daisy was great not too fast or slow and her proactive approach to some problems is great. still waiting to know which power structure she got from eternal genes. blending of xmen and mcu is much appreciated